Posted Oct 06 2012 - 11:44 AM
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Posted Nov 10 2012 - 04:10 PM
Figures - it takes Phaenyx a minute to understand the peculiarity of randomly falling asleep while walking.Not to mention, a look at the Fourth Forbidden Thought!
Phaenyx, who was sleeping on the other side of the lobby, sat up and yawned. “Man, that was a weird dream. Good nap, though. Strange place to fall asleep…but…wait, what happened?”
Posted Nov 24 2012 - 07:14 PM
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Edited by Keizah the Kaleidoscope, Nov 25 2012 - 01:52 PM.
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Posted Nov 26 2012 - 11:49 AM
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Posted Dec 11 2012 - 11:27 AM
Blog "A Cask of Amontillado": Breaking News
Posted Dec 11 2012 - 12:55 PM
I've taken to calling her "Meut" for short. I intend to show more with all the Division Heads and other Consortium leaders soon to make them more interesting, though due to the rules we won't see them battling all that much. Most of them have at least been seen by now, and Science Divison Head Contrivance will make an appearance during the Le-Isle arc. All that's left is Shock Trooper Division Head Kain--his Division will be involved on Ga-Isle, but I may give him an appearance during Le-Isle.
Chapter 36 has Genakex's battle against Stratoro and Chapter 37 will be Kytan's fight--both are written and I just need to get to typing them. Chapter 38 will be the start of Le-Isle!
Posted Dec 11 2012 - 04:07 PM
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]Well, this is strange. My post from earlier magically disappeared (or modgically?).[/color][/font]
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]Good thing the division head can't act on their own, otherwise Meutriere probably would have assassinated Kytan's group already (especially considering that she can apparently shoot targets half a continent away).[/color][/font]
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]And Meutriere's personality is brilliant. It seems that a lot of "assassin" characters in fan fiction tend to run their mouths too much, making it hard to believe that they went through the necessary training to be professional killers. Meut, on the other hand, seems to have a degree of professional detachment, as well as the patience for long stakeouts.[/color][/font]
Edited by Keizah the Kaleidoscope, Dec 11 2012 - 04:46 PM.
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Posted Dec 11 2012 - 04:31 PM
My thoughts exactly. I figured there should at least be a cannon reason why none of the Division Heads are let off the leash, other than "it would be a really short story otherwise".
Looks like Meut's a real fan-favorite! I'll keep that in mind going forward!
Posted Dec 20 2012 - 11:37 AM
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]Okay, Mahi trail: I just saw the Exo Vahki archetype in the spirit index, and I have to say that it's an impressive design. I love how most of them are fairly viable on their own, but gain new techniques in a fusion chain. Also, I guess we can add "Perfect Dispel" and "Fatal Wound" to the list of methods to kill Cain. [/color][/font]
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]Alright, back to the
future Kako. It's good to see that the Element Lords can still put up a fight against Kytan, although it seems that they might be trying harder in order to give Kytan a challenge.[/color][/font]
[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#006400;]Also, I'm geeking out over the additional background for Nuvakuta and Zagrin, as well as the implication that they could actually become stronger than the original Element Lords.[/color][/font]
Edited by Keizah the Kaleidoscope, Dec 20 2012 - 01:32 PM.
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Posted Dec 21 2012 - 01:17 PM
After the King Bohrok and the Seven Deadly Rahkshi, I figured the Vahki were due for a new look.
Well, Kytan's a tougher challenger, so it makes sense they'd try a little harder.
Since Nuvakuta and Zagrin and their family/ies have become so important, I figured I should at least toss them a mention in Kako. Adding Takashi and Samuko was done to make it seem a little more relevant.
Kako 38, the first chapter of Le-Isle, is fully written, I just need to get to typing it--should be up today or tomorrow. Not sure how my work will be affected over Christmas--I won't be having any relatives over, but I will be getting a few new games, so...
Posted Dec 29 2012 - 08:45 PM
God Mata Nui... Exo, can you channel living peoples spirits or something, cos that joke of Phaenyx's is something I'd say!
The Air-Lord seems a lotta fun, too And a very well written battle.
However, *looks sideways at Exo* would you have oh-so-happened to have made a minor reference to Origins?
Posted Dec 30 2012 - 11:51 AM
Sometimes even I do not understand my own powers...
As for an Origins reference...maybe...
Chapter 39 is almost done, will definitely be up this week!
