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#1 Offline The Swimming Beard

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 07:23 PM

Posted ImageThis is my Hero Factory MOC X-549.Here is the linkhttp://www.brickshel...ry.cgi?f=501382Anyway, comment, and give ideas for improvement.Edit: Image thumbnailed due to dimensions and file size. Please keep posted images in BBC to 640x640 pixels and 100 kB, and posted images on the rest of BZPower to 500 kB.-Wind-

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#2 Offline Sumiki

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 07:31 PM

Unfortunately, we can't see your MOC, since the folder is not yet public. But fear not! You can deeplink your images by clicking on them until they show up by themselves. Copy this url (which should end in a file extension and not a number assigned by Brickshelf) and paste it into your post here on BZP so everyone can see it, regardless of whether or not the folder is public. :)
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#3 Offline Akuna Toa of Sonics

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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 10:35 PM

I like how you combined Bionicle style building with HF parts, especially on the legs. Which are, by the way, the best part.The whole second set of arms thing doesn't really look good, though. The top set seems too skinny compared to the bottom set.Overall, good MOC. Nice build and flowing colors.
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Posted Apr 13 2012 - 11:20 PM

The color scheme works out really well. The legs are nicely designed but those arms sticking out of the back look a bit thin.
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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 01:28 PM

Thanks for commenting. I might try to fix the upper arms. Also, the gallery is now public.
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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 02:31 PM

Wow! Great job getting the bulkiness and form into the standard-sized MOC. I like how you got both BIONICLE and Hero Factory pieces to work well together as well. The legs are also nice; it makes him looks much bigger and stronger.I'm jealous however, because whenever I make an epic Hero Factory MOC, it's always around the size of a small dog (2-2.5 feet high). I've never gotten satisfaction from my standard-sized MOCs. :P
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Posted Apr 15 2012 - 04:25 PM

I like the overall design, but the Barraki eyes jut out really far, but no parts can fix it, so that doesn't count. Maybe you could do with less gray, but again, some parts don't exist. Finally, the legs seem kind of bulky compared to the spindly arms.
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Posted Apr 19 2012 - 11:34 PM

Nice job overall. But are the extra limbs really necessary? Maybe you could add a blaster extension on the shoulder.
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Posted Apr 20 2012 - 07:10 AM

I love the way you made the lower arms and legs bulky. Looks very nice, I don't have much more to say.
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Posted Apr 21 2012 - 09:04 AM

The color mix is quite good, and I like how it looks "solid". Looks like it could swing an arm and send a Toa flying. I think the feet are a bit small for the scale of it, though.
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