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#41 Offline Lincoln Lee

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Posted Mar 30 2012 - 12:29 AM

Yeah...Thankyou.Yes. Didn't really work out for Inc, though. XD
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#42 Offline Doctor J. Wotzon

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Posted Mar 30 2012 - 04:41 PM

Woah, it's hard to wade through a plot so thick!...I've lost my edge.Anyway, great plot development, Frustro was a villain, and the image of Incommodo sprinting through the police station was strangely funny in my head. Also, Incurs-whatever has appeared.And will The Eye appear in the RPG?
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Posted Mar 30 2012 - 04:49 PM

Thankyou. Consider this the rollercoaster, and Part II the ghost train....Yes you have.Thankyou.Now, with a plot as thick as this, can you be sure of that?...Okaaaayyyy...Incurso and The Eye are the same person. Except Incurso/The Eye is a Toa of Ice in BZPRPG. I made him a Toa of Earth here so he could sink through the ground.
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Posted Mar 31 2012 - 05:52 PM

Sinking through the earth eh?What if he accidentally gets stuck next to gas pipes?
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Posted Mar 31 2012 - 05:54 PM

Then he's screwed.Then he's screwed.
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Posted Mar 31 2012 - 10:47 PM

Wait... Isn't Reichenbach Falls where Sherlock Holmes and James Moriarty fall to their deaths? Hmmmm... Reich...
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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 02:19 AM

Yes, it's a reference to the Reichenbach Falls. Reichenbach is loosely based on Moriarty.
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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 03:32 AM

Oh boy. I have a feeling I can guess how this may end. Or at least 3 possible ways this could end. Also, just how many SH references need you make? Not that I'm complaining. http://www.bzpower.c...tyle_emoticons/default/sarcastic.gif

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#49 Offline Lincoln Lee

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Posted Apr 03 2012 - 12:05 PM

Yeah. Although, admittedly, the part leading up to the end will be a surprise. I can guarantee that I have a few tricks up my sleeve.42.(Besides, I haven't made THAT many. I actually made less than I had planned, seeing as The Eye/Incurso almost had an air rifle. XD)I have read all the stories. No-one complains about my references and lives. So it's a very good thing you aren't complaining. :)
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 05:54 AM

Read newest chapter. Arkrak seems slightly more incompetent and less similar to any of his incarnations, but I foresee his attempts at flirting with Nikarra.
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 05:58 AM

He's not all that incompetent. It's just that Incommodo talks too quickly for him. :P*Facepalm*Anyhow, what were your thoughts on the chapter itself?
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 06:02 AM

Rather good. Introduces more plot, gives us more suspense, and world-ending.Also, this is Techna!Arkrak with BZPRPG!Arkrak's abilities right?
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 06:07 AM

I like the world-ending part.No, this is DarkMirror!Arkrak with BZPRPG!Arkrak's abilities and Techna!Arkrak's job.
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 06:10 AM

Next thing we know he obtains Elementum!Arkrak's personality.
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 07:30 AM

Well, the world's gonna end....HECK YEAH FOR PLOT DEVELOPMENT
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 09:43 AM

@Wotz: Yup. The end of the world.... This is gonna be fun. :evilgrin:
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Posted Apr 05 2012 - 02:19 PM

So, is Whispers Part 2 or a different story entirely?
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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 10:35 AM

Whispers is a different story. Part II will have the imaginative name of 'Dark Mirror: Part II'. XPBut Whispers is connected to the epics, more so to Part II of DM than Part I, but it's still connected.
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Posted Apr 06 2012 - 01:19 PM

So we will learn things in Whispers that won't be explained until Part II? Interesting...
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 02:23 AM

So ... it's basically a side story that fits in with the continuity?Like how there was OGs, OGG, 2ndOG and the Endless Frontier side-stories?
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 12:40 PM

We will learn things in Whispers that won't be explained until Part II, and we will see things in Whispers that will appear in Part II.@Hub: Pretty much, yeah.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 02:28 PM

So, the body count rises.As does Inc's IQ.However funny it was, that little Myself and Nobody thing sounds like it's from somewhere, like a joke or a SH story.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 02:30 PM

Well, it wouldn't be the apocalypse without a body count.Inc's always been smart.It's my own twist on the 'Detective Inspector Me' joke.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:29 PM

Y'know what Reichenbach having everyone in the room killed reminds me of? That scene in Captain America where Red Skull starts killing his fellow Nazi's.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:31 PM

I hated that film.But, any other thoughts?
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:34 PM

I thought it was pretty good. I mean, it wasn't amazing. But compared to the Green Lantern, it was actually fun. But, yeah, it's interesting to see the plot progressing. Nobody and Myself are certainly weird characters. In a good way, of course. :P
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:41 PM

Anything would be 'actually fun' compared to Green Lantern.Nobody and Myself are Arkrak and Incommodo, respectively.... I thought people would've caught on to that.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:44 PM

...Yes, yes they are.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:47 PM

Was that an honest mistake or a joke?
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:52 PM

All of the above.
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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 09:14 PM

Poor Matoran, forced to go with the schemes of Incommodo.
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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 03:46 AM

He wasn't forced to do anything!And he will be showing up again.
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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 06:16 AM

I see. Possibly as a future villain?
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Posted Apr 08 2012 - 10:48 AM

I see. Possibly as a future villain?

Yes and no. Definitely an antagonist, but not a villain.

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Posted Apr 10 2012 - 01:36 PM

I love the fact that there's nothing special about Pirok or Proditor, despite the fact that Pirok was your old username and Proditor has 'died' on multiple occasions XDAnd it looks like something's telling Incy what to say. Maybe this is to do with the Whispers? Or Nikarra?Pulse and Ignotus survived.Something from a previous chapter: I have to imagine this guy:

“Speak, fool, and be done with it.” One of the beings, a male Vortixx, snapped at Reichenbach.

as Sentraken, due to his pointless insults, short temper, arrogance and lack of importance in the story :P

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Posted Apr 10 2012 - 01:40 PM

Thankyou. It's more that Reich sees nothing special in them.Perhaps. You'll just have to wait and see, won't you? :sly:Indeed they did.I considered making him either Sentraken or The Shadow. Take your pick. XP
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Posted Apr 11 2012 - 03:38 AM

Welp, everything's going to go down the drain. Inc just uttered something that will lead to despair. But then again, they're the main characters. They possess plot armour!
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Posted Apr 11 2012 - 03:42 AM

Hey, what's Despair got to do with this? Has he been reading my epic in secret? :fear:Oh, right, you just mean it's Very Bad News. Plot armour FTW!
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Posted Apr 11 2012 - 03:48 PM

I've noticed that in addition to the many Sherlock Holmes references in these stories, there also appear to be many Doctor Who references, mainly quotes.
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Posted Apr 12 2012 - 04:31 AM

I've noticed that in addition to the many Sherlock Holmes references in these stories, there also appear to be many Doctor Who references, mainly quotes.

Yes, I'm a big Doctor Who fan. There are far more DW references in Shadows than in DM, though. XP

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