Posted Feb 12 2013 - 06:28 PM
Indeed, it's a big moment for Xyla!
Chapter 42 is up, showing another conversation between Kytan and Tahra. I was going to hold on to what I reveal here until Ga-Isle, but I thought it made more sense to start here and go more in-depth later on. Hope you guys like it!
Posted Feb 13 2013 - 02:03 AM
With this chapter, you have cemented my suspicions, good sir! Fear not, however, I shalt not tell a soul what mine opinion is...
Amazing, I thought my typing processor would have a fit with that sentence...
In any case, yet another well... y'know what, every chapter you write is well-written. I'm gonna start randomizing words just to get outta that slump...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
E: Why so many new sentences, I know not...
Edited by Phoenixian Wraith, Feb 13 2013 - 02:03 AM.
Posted Mar 02 2013 - 04:31 PM
Feel free to take a guess, just know that I can't confirm a whole lot just yet.
Chapter 43 is finally up, sorry it took so long. I was hesitant since this finally shows us how Element-Lords transfer their titles, which is kind of important. It also introduces a new guest star, starting us on the next part of the Le-Isle arc.
Also, since we now have an official Jungle prefix, Flora-Isle is officially being changed to Bo-Isle.
And I might have a new Spirit ready soon.
Posted Mar 04 2013 - 06:32 AM
Oh dear Mata-Nui, what in the name of the High Council have I unleashed upon thine world?
Or, translated... What the heck have I created?
A rather exquisite look into the background of Elemental-Lord transferal too... though I'm glad Kytan set Phaenyx straight.
A marvelous chapter, indeed. And yes, this will be a test to see how many praising words I know.
Posted Mar 25 2013 - 04:39 PM
Sorry for the dealy, but Chapter 44 is finally up. It's mostly explanation about the castle and what the Consortium is doing there, so I'll try to be quick about Chapter 45 so you won't be in suspense too long!
Posted Mar 25 2013 - 09:49 PM
Another superb chapter, Exo. And it comes with it's own beautiful reference, haha.
Though I can't help but wonder if I've seen a character like [color=rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;]Contrivance...[/color]
[color=rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;]Still maintain there's a Afro'd skeleton in that mansion somewhere though.[/color]
Posted Jun 24 2013 - 04:44 PM
So much for quick...
I'm sorry it took me so long to get Chapter 45 up. I've made a serious dent into Chapter 46, though, so hopefully I can get a few more chapters out before my lack of motivation rears its ugly head.
Posted Jun 24 2013 - 05:16 PM
YES! Another chapter!
Found a error, though.
[color=rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;]Frieza dodged and moved in to punch, but win beams of energy came out of nowhere and struck him down.[/color]
[color=rgb(40,40,40);font-family:helvetica, arial, sans-serif;]Not sure what that's meant to be but yeah. Pointing that out.[/color]
That's right Xyla, mistakes are to be learnt from... though Zane seems paranoid of Ren.
Posted Jun 24 2013 - 05:22 PM
That's supposed to be "twin". Thanks, I'll fix that now.
Posted Jun 24 2013 - 09:35 PM
[color=#008000;][font="'times new roman';"]Glad to hear your motivation's back. I know that feeling of apathy better than I sometimes care to admit.As you often do, you adapted my vague ideas better than I'd expected. Ren and Trynahk turned out very well, especially Ren's advice to Xyla. [/color][/font]
Edited by Keizah the Kaleidoscope, Jul 05 2013 - 08:03 PM.
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Posted Jul 05 2013 - 06:03 PM
Thanks! Kako 46 is up, showing what happened to Zane and beginning another battle deep in the heart of the castle!
Posted Jul 28 2013 - 01:10 PM
Chapter 47 is finally up. Hoping to get 48 out soon, because I really want to be done with Le-Isle and move on with the story.
Also, with the Archives closing down, I need to come to a decision about what to do with Books 1 and 2. I made a proposal in my latest blog entry, but if you have any alternative ideas, please let me know!
Edited by Pahrak #0579, Jul 28 2013 - 01:11 PM.
Posted Dec 22 2013 - 10:17 PM
*blows dust off topic* Does this thing still work...?
Ahaha...it's been a while, hasn't it? Well, I've gone into detail and apologized about that over on my blog, so I'll skip that part. Kako 49 is finally up! Ren has a conversation with Riken to try to figure out some details about the castle, and Leanga has his first Orb Battle as Air-Lord.
