Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted March 5, 2012 Share Posted March 5, 2012 (edited) Yume IslandAbout the comic: This is based off of my Epic Dare to Dream and focuses on one of the main characters, a ko-matoran named Tetak. I always wrote with a cryptic style, so I decided to give the contest a try (though I seriously doubt it'll get far. There's some pretty fierce competition in terms of both artwork and stories out there).It didn't turn out anywhere near as well as I'd hoped, but I still got it all done in time for the contest. Only one page, though, and it's a bit rushed. XPComments and Criticism are very much appreciated! ^^ Edited March 5, 2012 by Tekulo: Toa of Gales Quote Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted March 5, 2012 Share Posted March 5, 2012 Mysterious, indeed... I like it a lot. It has an atmosphere. Especially in the beginning. In terms of story, it's well-executed.Although the last panel sligtly 'breaks' it. Not in a bad way, not at all. (let's call it a huuuuge twist ^^) Although I'm not sure if that 'dying' was meant as in literally dying or not.Overall, it's a nice comic, and I wish you good luck for CC1! Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Strange. But I like where this is going. Making any more?My favorite part was the "dying to meet you" part! That was epic! Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knave Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 "Yume" is Japanese for "Dream." I don't know if you aware of that or not, though it may seem you are. Good choice of name, I suppose, if something surreal happens. Quote "An old silent pond... A frog jumps into the pond, splash! Silence again." -Matsuo Batsho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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