Logan Tec Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 (edited) SO i have at last done it i am starting a comic I'll post a charater sheet later but here i.... The Tecno Comics!!1.The Start2.Pattern 3.Ploting4.Done Plotting for now5.Pinch5.5 Writers block + a cold6 I'm back Edited March 28, 2012 by tecnokua Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 Wut. Ok, first off the graphics look slightly sloppy.And the humor is nothing special.Tips: Make jokes and plot, not random events practically falling from the sky. Also, stop cutting off panels and people's head tops. (Vakama) When you box select, box select right.Aside from that you seem to know what you're doing with that sprite kit, so, just fix those things. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 Wut. Ok, first off the graphics look slightly sloppy.And the humor is nothing special.Tips: Make jokes and plot, not random events practically falling from the sky.Also, stop cutting off panels and people's head tops. (Vakama) When you box select, box select right.Aside from that you seem to know what you're doing with that sprite kit, so, just fix those things. Well hey i'm only a tohunga and i'm 11 and i'm super new at this but thxs for the tips Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nav3taX Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 well I can't say its bad, I can't say its great, But I can say theres room for improvement! I can sum it up to a few points!1. randomness! characters like Cucumber are very nice and all ,but you should always keep them brief, it can be taxing to think of random scripts and sometimes the scripts can be very boring ( I'm sorry I just skipped the seccond comic, I couldent concentrate on it )2. Grammer! Please, please, please! For the love of Tohu himself! re-read over your comics ,or text as you type it! otherwise it can become a grarble ov nonzense!3. Text! as in Colour! If you have a background that is dark green, any other shade of green is a No - no! also, contrasting colours, they HURT likewell, colours that hurt.4. Backgrounds! I've seen very similiar backgrounds in other comics, can't say much, but really, you can mix-it-up alittle! a smoother gradient would be cooler! ( 20% cooler Lolz)5. Characters! this is VERY Important! colour schemes arent the problem ( I can't complain, my Characters bright yellow and im very tacky )but please, give some depth to them - "best friend" or "I think his name is cucumber" kinda says - well this was improvised and not very thought - out.And, I would also advise the use of (if you don't already) Paint.net and GIMP (I used both, but now use MSPaint and Photoshop)Your gonna go far kid! Quote Limbo is switching servers! Please calm you Lava producing farms... Christ. "This will be my finest hour!" - Fulgrim The Phoenician"There is a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life" - Leonard Church"Pinkie Pie Style" - Pinkie Pie"Oh I know what the Ladies like" - Sgt. Avery Johnson"I'm A madman with a box! Without a box!" - The Doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 well with some feed back like some ppl who make comics i could make this a pretty good comic keep giving feed back and now i shall just go and continue playing around the the sprite kit and my ideas for the comic. Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 18, 2012 Share Posted March 18, 2012 Er, no, don't post every test you do, otherwise your greatest failures could be up for everyone to see. Post only the finished comics, which are funny and carefully planned. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 18, 2012 Author Share Posted March 18, 2012 (edited) ..... man WHY DID I NEVER THINK OF THOES AS DRAFTS. man i really need to wake up i feel some what embarrassed right now well back to the drawing board for me. Edited March 18, 2012 by tecnokua Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 18, 2012 Share Posted March 18, 2012 Ok, improvement! Fourth comic was good. But if you intend to make any more, you should avoid Maco. Dead people can't make comics.Fifth was also good, in fact it had the exact joke I was considering a few hours ago. Now I gotta think of a new one, you beat me to it! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 21, 2012 Author Share Posted March 21, 2012 i'm a fast thinker and sry i haven't posted in a little while i'v been sick And i have school sixth grade is hard so i have a bunch of homework so that is why i havn't posted in a while Kinda off topic but still about bioncle I am Going to get 2001 Kongu any day nowI Tecnokua approve this message Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 How are you getting 2001 Kongu? Tell me, so I can get me some Toa Nuva.As for the comics, go ahead and make more when you can, but take your time. A rushed comic can be a failure more easily than a runner can trip. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 23, 2012 Author Share Posted March 23, 2012 Well i looked up Thounga on amazon and they had some from a third party shop called Thounga market might try doing what i did Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMing Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Guys, don't get off topic here. This topic is only to discuss the comics. Quote Haven't seen one of these in a long time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted March 24, 2012 Author Share Posted March 24, 2012 (edited) right Don't want to get off topic. well for my comics i'm sorta having writers block and today i got some sevice hours to do for school plus still geting over that cold but i should have a filler today or a comic don't know what yetok very sry on no comics i have been on a vacation and sadly i have lost my usb drive so i can't make any comics till i find it sry about the lack of comics remember is a hobby not a job. Edited April 15, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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