Edited by Paleo, Oct 09 2012 - 05:41 PM.
Posted Oct 09 2012 - 05:41 PM
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Posted Oct 11 2012 - 06:18 PM
Maldro wields two frisbees. He has no kinetic control over them, just throws them and retrieves them eventually.Love the new chapter. The balance between stationary parts and action parts is PERFECT, and I love the "prophecy". Plus, the pun was great . Also, I found it a little confusing that they couldn't see with the fire put out, but then I understood it was nighttime. Would've been nice to state that beforehand though.
Oh and Paleo, can you give details as to how Maldro's weapons work?
Edited by Paleo, Oct 11 2012 - 06:18 PM.
Posted Oct 11 2012 - 07:03 PM
I found it a little confusing that they couldn't see with the fire put out, but then I understood it was nighttime. Would've been nice to state that beforehand though.
There was, predictably, no response from the dusky sky.
Edited by Sumiki, Oct 11 2012 - 07:04 PM.
Posted Oct 12 2012 - 05:36 PM
I could probably have done that, but I didn't want it to come off as an unnecessary detail. Plus, I didn't think bonfires were lit during the daytime very often.Also: another new chapter, two days in a row! (I'm on a roll now.) Plot threads continue, but look for some old ones to get tied in with the next few chapters.
Still, it could've been a little clearer. Maybe talking about shadows or the orange light?
Posted Oct 12 2012 - 10:31 PM
Posted Oct 13 2012 - 06:31 AM
I think Sumiki just enjoys messing with our heads.
However, it would be nice to have more scenes featuring the mysterious controller, as opposed to more and more strange occurrences.
Posted Oct 13 2012 - 03:05 PM
Sumiki…is on a roll.Edit adding content :Also, I can't tell what is a reference and what is just a joke in this. You do such a good job of blending the references in.Plus, it needs more puns.
(I'm on a roll now.)
Edited by Paleo, Oct 13 2012 - 08:13 PM.
Posted Oct 13 2012 - 07:45 PM
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