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#481 Offline Riku Tryon

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Posted Jun 06 2015 - 07:11 PM

If you take a glance at the description, the Federation Armed Forces base is actually on the outskirts of the city. Given how much havoc would be wreaked, as you pointed out, if they started fighting in the city, you have messed up. Big time. Because it means you've let an enemy get a whole heck of a lot further than they should ever have gotten. The size of the mechs is very much intentional, and was decided with both the technology levels of the game, the military role they occupy, and the nature of this game in mind. :)

 

I can address the plot not quite easily as well; it isn't a cold war. The cold war already happened, for the past ten in-universe years. This is the point where the cold war goes hot, and while I am not stating exactly how soon to prevent it from being spoiled, the exact point of change occurs very, very shortly (OOC) after the game starts. It is called "Breaking Point" for a reason. :P

 

I can fix the Co-Host note quite quickly, just takes a quick edit.


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On this eve, the thirtieth anniversary of that first colony, many are left to wonder; is the world fast approaching a breaking point?

Breaking Point: An OTC Mecha RPG


#482 Offline Havelock Vetinari

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Posted Jun 06 2015 - 07:53 PM

And with any possible concerns addressed, I'll be happy to approve this RPG. I am impressed by the amount of effort that went into fleshing out the world...in particular the equipment. I've had a few long chats with Riku regarding the RPG which has addressed many of the concerns I've had. The world seems well thought out, functional.

 

And if the insane amount of activity the offsite chat is getting is any indication, there's one heck of a playerbase ready and raring to go. 

 

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#483 Offline Wyrd Bid Ful Araed

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Posted Jun 07 2015 - 04:02 AM

If the fighting is supposed to be taking place around Horizon, it might be a good idea to add some information about what the area around Horizon is like. I'm assuming its not going to be particularly lush and verdant since a continent got snapped in half relatively nearby, and that its going to be somewhere equatorial since I believe thats where mass drivers work best. Would sort of help to know if the terrain is desert or mountainous or swampy or whatever.

 

That and the co-host bit are minor issues though so Breaking Point Approved [x2]


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#484 Offline Engineer Alexandra Humva

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Posted Jun 10 2015 - 08:40 AM

Seems well written, and it looks like there'll be some player dedication to it. Breaking point Approved [x3]


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#485 Online Luke Schwarz

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Posted Jun 17 2015 - 09:19 PM

approved x4

 

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#486 Offline Makaru

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Posted Jun 22 2015 - 08:59 AM

Breaking Point Approved


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