Review~ Pleasure And Pain

[Lewa Pathfinder]

So, this is the review for my first epic here on BZPower! (Actually my first anything. ) I'm really excited about this, I can't wait to find out where I'll take this story. Comments, critiquing and reviews are greatly appreciated. It helps me become a better writer, and get an insight into the types of people that read my stories. So, thanks in advance!http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showforum=25 <-- ReviewThanks, LP

[Grant-Sud]

It's an interesting story so far, and Eldair and Lekan seem pretty cool to start off with. Your settings are decent though there is some detail missing. And the plot, well, I want to see where it goes next. =DHowever, one main thing that concerns me is that one note you made at the top of the story. There shouldn't be any rated R content within this story. If you want more information you can check out the rules featured around BZP.

[Lewa Pathfinder]

It's an interesting story so far, and Eldair and Lekan seem pretty cool to start off with. Your settings are decent though there is some detail missing. And the plot, well, I want to see where it goes next. =DHowever, one main thing that concerns me is that one note you made at the top of the story. There shouldn't be any rated R content within this story. If you want more information you can check out the rules featured around BZP.

Did I seriously say rated R? My mind must have been somewhere else, I meant to say PG13. http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/fear.gif Completely brain dumped! I'll edit it now. Thank you for your critique!