Posted Apr 06 2012 - 01:31 PM
The first drawing looks very raw, and kind of roughly done - but that's great. It gives it a certain atmosphere, and a unique appearance. The lightning is very well done, although there should have been a few harsh highlights on the armour parts closest to the flame, if you want a more metallic look.Now onto the second one - I am astounded.The perspective you chose is not a simple one, yet the Toa in the distance is well-proportioned from what I can see. The ball of energy is really eye-catching, and perfectly done. Which brings me to the next point: composition (something I'm quite bad at xD). It's great. The viewer's gaze is directed over the whole picture quite easily, it's flowing and energetic.But seeing the detail and well-executed characters, the background seems a bit, just a bit bland. Maybe some more detail would balance it a bit.Just a small overall tip: although it's great that you work on your art on a big scale, I'd recommend resizing the pictures a bit before uploading them. Because when zoomed in, it's really really big, which makes it a bit hard.I would love to see more from you in the future, keep up the amazing work!
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