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#1 Offline The Fifth Spoilers

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Posted Oct 14 2011 - 06:49 AM

That's right, it's time to continue this series! This here is the review topic. The old Review Topic is here: http://www.bzpower.c...pic=318280&st=0. Please do read the story! The beginning is nothing special, but everyone says that my improvement is visible as the story goes along. Quick summary: Reawakening is a 'crossover' epic. In other words, it ties in the human and BIONICLE worlds. But this isn't just any crossover. Toa don't suddenly warp to our world, or vice-versa. No, this time, a Great Spirit is on a crash-course for earth! But that isn't the story. The story is about a boy named Axle, who, thanks to the company his father works for, gets an artificial Matoran body, and lives among the Matoran along with his team of Matoran and Toa. Of course, the story doesn't end there! Read on to find what actually happens! Chapters released: BOOK Posted Image: Collision This story's major theme is Destiny, and the finding of one's place in the world. Chapters 1- 15 Synopsis: A massive robot crashes into the earth, and almost instantly the whole world has set its sights on the island that formed on its face. Axle, a lazy high schooler that hates the normality of everyday life, receives a dream and soon discovers five others that have had the same dream. Together, along with their parents, they get themselves artificial Toa and Matoran bodies and visit the island. (Sounds corny? Don't worry, the dream isn't as mysterious as it seems, which gets revealed much later.)The six Matoran inexplicably receive six Toa stones from the Turaga, saying that they are destined to leave their world behind and become heroes to revive the Great Spirit.Things take a turn for the worse when Axle realizes that he is the one destined to die by putting on the Kanohi Ignika. BOOK Posted Image: Sacrificehttp://www.bzpower.c...howtopic=327215 The main themes here are Destiny, Unity, and the pains of letting go. Chapters 1- 11 Synopsis: The six Matoran have become Toa now... or have they? Somehow, during the transformation process, their minds were split. One resided within their new Toa bodies, and the other resided in their original human bodies. After fighting off hordes of infected Rahi, they travel to Metru nui, where they find the city over run by Purple and Black entities that have all but destroyed the city. After flushing them out, they go south to find the Ignika and revive this Mata nui, while Povu, Toa of Stone, leaves to the southeast to create an island to house the PaB entities.A romance story starts between Axle and Miera, even though both of them know that Axle is destined to die.Once on the southern continent, the six (now seven) Toa are met by mysterious Toa that call themselves the "Dark Elements", and their conquered allies, the Makuta, who want the Great Spirit to die. After a crippling defeat, Axle just barely manages to make it to Karda nui, but can he summon the courage to leave Miera forever and put on the mask? BOOK :3: : Divergence < ArchivesBOOK :3: : Divergence < Current thread The main theme here is Duty. Thanks to [trope]Cerebus[/trope], we leave the idealistic-ness of the old books, and focus more on stopping the Dark Elements and the humans. Chapters 1- 31Estimation of how many chapters there will be in the end: looking to be around 60. I might stretch this into a 4th book. !!!MAJOR SPOILERS BELOW!!! Axle is brought back to life by Miera's mask, which had never worked before that point. But what effect could this have on the Great Spirit? The group decide to split up into several smaller groups to accomplish several tasks. The romance between Axle and Miera (renamed Miriam) continues, stronger than ever.Meanwhile, the humans receive special armor from Cyrus, and are sent back to the island to release the Bohrok swarms.Chalix has quit the group, both in his human and Toa forms, what will happen to him?Behind the heroes' backs, three ambitious humans are making shady plans. Are they for the benefit of mankind? Are they for world domination? Perhaps. Edits made: