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Mezuah's Struggle For The Death Blade.

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Epilouge: Mezuah walked the Streets of Dust alone. No one to aid him in his struggle for power. However , he was not defenceless for he was the most feared warrior in all the land. It was said that a single look from his eyes could poison the blood of the mad man who displeased him. And thus it began.

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I'm interested in seeing where this is going, though I think you could put a tad more work into your story, as a few sentences is not a lot to work with. I see that you were trying to make this into an epic, but you may want to post at least a couple paragraphs at a time.Also, to avoid getting your topic moved to Short Stories in the future, remember to create a review topic.Also also, I think you meant prologue; an epilogue is what comes after the story.


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