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Here's a moc of my back from 2009 which I finally got around to posting. Without further delay, I introduce my custom fire tribe Glatorian, Axen.axen_1.jpg Click here for gallery http://www.brickshel...ry.cgi?f=486081(when public) Back veiw: http://www.brickshel...Axen/axen_2.jpg Aiming Thornax Launcher: http://www.brickshel...Axen/axen_3.jpg With Malum: http://www.brickshel...Axen/axen_4.jpg Fighting Malum: http://www.brickshel...Axen/axen_5.jpg I have no back-story for him, but if I can think of one, I'll put one up.

[size=4][color=#FF0000][color=#000000]Formerly known as ROTF Devastator[/color][/color][/size]
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[img]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/vakama18/Stuff/shockwave_sig.jpg[/img][img]http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Nrdy/Kittiez/W1/tabby.png[/img]

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Looks like the Folders aint Publick yet.Good work! The Costom Torso looks very well made,The Ball joint armour looks Very good. The arms look good,But I bet they arent Great for Posing,BTW the Posing on the Right arm looks wierd :alert: but the Left arm looks awesome.You did a good kob on the legs,There isnt much to do with those kind of legs,But you puled it off nicly. The axe looks good,But I think The Launcher is a bit Boring. (My Opinion) The Helmet looks Great on him,Fits nicly,But Maybe the Head could have bin another colour...Hm...I dont know.Over all,Awesome Lookin MoC! Good job! :biggrin: Wow,This is My longest Post since the Forums Returned :lol: Also the first time I use the Word MoC since they came Back :)

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As stated above, the custom torso is extremely intricate and well done, satisfying proportions. The arms seem a little odd to me. The glatorian hands look a little large in proportion to the forearms, but I suppose there's little choice in that matter. As a personal preference I'd also suggest changing the helmet, I feel Raanu's somehow doesn't look right...

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Thanks for the comments, the custom torso took awhile to design, mainly trying to make it look good. About the arms, in order for me to make them look proportionate to the body and legs, those were the only parts I could use, I could had made custom arms, but that would had screwed up the color scheme. Also Raanu's helmet was the only one I had free that matched, color wise.

[size=4][color=#FF0000][color=#000000]Formerly known as ROTF Devastator[/color][/color][/size]
Kittiez sigpet made by Mr Nebby
[img]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/vakama18/Stuff/shockwave_sig.jpg[/img][img]http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Nrdy/Kittiez/W1/tabby.png[/img]

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Two things:1. Have you tried flipping the helmet around, exposing more of the face? That's what I always try with new masks to see if they'll work for a generic character.2. Why do you have the Hordika necks sticking out of his shoulders? I would maybe attach something there. Overall a very well made MOC, but a couple of tweaks could make it so much more. Rivin

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Two things: 1. Have you tried flipping the helmet around, exposing more of the face? That's what I always try with new masks to see if they'll work for a generic character.2. Why do you have the Hordika necks sticking out of his shoulders? I would maybe attach something there. Overall a very well made MOC, but a couple of tweaks could make it so much more. Rivin

1. I have before, didn't like the look. 2. I had them holding on to shoulder pads for Axen when I first builded him.

Quite good, particularly the chest build and the color layering (silver to grey to dark red to yellow). Now, the arm joints have much to be desired (articulation). However, it looks great. a_peace.png

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About the arms, in order for me to make them look proportionate to the body and legs, those were the only parts I could use, I could had made custom arms, but that would had screwed up the color scheme.

Thanks for the comments.

[size=4][color=#FF0000][color=#000000]Formerly known as ROTF Devastator[/color][/color][/size]
Kittiez sigpet made by Mr Nebby
[img]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/vakama18/Stuff/shockwave_sig.jpg[/img][img]http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Nrdy/Kittiez/W1/tabby.png[/img]

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