Posted Apr 06 2012 - 07:10 PM
Chapter 1 It Awakens... As Gartan descended the endless steps, he reflected upon the history of the island. Life on the island of Greno Nui was technological haven. They were self suficant, and never made contact with any other island. But the resources soon ran out, and civil war broke out, culminating in the matoran being split in six. He himself had volintered to biological experimentation. Like a dozen other ta-matoran, he had a flamethrower grafted into his arm. The only memory he had of life before the war was a keepsake stone. He had purchased in his home village. It glowed mysteriously as if it was an ember launched out of an active volcano. He had recently been assigned as leader of special ops team to explore territory recently captured from the onu-matoran. Now as his recollections finish, he begans to notice pictures carved into the wall. They depicted six figures battleing a monster made of the six elements, yet not turnning to solid protodermis as the pre-war ga-matoran expeiments had proved. The as he descended, he noticed his stone begin to glow. When his squad reached the bottom, all that was there was a statue of a figure crouching over. One leiutenant approached the statue and in flash was smashed into a wall and killed on impact. What was assumed to be a statue sprung at the other three members of Gartan's squad, and was instantly set ablaze by the three matoran's weapons. As they began to relax, the fire moved to envelope the creatures arm, and in an instant, it's arm became a replica of the matoran's flamethrowers. It quickly dispatched of Gartan's two companions, and when the two had perished, the creature shifted it's attention towards Gartan, and turned the deadly stream of flame upon him. As the fire closed in on Gartan, it began to part and flow around. Gartan slowly lowered his shield to wonder what had caused this occurance, when the creature opened fire upon the wall, and a hail of stones began to rain down. Gartan raised his shield to protect himself, but was buried. After a tedious hour of digging his wayout, He emerged to see a a gaping hole in the wall, with hardened magma around the edges. Beyond the rubble of the wall, a figure began to move......Review Topic: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4303
Edited by Metriod Master, Apr 06 2012 - 07:14 PM.
I have nothing witty nor memorable to write. Deal with it.