AkakuBen Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 I've had this MOC sitting around in various forms for a couple of weeks now. Upon rejoining the BZPRPG, I decided Vacir (my Toa of Plasma) fit the MOC well. Sorry for the low quality; my laptop's webcam, while better than the alternative (my cell phone... ugh!), isn't exactly HD...Combat-Ready Pose Stoic Pose I'm too lazy to do it myself, but Vacir's profile is linked to in my sig. Of course, I don't need critique on his character, just his looks :)Constructive Criticism or Destructive Compliments are welcome... wait... Anyway, enjoy! And thanks in advance for the feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 His unique structure fascinates me. He looks cute, too. However, his chest is tiny compared to the rest of him. Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elrond of Rivendell Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 Looks good, but I'd say that the Inika shoulder armour is a little big for his shins. Make it something else, and you'll be good. I'd suggest Inika upper leg armour.-Bane Quote Gentlemen, it's time to spread the word. And the word is: Panic life is not a question of how long we live, but what we do with the life we haveBZRPG profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 wow i love the color combo. the arms are a very unique build. the Weapon is simple but perfect for him.I'm glad to see somebody using a kanohi hau. the legs are great.my only complaint is the actual abdomen it is just to thin.I give it a 7.5/10 Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkakuBen Posted March 14, 2012 Author Share Posted March 14, 2012 (edited) Thanks to all,The torso is small on purpose; I'm better with limbs than bodies, and I like the way the proportions look.And I think you mean Kiril/Kualsi, not Hau... The original version actually had a grey Hau (From the Ussanui), but then I figured that every 5th or 6th MOC on this site has a Hau, so I changed it to Dekar's mask, which is shaped like Dume's, which is shaped like Norik's...The Inika shoulder armor was a last-minute addition... one of those things where you try to replace one piece and end up reconstructing the entire lower leg I here's a picture of what he looked like this morning, before I changed him:You'll also notice the abundance of red and blue pins... yikes! Edited March 14, 2012 by Akaku94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 Thanks to all,The torso is small on purpose; I'm better with limbs than bodies, and I like the way the proportions look.And I think you mean Kiril/Kualsi, not Hau... The original version actually had a grey Hau (From the Ussanui), but then I figured that every 5th or 6th MOC on this site has a Hau, so I changed it to Dekar's mask, which is shaped like Dume's, which is shaped like Norik's...The Inika shoulder armor was a last-minute addition... one of those things where you try to replace one piece and end up reconstructing the entire lower leg I here's a picture of what he looked like this morning, before I changed him:You'll also notice the abundance of red and blue pins... yikes!i don't know i think i like the before version better for the legs. and ya i mean the dekar's mask Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkakuBen Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 My biggest beef with my last version were the two Toa Hordika Upper Leg Armor pieces on the lower leg; the only silver pieces besides the staff. I only had one pair of black ones, so I tried to substitute black Inika upper leg armor or the like in it's place, and ended up with the version I have now. To be honest, I like the proportions the legs have overall. Maybe it's because I played with a lot of Transformers and Rescue Heroes too when I was little :PMy next MOC will be much leaner... y'know, probably... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dralcax Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 The lower legs are extremely bulky, while the torso is skinny and way too small. It just looks strange. Try slimming down the legs and completely changing the torso. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Genris Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 This is a very interesting and unique moc. It is very original. It could use a bit more bulk on the torso, but other than that it looks really good. 8/10 from me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkakuBen Posted March 16, 2012 Author Share Posted March 16, 2012 I'm working on a new torso design, but I may use it on my next MOC I have in mind Vacir's was loosely based on Kiina's, so it will require a near-total reworking in order to bulk it up without looking out of place...Challenge Accepted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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