The Swimming Beard Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 (edited) This is my Hero Factory MOC X-549.Here is the linkhttp://www.brickshel...ry.cgi?f=501382Anyway, comment, and give ideas for improvement.Edit: Image thumbnailed due to dimensions and file size. Please keep posted images in BBC to 640x640 pixels and 100 kB, and posted images on the rest of BZPower to 500 kB.-Wind- Edited April 14, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote "I pitea the fool!" (quote by Chro) 98.7% OF BZPOWER MEMBERS HAVEN'T SEEN MY BUCKET IF YOU ARE ONE OF THE 1.3% THAT HAS SEEN MY BUCKET, COPY THIS AND PASTE IT INTO YOUR SIGNATURE I MISS MY BUCKET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Unfortunately, we can't see your MOC, since the folder is not yet public. But fear not! You can deeplink your images by clicking on them until they show up by themselves. Copy this url (which should end in a file extension and not a number assigned by Brickshelf) and paste it into your post here on BZP so everyone can see it, regardless of whether or not the folder is public. Quote avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 I like how you combined Bionicle style building with HF parts, especially on the legs. Which are, by the way, the best part.The whole second set of arms thing doesn't really look good, though. The top set seems too skinny compared to the bottom set.Overall, good MOC. Nice build and flowing colors. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 The color scheme works out really well. The legs are nicely designed but those arms sticking out of the back look a bit thin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Swimming Beard Posted April 15, 2012 Author Share Posted April 15, 2012 Thanks for commenting. I might try to fix the upper arms. Also, the gallery is now public. Quote "I pitea the fool!" (quote by Chro) 98.7% OF BZPOWER MEMBERS HAVEN'T SEEN MY BUCKET IF YOU ARE ONE OF THE 1.3% THAT HAS SEEN MY BUCKET, COPY THIS AND PASTE IT INTO YOUR SIGNATURE I MISS MY BUCKET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meiko Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 Wow! Great job getting the bulkiness and form into the standard-sized MOC. I like how you got both BIONICLE and Hero Factory pieces to work well together as well. The legs are also nice; it makes him looks much bigger and stronger.I'm jealous however, because whenever I make an epic Hero Factory MOC, it's always around the size of a small dog (2-2.5 feet high). I've never gotten satisfaction from my standard-sized MOCs. Quote -- Meiko - @georgebarnick LUG Ambassador and administrator at Brickipedia News reporter and database administrator at Brickset Administrator at BIONICLEsector01 DISCLAIMER: All opinions and contributions made under this account are based solely on my own personal thoughts and opinions, and in no way represent any of the above groups/entities. If you have any concerns or inquiries about the contributions made under this account, please contact me individually and I will address them with you to the best of my ability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dralcax Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 I like the overall design, but the Barraki eyes jut out really far, but no parts can fix it, so that doesn't count. Maybe you could do with less gray, but again, some parts don't exist. Finally, the legs seem kind of bulky compared to the spindly arms. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewa97 Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Nice job overall. But are the extra limbs really necessary? Maybe you could add a blaster extension on the shoulder. Quote [center][size=8][color=#000080]ACTIVATE AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!![/color][/size][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obsessionist Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 I love the way you made the lower arms and legs bulky. Looks very nice, I don't have much more to say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 The color mix is quite good, and I like how it looks "solid". Looks like it could swing an arm and send a Toa flying. I think the feet are a bit small for the scale of it, though. Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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