Petru changed to Huloh. More detail in chapter 2 of the characters and their appearance. Chapter 6 deleted. Mieren/Meiren changed to Miera. Sorvek changed back to Soren. Added a hidden link in chapter 1 of Book 2. Epsil changed to Silon. Ozoren changed to Kozoren. William's mask is green. Arthur and Brian's mask powers were switched around. Character list (WARNING, CONTAINS SPOILERS) As of Book Posted Image: Humans:ToaAaron, Kehuri- Toa of Plants- Kanohi Rau, Kanohi Rau NuvaMartin, Erix- Toa of Gravity- Mask of Imitation, Rau. Based on myself.Bruno, Brounus- Toa of Stone- Mask of AnimationYukina, Yuukria- Toa of Psionics- Kanohi Mahiki and RauSoren, Soren- Toa of Iron- Kanohi Kadin. Based on a real person that I sorta know.Aleida, Adealis- Toa of Water- Kanohi (Emulation)Yann, Koraka/Mordek- Toa of Shadow- Kanohi Unknown. Based on my good friend, Koraka93, also known as Mr. Smiley, who I know in real life. MatoranAxle, - Matoran of Plants- Wields an axe. Also based on me.Charlie, Chalix- Matoran of Gravity- Wields two throwing disks. Loosely based on my brother.Nathaniel, Naxaros- Matoran of Stone- Wields a Kohlii stickHaru, Hiaru- Matoran of Psionics- Wields a sickleJohan, Yorek- Matoran of Iron- Wields twin Volo Lutu GrapplersMiriam, Meira- Matoran of Water- Wields a shield. Based on the girl I love.Shane, Shane- Matoran of Shadow- Wields a glaive. Also somewhat based on Mr. Smiley. Misc. ToaCyrus- Toa of Ice- Kanohi Unknown. Based on Rossiu from Gurren Lagann.???- Toa of Lightning- Kanohi UnknownA group of unidentified Toa- Elements Unknown- Kanohi Unknown Non-humans Caele nui inhabitants:Leku- Toa of Air- Kanohi Rau, and possibly more.Aiyren- Turaga of Air- Kanohi unknownSilicix- Turaga of earth- Kanohi unknownLiquis- Turaga of water- probably wears a Kanohi Zatth.Novehk- Toa of Earth- Kanohi unknown, status unknownNurea- Matoran of Earth- Kanohi unknownHuloh- Turaga of Stone- Kanohi SanokPovu- Toa of Stone- Kanohi Sanok, possibly moreGaalra- Toa of Water- Kanohi PakariMazoku- Turaga of Fire- kanohi UnknownTakeshi- Toa of Fire- Kanohi KualsiGlazek- Turaga of Ice- Kanohi KirilKozoren- Toa of Ice- Kanohi VolitakKrika- Makuta- Krast As of Book Posted Image: Humans: Toa OtaraAxle, - Matoran of Plants- Mask of Alchemy, Rau Nuva, Purification- Wields a Pulse Generator Axe and a Repeller axe- Rides an Artakha BullCharlie, Chalix- Matoran of Gravity- Mask of Analysis, Imitation- Wields twin Cyclone Gravidyisks- Rides a LohrakNathaniel- Matoran of Stone- Mask of Multiplication, Animation, Phasing- Wields a Shockwave Hammer/Splitter Shovel, and Sand Mace- Rides a Phase DragonHaru- Matoran of Psionics- Mask of Malleability, Mahiki- Wields twin Chain Sickle Staffs, and Psionic Gloves- Rides a NivawkJohan, Yorek- Matoran of Iron- Mask of Technology, Kadin, non-organic Elda- Twin Volo Lutu Grapplers with various attachments, artificial arm, Channeler Blade- Owns a TunnelerMiriam- Matoran of Water-Mask of Emulation, Mask of Calming, Calix, other Kanohi Unknown- Wields a Repeller Shield, Double Cyclone Propellers- Rides a Proto DrakeShane, Shane- Matoran of Shadow-Mask of Heartsight, Sensory Confusion, Fiction, Hau- Wields a Multiblade Shadow Glaive, Shadow Projectile Cane- Rides a Rock Lion Misc. ToaCyrus- Toa of Ice- Kanohi Unknown???- Toa of Lightning- Kanohi UnknownA group of unidentified Toa- Elements Unknown- Kanohi Unknown Non-humans Caele nui inhabitants:Leku- Toa of Air- Kanohi Rau, and possibly more.Aiyren- Turaga of Air- Kanohi unknownSilicix- Turaga of earth- Kanohi unknownLiquis- Turaga of water- probably wears a Kanohi Zatth.Novehk- Toa of Earth- Kanohi unknown, status unknownNurea- Matoran of Earth- Kanohi unknownHuloh- Turaga of Stone- Kanohi SanokPovu- Toa of Stone- Kanohi Sanok, possibly moreGaalra- Toa of Water- Kanohi PakariMazoku- Turaga of Fire- kanohi UnknownTakeshi- Toa of Fire- Kanohi KualsiGlazek- Turaga of Ice- Kanohi KirilKozoren- Toa of Ice- Kanohi VolitakKrika- Makuta- Krast Rahi Isaac- Artakha Bull, ridden by Axle.Aleida- Proto Drake, ridden by Miriam.Linus, Tunneler, enlarged to be ride-able for Yorek. Named after Lloyd: The White Wolf, who gave me helpful tips.Lohrak, ridden by ChalixNivawk, ridden by HaruPhase