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What Happens After The End Review Topic


Jowm

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This is the review topic for my first BZP epic, I appreciate all feedback and look forward to seeing what you all think of my story. So go ahead and post your opinions, and thank you for doing so!

http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni.

 

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Text wall.Good god the text wall.The enter key is your friend.Nobody wants to read an enormous wall of text, which is why you want to break it up into paragraphs. Sorry but I just can't, I won't, read it unless you space it out a little better.

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Text wall.Good god the text wall.The enter key is your friend.Nobody wants to read an enormous wall of text, which is why you want to break it up into paragraphs. Sorry but I just can't, I won't, read it unless you space it out a little better.

Alright, spaced it out. Thanks for reminding me, that's something I usually don't think about when I'm writing, I'll have to try to remember that.

http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni.

 

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