Voxumo Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 (edited) Alright every one i want you too know that this is my first attempt at a comic.series so please understand it may not be the best comic series but heck i'm trying. first off i will introduce the castwell that is my cast and my self-moc is also the main character in the form of a matoranAnd here is my guest stars[*]COMIC 1 [*]COMIC 2 [*]COMIC 3 In this comic Malignus appears as a guest star [*]COMIC 4 This one is to commemorate my 600th postwell i hope everyone likes them and comments would be appreciated. thanks Edited March 27, 2012 by Voxumo The Frozen One Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 Lol. The first was good, similar to an idea a friend once had but never perfected. (Your version being perfected) And it's fine that your first comic was a trial comic, mine was too.Second comic: Even better, every comic seems funnier with a villain.Downside: MAKE THE TEXT BIGGER. I could barely read what they were saying, especially Nukarno. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted March 10, 2012 Author Share Posted March 10, 2012 Lol. The first was good, similar to an idea a friend once had but never perfected. (Your version being perfected) And it's fine that your first comic was a trial comic, mine was too.Second comic: Even better, every comic seems funnier with a villain.Downside: MAKE THE TEXT BIGGER. I could barely read what they were saying, especially Nukarno.Ok thank you very much for your suggestions and next time i will make the text larger ok Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenebrae Invictus Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 (edited) The text needs to be fairly larger, and keep all those pre-sprited objects like the TV and bookshelf all in one perspective. If you can only the the front, top and right side of the bookshelf you have to see the front, top and right side of the TV too, not the front, top and left side. Edited March 10, 2012 by Tenebrae Invictus Quote Up, down, turn around, please don't let me hit the ground Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 these are quite funny. however, as the previous comments have done so before me, i'd advise enlarging the text and changing the tv viewing angle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 LOL. Pizza can defeat anything! Nice job once again, wasn't expecting another comic to be up this fast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted March 11, 2012 Author Share Posted March 11, 2012 LOL. Pizza can defeat anything! Nice job once again, wasn't expecting another comic to be up this fast.well when it's like -40*F outside you have alot of time on your hands. and thank you very much and i'm glad you liked this one. Was it easier to read what they were saying this time? Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Yes, much easier. Reading the words felt natural this time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted March 13, 2012 Share Posted March 13, 2012 I concur with TNG. Now i don't have to squint to read what theyr'e saying (although part of it was because of my bad eyesight.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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