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#1 Offline The Iron Toa

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Posted Apr 09 2012 - 01:26 AM

Hi, with the posting of my first comedy and also first non-epic, I've decided to finally start a story collection topic. And so here I present to you my stories.

First, my epics. I call this the Yrenta Saga:Tale of Yrenta -- Review Topic -- Finished with 32 Chapters

 

Wartime Journal of a Toa (Not set in Yrenta, but an interlude) -- Review Topic -- Finished with 21 Entries

Fate of Yrenta -- Review Topic -- Finished with 24 ChaptersEnd of Yrenta -- Review Topic -- In progress, currently at 55 ChaptersAnd so far I have posted one comedy:Story of Pehkui Nui -- Finished, one post long.Also, I have made custom Bionicle models of many characters in my epics. I'm not particularly talented at it, and most of them are nothing special, but I think some turned out kind of cool. And you might want to see the characters as I visualize them. To see these, along with other Bionicle models I have made, and some my brother made, take a look at my Brickshelf gallery.I hope you enjoy my stories. Please, let me know what you think.


Edited by The Iron Toa, Jan 16 2013 - 01:47 AM.

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My Blog

Latest Update: RPG: Character Creation and Stats

My Story Collection

Story Currently in Progress:

End of Yrenta (Review Topic) (Currently at 55 Chapters)

I realize I haven't updated my stories or posted much for quite a while. I will get back it it sometime, and I am still checking the site daily for any interesting topics.

Brickshelf Gallery


#2 Offline Hahli Husky

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Posted Apr 12 2012 - 12:55 AM

Hey, Iron Toa! Just so you know, spoiler tags are only for storyline details that haven't been shared in a story yet, just to keep people from seeing spoilers. :)
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#3 Offline The Iron Toa

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 12:04 AM

I thought those descriptions counted since they can give some of the story away. If you don't want me using the tags for that, I'll just remove the descriptions.
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My Blog

Latest Update: RPG: Character Creation and Stats

My Story Collection

Story Currently in Progress:

End of Yrenta (Review Topic) (Currently at 55 Chapters)

I realize I haven't updated my stories or posted much for quite a while. I will get back it it sometime, and I am still checking the site daily for any interesting topics.

Brickshelf Gallery


#4 Offline Velox

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 02:14 AM

It depends on the description -- if it's just a synopsis (as most were last time), then a spoiler tag is not needed (e.g., the inside of the dust jacket for hardback books; it tells about the story, even sometimes giving away a few things, but not ruining the story, so that people know what to expect when reading said story). However, if you are actually giving away a spoiler to a key plot point that would ruin the story if read before reading said story, then a spoiler tag may be used (e.g., the last description you had said "Will the Toa save the people who banished them?" and then you had a spoiler tag revealing the answer -- the answer is definitely a spoiler, and therefore can be placed in a spoiler tag, but the question and the part before that is just a synopsis). Does that make sense?Posted Image
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#5 Offline The Iron Toa

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 01:10 PM

Yes. But I'd rather not give any of it away, so I'll leave it without the descriptions.
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My Blog

Latest Update: RPG: Character Creation and Stats

My Story Collection

Story Currently in Progress:

End of Yrenta (Review Topic) (Currently at 55 Chapters)

I realize I haven't updated my stories or posted much for quite a while. I will get back it it sometime, and I am still checking the site daily for any interesting topics.

Brickshelf Gallery





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