Dragon, ridden by NathanDamascus, Rock Lion, ridden by Shane. Named after Mr. Smiley. VillainsAxion- Toa of Dark Matter, Mask of Despair, wields a sort of bludgeon-glaive.Stergex- Toa of Blood, Mask of Disabling, wields a gun and a knife.Ektrahk- Toa of Ectoplasm, Mask of Brain Signals, covered in blades.Cerebrex- Toa of Nightmares, Mask of Blindness, Claw and sword.Mutax- Toa of Mutation, Mask of Anger, Sword and mutated left hand.Kezrax- Unknown race and element, Kanohi unknown, weapon unknown. As of Book Posted Image: REAWAKENED ToaDuoral- Toa of Magnetism, Mask of Long-distance teleportation.Tenlek- Toa of Plants- Mask unknownMowai- Toa of Psionics- Mask unknownVeten- Toa of Kinetic Energy- Mask of PossibilitiesRandan- Toa of Earth- Kanohi RodeUana- Toa of Water- Mask of ScryingMatta nui/Mata nui- Toa of Light- Mask of ObliviousnessNurea- Toa of Earth- Mask of Adaptation TuragaDarif- Turaga of PlantsIryda- Turaga of Psionics MatoranArian- Matoran of WaterTulu- PlasmaLafu- Kinetic EnergyFeiran- Metal MakutaDestynax- Makuta- Kanohi Unknown (Mentioned only). Based onna MOC I made a long time ago. Click the link.Fenrix- Makuta- Kanohi Unknown (Mentioned only)Ifrix- Makuta- Kanohi Unknown. Based on a more recent MOC. MiscMata nui/DCFH- sentient virus- full control over the internet and Chuck's computer, as well as some mental abilities.Vezon- no maskRek- a Lomok- no mask.Rho- a prototype of a more powerful Toa of Metal, Mask of Technology. Based on a MOC of Toa Yorek, which I decided was too tall.Silon- a prototype of a more powerful Toa of Fire, Mask unknown. Based on my old self-MOC.Vikonz- a KrahkaOkau- male RenvenDovnak- male Skuaroh, Kanohi Kakama VillainsZithex- Toa of Data- Kanohi Unknown.Sonecek- Toa of Weakness- Kanohi unknown, but it seems to have a sort of teleportation power.Trizvak- Species unknown- deceased.Drevalx- Toa of Rage- Primary Kanohi unknown, has a Mask of Long-Distance Teleportation Humans/Human-ToaWillian Reynolds- Toa of Plants, Kanohi KomauArthur Hollis- Toa of Earth, Kanohi MatatuBrian White- Toa of Metal, Kanohi SuletuFredrik Erdal- Toa of Air, Kanohi HunaRon Darwin- Human, high-rank millitantTed- Human, sniperBen- Human, soldierLeonard- Human, soldier GlatorianRalus- Glatorian of Water Book 3 groups list (contains spoilers)Coliseum- Krika, Nathan, DrevalxSeeking the OOMN/sundial- Haru, Axle, MiriamGet Duoral- Shane, Yorek, Veten, Chalix, DovnakRecruit more allies- Randan, Uana, Tenlek, IfrixFind Destynax- Rho, SilonRecruit more allies 2- Alph Axle's team- William, Axle, Miriam, NathanHaru's team- Haru, Shane, BrianJohan's team- Johan, ArthurDefend Metru nui- Takeshi, PovuNot really doing anything- Aaron, Aleida, Yann, Bruno, Soren, YukinaSome mysterious, undisclosed goal- Matta nui Species list:Shadow Stealer: TeneskPridak: SkuarohGuardian: RocyakSmall bipeds: ArginBotar: BeorkenJohmak: RenvenLurker: TorstrekTyrant: Vrizathk PHUN PHACT:"Reawakening" refers to the reawakening of Bionicle, and not the reawakening of this Great Spirit. If you bothered actually reading everything above, put IRTWOT at the end of your review (stands for I Read The Wall Of Text). NOTES TO SELF:Axle- blue and green suit of armor. It had an axe attachment, which flipped around to become a gun-looking thing, which, Cyrus explained, when shot, would produce a massive thorned bush where it struck. The force of the growing bush would be enough to crack armor. It also included a sort of grappling hook that had a changeable trajectory. Nathan- bronze and gold set of armor that could coat itself with stone, and shatter it into projectile-like stone fragments. It also boosted his speed and strength. Miriam- blue one, which was able to create a protective layer of water around it, and possessed healing abilities. Shane- black mech, which Cyrus explained could cloak itself, and also sported twin chain glaives. Haru- gold mech that posessed Telekinetic powers and fire-able hands that, when combined with the Telekinetic powers, could be used like grappling hooks. It also included several shuriken that were sensitive to the telekinetic powers of the mech. Don't forget the Spectral Mask! Don't forget the detail that Toa is Matoran for Hero.

