Axilus Prime Posted May 20, 2012 Share Posted May 20, 2012 You still haven't answered my questions. I'll read and review Comic 66 when you do. REad my post carefully, there are a lot of questions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 20, 2012 Author Share Posted May 20, 2012 You still haven't answered my questions. I'll read and review Comic 66 when you do. REad my post carefully, there are a lot of questions.The plot is that they have just entered the base of the enemy and their goal is to find the Olisi. The villain came from the enemy base and were made by the Matoran makuta. The big bad guy is Matoran Makuta Teridax 1.0. And the Bizzaros stay in there dimension waiting for the right time to strike. I plan making a few comics with them be fore they do so. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted May 20, 2012 Share Posted May 20, 2012 That fixed it, thanks, now, ON TO THE COMIC!Matoran Rahkshi Rahkshi? Just like Matoran Piraka Skakdi, that's funny due to being ridiculously redundant.Classic cartoonish fall, eh? Don't do that one too much. BZP coming back? You already made a comic about that.Overall not your best work. 5/10. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 20, 2012 Author Share Posted May 20, 2012 That fixed it, thanks, now, ON TO THE COMIC!Matoran Rahkshi Rahkshi? Just like Matoran Piraka Skakdi, that's funny due to being ridiculously redundant.Classic cartoonish fall, eh? Don't do that one too much.BZP coming back? You already made a comic about that.Overall not your best work. 5/10.No I did not do a second one yet. I normally don't do the cartoon falls but, yes I was a little desperate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 COMIC 67 is up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted May 21, 2012 Share Posted May 21, 2012 And thus more strange occurences in the Bizarro Dimension. TIP: Only invert the colors in the panel, and do it before adding text. That makes text clearer and the title not inverted. This is accomplished with the box select tool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 And thus more strange occurences in the Bizarro Dimension. TIP: Only invert the colors in the panel, and do it before adding text. That makes text clearer and the title not inverted. This is accomplished with the box select tool.I know, but the Bizzaros would sue me if I did that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 23, 2012 Author Share Posted May 23, 2012 COMIC 68 is up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 Uh oh. We're in for it now LOL.Seems Out of Character for Soran to do something like that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 24, 2012 Author Share Posted May 24, 2012 Uh oh. We're in for it now LOL.Seems Out of Character for Soran to do something like that... Keep in mind that comic Soran didn't want to do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 27, 2012 Author Share Posted May 27, 2012 Comic 69 is up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted May 27, 2012 Share Posted May 27, 2012 Orange juice melted my innerds once.And don't use the lightning gag in every single comic. Just sayin'. Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 27, 2012 Author Share Posted May 27, 2012 Orange juice melted my innerds once.And don't use the lightning gag in every single comic. Just sayin'.I rarely use the noobish lightning joke.Glad you like the comic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted May 27, 2012 Share Posted May 27, 2012 thats me using weather control Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 Finally, the plot moves forward! Oops, judged by the title. Ok, so he kills some freaks with acid that I assume he vomited...quite similar to Stabbington's vomit tactic. Are you absolutely sure you're not ripping me off there? And then noobish lightning. Not a good running joke. Wasn't even funny the first time. This is actually one of the least funny comics you've made, sorry. The plot didn't move forward at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 28, 2012 Author Share Posted May 28, 2012 thats me using weather controlAnd now you have weather control.....what a surprise....... also you get to fight [insert spoiler here] in my comic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 COMIC 70: An Apology and its smaller size is up! Yes now links to the comic will be put in the post! YAY! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted May 30, 2012 Share Posted May 30, 2012 Lol, short but random. Breaking the fourth wall always has grave consequences...Nice, putting links in the post. It's far more convenient. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 30, 2012 Author Share Posted May 30, 2012 Lol, short but random. Breaking the fourth wall always has grave consequences...Nice, putting links in the post. It's far more convenient.Yeah it waaaaay more convenient....and yes random it was.Glad you liked the comic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Happy Birthday, TPH. Now I know I was able to say that on time in COT (Yay, I made a birthday topic, woohoo.), but I'm saying it again, late, because I need to give you your belated present! So, here it is, the Fan Comic!Enjoy! I know I presented it in a drastically different format, but that just makes it easier to read. Go ahead and check it out, I promise it won't eat you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 2, 2012 Author Share Posted June 2, 2012 (edited) Happy Birthday, TPH. Now I know I was able to say that on time in COT (Yay, I made a birthday topic, woohoo.), but I'm saying it again, late, because I need to give you your belated present! So, here it is, the Fan Comic!Enjoy! I know I presented it in a drastically different format, but that just makes it easier to read. Go ahead and check it out, I promise it won't eat you.VERY different format still the comic was great! Thanks! And you made the Nui Jaga attack Soran thank you.....no offence Soran....... Edited June 2, 2012 by TOA PIRAKA HAKANN 3.0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 (edited) Hello. I mean in no way to offend anyone here, but the main topic seems to be quite disorganized.Is there any way to clean it up?I know that you put up the table of contents, but the amount of spacing between each item and having everything be the same color makes it hard to, well, look through. Edited June 8, 2012 by Chath Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 Hello. I mean in no way to offend anyone here, but the main topic seems to be quite disorganized.Is there any way to clean it up?I know that you put up the table of contents, but the amount of spacing between each item and having everything be the same color makes it hard to, well, look through.....uhhhh this is a little confusing I will try different colors I guess...