Reznas Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 Hey guys! This is my entry for the Comics Contest #1. It's called CLPD: Case #51. I hope you enjoy it!-Page 1--Page 2-Comments and Constructive Criticism is appreciated! -Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 I saw this from my kindlefire and I couldn't see the text well, but I could still see the great job you did! My favorite part had to be the part when the arm with the knife came out.But I have a question about that: was the murderer guy laying down or was he in a hole? Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted March 3, 2012 Author Share Posted March 3, 2012 I saw this from my kindlefire and I couldn't see the text well, but I could still see the great job you did! My favorite part had to be the part when the arm with the knife came out.But I have a question about that: was the murderer guy laying down or was he in a hole?Thanks man! Yeah, that's a pretty thrilling part. He was laying down behind the bench and when the time was right, he killed the guy sitting down. Thanks again for the feedback!-Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakaru Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 Interesting. In light of this debate, I'm glad to see a decently composed and finished entry in a classic murder-mystery format. I'm dropping all my biases against sprite comics for the time being to keep art direction from being the main catalyst in my voting decision.That said, I was very sad to see Wind's text nearly unreadable in the second half of the last page. I had to zoom in and squint to see the text at all, which really hindered the flow of the story for me.Regardless, the rest of the entry went well and was easy to follow. Best of luck in the polls! Quote 「どこに行けばいいんだ・・・」「タ・コロ村はもうおしまいだ・・・」タ・コロ村の村人達 hey it's Studio Comic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted March 4, 2012 Author Share Posted March 4, 2012 Interesting. In light of this debate, I'm glad to see a decently composed and finished entry in a classic murder-mystery format. I'm dropping all my biases against sprite comics for the time being to keep art direction from being the main catalyst in my voting decision.That said, I was very sad to see Wind's text nearly unreadable in the second half of the last page. I had to zoom in and squint to see the text at all, which really hindered the flow of the story for me.Regardless, the rest of the entry went well and was easy to follow. Best of luck in the polls!Thanks. A lot of my inspiration was from classic murder-mystery shows; well actually, they're more modern than classic, but basically it's the same idea. Anyways, mystery novels, TV shows, and other things like them are really good to look at when making a mystery. I used a few to get some ideas and such.Yeah, I noticed that as well. I would have changed it, but I don't have the best eye-sight, so I thought that it would be easier for most members to see than for me. Plus my parents didn't have much trouble reading it. But at least it's actually readable when you look a bit closer. Sorry for the inconvenience. I'll remember to keep my text-outline color a bit lighter in some of my next comics.Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Also thank you for the encouragement!-Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted March 6, 2012 Share Posted March 6, 2012 This one was a pretty decent mystery. It had a very professional police feel to it and that made for a fun story to follow. This one didn't end up getting my vote (but, hey, don't worry your entry still has more votes than mine. XD), but it's still a nice comic. Glad to see some sprite comics in the contest, and good luck. ^^ Quote Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted March 6, 2012 Author Share Posted March 6, 2012 This one was a pretty decent mystery. It had a very professional police feel to it and that made for a fun story to follow. This one didn't end up getting my vote (but, hey, don't worry your entry still has more votes than mine. XD), but it's still a nice comic. Glad to see some sprite comics in the contest, and good luck. ^^Thanks! Yeah, it's all right. I wasn't expecting to get a lot of votes anyways. I just did it to have a fun experience. Of course, I wouldn't mind winning. Thanks again for the feedback!-Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 I got to reading this on my computer, so I could read the text. And the Miru dude is -Windrider-?!But who did it? Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted March 25, 2012 Author Share Posted March 25, 2012 I got to reading this on my computer, so I could read the text. And the Miru dude is -Windrider-?!But who did it?Yes, you are right indeed. He is Windrider. And actually, I never revealed who the murderer was. I just decided to leave you guys in suspense. -Rez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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