Edited by Draezeth, Oct 15 2011 - 04:54 AM.

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#2 Offline Andrewnuva199

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Posted Oct 14 2011 - 06:09 PM

I'm still here, don't worry! Looks like things are continuing at a steady pace, though I will admit things don't look too exciting at the moment. But I'm sure the Bohrok thing is going to be signifigiant very soon. One thing that I'm wondering when you're going to pick back up on is the whole issue with Axle being revived from sacrificing himself. Are we going to learn more about that in due time?
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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 04:46 AM

I'll get back to the Toa once the human matters are dealt with. I wanted to focus on only one side of the story at a time, that way it's easier to keep up with. As for the consequences of Axle's revival, I'm afraid it won't be quite as spectacular as most of you seem to expect it will be. I'll be sure to throw a curveball your way when I get to it, though.
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Posted Nov 04 2011 - 05:22 AM

Hey there remember me? it's William Furno!i'm re-reading the entire Reawakening Story! and i hope to read the latest chapters pretty soon!Off-Topic: i am SO not making another story in a LOOOONG time, possibly never, because i suck at it!
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Posted Nov 10 2011 - 12:27 PM

Heya, good to see you! I've been reading some Lovecraft, and that's inspiring me to get to the part of the story where that becomes relevant, so expect a new chapter soon.[Edit] The story is going to have to wait until I've got less on my plate, inspiration or not. The 12th year of high school in IB could be compared to being forced to listen to Tren Krom recite Hamlet's "To be or not to be" soliloquy. Or a walk through Karzahni, for the less creative.

Edited by Draezeth, Dec 13 2011 - 12:42 PM.

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