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#1 Offline Akaku94

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 02:00 PM

I've had this MOC sitting around in various forms for a couple of weeks now. Upon rejoining the BZPRPG, I decided Vacir (my Toa of Plasma) fit the MOC well. Sorry for the low quality; my laptop's webcam, while better than the alternative (my cell phone... ugh!), isn't exactly HD...Combat-Ready Pose :PPosted ImageStoic Pose :PPosted ImageI'm too lazy to do it myself, but Vacir's profile is linked to in my sig. Of course, I don't need critique on his character, just his looks :)Constructive Criticism or Destructive Compliments are welcome... wait... Anyway, enjoy! And thanks in advance for the feedback.
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#2 Offline Sybre the Mental

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 02:16 PM

His unique structure fascinates me. He looks cute, too. However, his chest is tiny compared to the rest of him.
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#3 Offline Elrond of Rivendell

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 02:22 PM

Looks good, but I'd say that the Inika shoulder armour is a little big for his shins. Make it something else, and you'll be good. I'd suggest Inika upper leg armour.-Bane
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#4 Online Voxumo

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 03:23 PM

wow i love the color combo. the arms are a very unique build. the Weapon is simple but perfect for him.I'm glad to see somebody using a kanohi hau. the legs are great.my only complaint is the actual abdomen it is just to thin.I give it a 7.5/10
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#5 Offline Akaku94

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 03:42 PM

Thanks to all,The torso is small on purpose; I'm better with limbs than bodies, and I like the way the proportions look.And I think you mean Kiril/Kualsi, not Hau... The original version actually had a grey Hau (From the Ussanui), but then I figured that every 5th or 6th MOC on this site has a Hau, so I changed it to Dekar's mask, which is shaped like Dume's, which is shaped like Norik's...The Inika shoulder armor was a last-minute addition... one of those things where you try to replace one piece and end up reconstructing the entire lower leg :P I here's a picture of what he looked like this morning, before I changed him:Posted ImageYou'll also notice the abundance of red and blue pins... yikes!

Edited by Akaku94, Mar 14 2012 - 03:44 PM.

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#6 Online Voxumo

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 04:02 PM

Thanks to all,The torso is small on purpose; I'm better with limbs than bodies, and I like the way the proportions look.And I think you mean Kiril/Kualsi, not Hau... The original version actually had a grey Hau (From the Ussanui), but then I figured that every 5th or 6th MOC on this site has a Hau, so I changed it to Dekar's mask, which is shaped like Dume's, which is shaped like Norik's...The Inika shoulder armor was a last-minute addition... one of those things where you try to replace one piece and end up reconstructing the entire lower leg :P I here's a picture of what he looked like this morning, before I changed him:Posted ImageYou'll also notice the abundance of red and blue pins... yikes!

i don't know i think i like the before version better for the legs. and ya i mean the dekar's mask

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#7 Offline Akaku94

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Posted Mar 14 2012 - 07:57 PM

My biggest beef with my last version were the two Toa Hordika Upper Leg Armor pieces on the lower leg; the only silver pieces besides the staff. I only had one pair of black ones, so I tried to substitute black Inika upper leg armor or the like in it's place, and ended up with the version I have now. To be honest, I like the proportions the legs have overall. Maybe it's because I played with a lot of Transformers and Rescue Heroes too when I was little :PMy next MOC will be much leaner... y'know, probably...
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Posted Mar 15 2012 - 03:31 PM

The lower legs are extremely bulky, while the torso is skinny and way too small. It just looks strange. Try slimming down the legs and completely changing the torso.
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Posted Mar 15 2012 - 07:05 PM

This is a very interesting and unique moc. It is very original. It could use a bit more bulk on the torso, but other than that it looks really good. 8/10 from me!
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Posted Mar 15 2012 - 08:21 PM

I'm working on a new torso design, but I may use it on my next MOC I have in mind :P Vacir's was loosely based on Kiina's, so it will require a near-total reworking in order to bulk it up without looking out of place...Challenge Accepted.
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