Jowm Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 This is the review topic for my first BZP epic, I appreciate all feedback and look forward to seeing what you all think of my story. So go ahead and post your opinions, and thank you for doing so! Quote http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archer Vonn Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Text wall.Good god the text wall.The enter key is your friend.Nobody wants to read an enormous wall of text, which is why you want to break it up into paragraphs. Sorry but I just can't, I won't, read it unless you space it out a little better. Quote 3DS: 3711-9364-3152 PSN: AidecVoros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jowm Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 Text wall.Good god the text wall.The enter key is your friend.Nobody wants to read an enormous wall of text, which is why you want to break it up into paragraphs. Sorry but I just can't, I won't, read it unless you space it out a little better.Alright, spaced it out. Thanks for reminding me, that's something I usually don't think about when I'm writing, I'll have to try to remember that. Quote http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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