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#1 Offline Ayel Hyland

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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 03:27 PM

Posted ImageWell, there's not really much for me to say about this at the moment. See, it's been awhile since I've had this up, and I doubt to many of you remember BladeTitan974's comic series, because this series takes place on the island where his took place. But, I'll do my best so that the events of this series can stand on its own.Comics:Comic 1: The PreludeComic 2: The Toa MetaComic 3: The DarkstormersComic 4: Unwelcome SurpriseComic 5: The Conflict BeginsComic 6: ClashComic 7: Dark Matter CoreComic 8: The WakeDo note that some of these comics are almost three years old, and that the direction I'm taking the series has somewhat changed since it was first conceived. Also, I'm using sprites, so I'm sure I've already lost respect with the "HAND-DRAWN ONLY SERIOUS BUSINESS" crowd.Credits:XanisKit for the Xanis KitDark709 for a few minor thingsBladeTitan974 for the backgrounds, some sprites, and many other story ideasThe rest of the ICC for support and some story ideasMyself for the crude drawings in Comics 4 and 5, the Dark Matter Core in Comic 7, and some sprites.And that's about it for now. Comments, criticism, and the like would be much appreciated.

Edited by Ayel Hyland, May 08 2012 - 03:42 PM.

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#2 Offline Leraku

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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 04:10 PM

Hmm... I believe one of the darkened characters' arms are missing in panels 2 to 7, in comic 3.

Edited by Leraku, Apr 07 2012 - 04:11 PM.

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#3 Offline Ayel Hyland

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Posted Apr 07 2012 - 05:51 PM

Hmm... I believe one of the darkened characters' arms are missing in panels 2 to 7, in comic 3.

He's meant to have his hands behind his head, like some people do when they relax. You're right, though. It does look like he has no arms.

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#4 Offline Superkid11

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Posted Apr 17 2012 - 11:57 PM

Man, the new Toa sure have it rough. So shortly after they become toa, queen gets assasinated. :PLooking forward to seeing where this goes, glad to finally get back here and see this. Kutgw
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#5 Offline Nathan Evo

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Posted May 08 2012 - 03:43 PM

I've been doing my best in keeping up with this series. I'm still struggling a bit, but I felt Ishould at least post in this topic.This series really deserves more attention. It's an interesting backstory to the island used by Bladeran and Gavla, and it gives it a good deal of storyline significance. I really look forward to seeing where this goes.
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#6 Offline Ayel Hyland

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Posted Jul 31 2012 - 05:35 PM

Thanks for the feedback, everybody!New Comic time! Sorry it took so long to make this one. It's a little on the bland side since not much action-wise happens, but it continues the story and that's what's important. You'll get plenty of action after next comic. (And hopefully, that shouldn't take forever to make.)
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#7 Offline Nathan Evo

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Posted Jul 31 2012 - 06:18 PM

Ooh, plot twist!Also, I see you used a rendition of the background I used for TMUCW, though recolored brown. I like that.All in all, good comic. Looking forward to seeing where the action comes in. I'm sorry I don't have much to say beyond the generic message "lol kutgw 1000000/10", but I'm really trying. Posting responses has been pretty hard for me lately.EDIT: One thing I forgot to mention from my last post is how I like that in this series, most of the main characters are Toa. Honestly I haven't seen a lot of series that do that (though admittingly it's not like I've been trying). Nonetheless, it's still quite refreshing from all the "X's Comics 1.0" archetype that has dominated the Comics forum since the dawn of time.

Edited by Gerlicky, Jul 31 2012 - 06:23 PM.

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"I'm on Toxic Reapa's home planet, and I've found a cocoon full of what I assume are younger versions of Toxic Reapa's deadly species.
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