Welcome to the review topic for my epic!
This is the first epic I have ever written, and if I am going to be honest with myself, will probably be my last. This is a project that I have been working on for quite a number of years now, and while the story in its entirety has been written, I find myself re-writing character arcs/plots/other major aspects before I post them in order to better fit my current writing style and vision. When I originally started posting, the goal was to put up a new chapter every week, but let's be honest, that's rarely ever going to happen. Life gets in the way, and my posting frequently becomes infrequent. So in terms of updates, all I can really say is this: chapters will come out when they're ready.
But don't be afraid yell at me and tell me to get my butt in gear. I only aim to please.
As for the story itself, there are a few things that I would like to point out. I have taken some artistic liberties with the Bionicle canon, but not so much that it feels off-putting (I hope). The story takes place on the island of Mata Nui, many years after the Mask of Light saga, and will stay true to the common beliefs of that time (Mata Nui is a great spirit, not a giant robot, Makuta is his brother, not a cloud of antidermis). Also, I've written Matoran to seem a bit more human (and thus, I think, more relatable), and while some familiar faces will be present, most of the main roles will be filled with characters of my own design.
In short, this story will follow a group of Matoran as they travel across the land, on a quest to...save the world? Something like that. There's bad guys, good guys, monsters, explosions, battles, adventure, and more stuff I hope you will find, at the very least, interesting.
As with any epic, any type of feedback is welcome, so let me know what you think! You can find the epic here, and I do hope you enjoy it.
TABLE OF CONTENTS:
Chapter 1 - The Spring Solstice
Chapter 2 - The Tale of Atouri
Chapter 3 - Learning of the Stars
Chapter 4 - Approaching Shadows
Chapter 5 - Unanswered Questions
Chapter 6 - Visions
Chapter 7 - Just In Case
Chapter 8 - Blood on the Leaves
Chapter 9 - The Burning Tree
Chapter 10 - Air and Shadow
Chapter 11 - Tears
Chapter 1 - The Cold, Hard World
Chapter 2 - A New Beginning
Chapter 3 - Brutality and Guilt
Chapter 4 - The Wastes
Chapter 5 - Into the Abyss
Chapter 6 - Lost
Chapter 7 - Hope From Shadow
Chapter 8 - Duty
Chapter 9 - Reunion
Chapter 10 - Council and Uncertainty
Chapter 1 - Misfits
Chapter 2 - The Great Takea
Chapter 3 - Decisions and Distrust
Chapter 4 - A Terrible Discovery
Chapter 5 - Descent Into Madness
Chapter 6 - Echos of Home
Chapter 7 - The Coming Storm
Chapter 8 - The Drums of War
Chapter 9 - Heroes
Chapter 11 - The Last Stand
Chapter 12 - Return
Chapter 1 - Looking Through Ice
Chapter 2 - Catching Up
Chapter 3 - The Shrouded City
Chapter 4 - A New Turaga
Chapter 5 - Answers and Questions
Chapter 6 - The Tale of Saku
Chapter 7 - The Horrors of the Dark
Chapter 8 - An Old Friend
Chapter 9 - A Turn for the Worse
Chapter 10 - Revelations
Chapter 11 - Boiling Blood
Chapter 12 - Shadow's Fall
Chapter 13 - Silence
Edited by ZOMBI3S, Feb 20 2015 - 01:16 PM.