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Hello. I mean in no way to offend anyone here, but the main topic seems to be quite disorganized.Is there any way to clean it up?I know that you put up the table of contents, but the amount of spacing between each item and having everything be the same color makes it hard to, well, look through.....uhhhh this is a little confusing I will try different colors I guess......Well, that's not what I meant...I meant a decrease in the amount of spacing... There's quite a bit of it.And some things appear to be in large text that could be smaller, some of the titles of the sections. Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 What Chath was saying is that you should probably lay low on the huge text and spacing. You can put larger text to seperate things like for instance, the Comics and the PGS list, but don't make it huge. Also the spacing is a large amount between things. A table of contents does help but what we're saying is that you shouldn't have to scroll down half of the page just to get to the comics. There is just too much space, and its really disorganized.~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 What Chath was saying is that you should probably lay low on the huge text and spacing. You can put larger text to seperate things like for instance, the Comics and the PGS list, but don't make it huge. Also the spacing is a large amount between things. A table of contents does help but what we're saying is that you shouldn't have to scroll down half of the page just to get to the comics. There is just too much space, and its really disorganized.~SoranYeah, that is exactly what I was trying to say. Thanks, Soran. Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 What Chath was saying is that you should probably lay low on the huge text and spacing. You can put larger text to seperate things like for instance, the Comics and the PGS list, but don't make it huge. Also the spacing is a large amount between things. A table of contents does help but what we're saying is that you shouldn't have to scroll down half of the page just to get to the comics. There is just too much space, and its really disorganized.~SoranYeah, that is exactly what I was trying to say. Thanks, Soran.Ok. I edited out the space. Is this what you wanted? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 ALOT Better, thank you. Little mini detail though, could you edit the Huge Text and make it smaller? Example: Instead of This(size 36+) you try This(size 24-).~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 ALOT Better, thank you. Little mini detail though, could you edit the Huge Text and make it smaller? Example: Instead of This(size 36+) you try This(size 24-).~SoranFinished. Does it look better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Looks really good and more organized, great job!~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 Looks really good and more organized, great job!~SoranOut of wonder is there anything else I could do to make it look more organized or is that it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 I'm sure there's a bit more, but I'm gonna see if I can find a few more things you can address and give them to you all at once.It looks a lot better, by the way. Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 (edited) I'm sure there's a bit more, but I'm gonna see if I can find a few more things you can address and give them to you all at once.It looks a lot better, by the way.Well just so you know I just now edited some things so I guess you can take a few things of that list.... Edited June 8, 2012 by TOA PIRAKA HAKANN 3.0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 9, 2012 Author Share Posted June 9, 2012 COMIC 71: Another Apology And Sneak Peaks is up!Yes I know there is a few spelling errors.....I realized that after I put it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 9, 2012 Share Posted June 9, 2012 COMIC 71: Another Apology And Sneak Peaks is up!Yes I know there is a few spelling errors.....I realized that after I put it up.So you're using sprites from now on? Old Chimoru sprites? Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 9, 2012 Author Share Posted June 9, 2012 COMIC 71: Another Apology And Sneak Peaks is up!Yes I know there is a few spelling errors.....I realized that after I put it up.So you're using sprites from now on? Old Chimoru sprites?Nope. I was just testing my skills with it plus I was on another computer, so I did not have all my MNOG sprites. And the reason why I used old Chimoru it because there are no six-shaded Voya Nui Matoran sprites. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathan Evo Posted June 9, 2012 Share Posted June 9, 2012 COMIC 71: Another Apology And Sneak Peaks is up!Yes I know there is a few spelling errors.....I realized that after I put it up.So you're using sprites from now on? Old Chimoru sprites?Nope. I was just testing my skills with it plus I was on another computer, so I did not have all my MNOG sprites. And the reason why I used old Chimoru it because there are no six-shaded Voya Nui Matoran sprites.Actually, there are. You just haven't been looking hard enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted June 9, 2012 Author Share Posted June 9, 2012 (edited) COMIC 71: Another Apology And Sneak Peaks is up!Yes I know there is a few spelling errors.....I realized that after I put it up.So you're using sprites from now on? Old Chimoru sprites?Nope. I was just testing my skills with it plus I was on another computer, so I did not have all my MNOG sprites. And the reason why I used old Chimoru it because there are no six-shaded Voya Nui Matoran sprites.Actually, there are. You just haven't been looking hard enough.Oh........thanks, I already created new leg and arm poses for the old version....., but maybe I will try it out....I FINALLY GOT YOU TO POST HERE!!!! SURE IT WASN'T EXACTLY THE WAY I WANTED IT TO HAPPEN, BUT STILL! EDIT: I have updated credit and have corrected grammar errors on the main page. Edited June 9, 2012 by TOA PIRAKA HAKANN 3.0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Heh... OWNED!I find Meltdown's appearance very spontaneous. That meteor was created by Bob.We'll see if anyone gets the reference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 I believe you sprited that, TPH. LOL. Oh well. And what IS that kit? It looks like a Chimoru mask slapped on a...whatever that is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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