Dr yes Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Epilouge: Mezuah walked the Streets of Dust alone. No one to aid him in his struggle for power. However , he was not defenceless for he was the most feared warrior in all the land. It was said that a single look from his eyes could poison the blood of the mad man who displeased him. And thus it began. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Six Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 This seems like a short story, so I'm moving it over there... Quote Bio of a BZP Admin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezorov Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 I'm interested in seeing where this is going, though I think you could put a tad more work into your story, as a few sentences is not a lot to work with. I see that you were trying to make this into an epic, but you may want to post at least a couple paragraphs at a time.Also, to avoid getting your topic moved to Short Stories in the future, remember to create a review topic.Also also, I think you meant prologue; an epilogue is what comes after the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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