Since I was...away from Bioni-Lords for such a long time, I'm sort of out of the swing of things, but I'm going to try to get back on-track and get the story rolling again. I'm a little concerned about how the rest of Le-Isle is going to go, but since Ga-Isle is a fresh arc, hopefully any lasting effects of my unintentional hiatus will have worn off by then. Although, as I mentioned previously, I've decided to make some rather large changes to the direction Kako is heading, so that might create a few holes...but I'll do my best to minimize that.
Posted Dec 10 2015 - 06:50 PM
Just posting a quick little message here for you, Pahrak...
Its been a long time, and still I read and re-read the first two and what little there is of book three. It has ALSO been a while since you, ah...Went off the grid due to writers block, I guess. In any rate/case, I am wondering.......Have you been wondering, why not just continue on with book 3...Making more chapters and everything, that is...You DIIIID leave us all on one of those Mata Nui be ###### cliffhangers, after all. I know I want that blasted C/h to be removed, in a manner of speaking: A new chapter, just so that the damnable thing is rendered void...I absolutely want to go fallout 3/New Vegas/4 on that cliffhanger with a mini-nuke...
Posted Dec 10 2015 - 07:26 PM
Well, this is unexpected. Thank you for still being interested!
Admittedly I have thought more about Bioni-Lords and what else to do with it, but after the official cancellation I typed up a series of posts infodumping all my plans for the remainder of Book 3 and beyond, so making a new chapter would feel a little pointless now that everything’s spoiled. I’m currently thinking about reworking the idea into a new series called “Amalgam Atlas”, but it’s still in the very early stages so I can’t say when I’ll be able to really start it. (All I have to show right now are two posts, though I have more I might make soon.)
I’m sorry for ending Bioni-Lords the way I did—I was under a lot of stress and feeling really discouraged, and a lot of that got funneled directly into Bioni-Lords. But, thank you for still remembering it so fondly! I'm glad to know that the series still means something to someone besides myself!
Posted Dec 10 2015 - 07:43 PM
Heh, it WAS a really good series, and in a way, still is, considering tha-waiiit a sec, uhhh...What was that guy who potentially still had that twilight sage stuff? I just remembered about that short story about how Vinxeng got turned into a Sage of Twilight Paths(WHYYY THE NARUTO SHIPPUDEN REFERENCE FAIL?!), and you said there was some person who still had it? Any luck about them?
Posted Dec 10 2015 - 08:17 PM
Oh, I completely forgot about that...um, to be perfectly honest, I don't recall who I sent that to. I might have the paper copy somewhere--if I find it, would you like me to type it up and PM it to you?
EDIT: I just found the paper copy! (Along with the paper copy of Zenrei's backstory chapter if that interests you.)
Edited by Pahrak #0579, Dec 10 2015 - 08:26 PM.
Posted Dec 11 2015 - 02:59 AM
Lawl, how Zenrei and uh...Kotoba met? Meh, I still got a virtual copy. And yeah, the paper copy would be nice to have. Btw, torterra picture? Niiiiiice. erslcayt ratrorte is my ervotafi pokemon. Yep. Try to work that out if ya dare!
Edit: Paper copy of teh twilight paths, plz...I STILL HAVE THAT REFERENCE ETERNALLY GOING THROUGH MEH GUD ###### HEAD! RWLRWLRWLRWLRWLRWL!!!(<Thats a reference too. MURLOC GODS ARE AWOKEN!!!!) Also, its bloody 3am for me...Living in FL has disadvantages when you're a gamer. My nose is officially going insane sniffles.
Further edit: I almost forgot to mention! Just let me know when its sent. You, uh...do still have the way to send it written somewhere, right?
And final edit...This is getting annoying: Oh, and can you make a short story about yume? I know everyone would like to know...Just who is Yume...And for that matter, I run through the spirit index a LOT. Haven't found out who would be the twilight space "Master" is by doing that, so, mind at least doing a few certain short stories? The people I REALLY want short stories of are, as follows: Yume, the other guy with a Bioniclekeyblades who's name I cannot EVER remember, and the 1st Element-Lords. It would be nice to know about those people...
Edited by ToaDraconixMahvi, Dec 11 2015 - 03:02 PM.
Posted Dec 11 2015 - 06:02 PM
Sure, I'll type it up and PM it to you--expect it sometime tomorrow!
As for Yume, I talked about her in one of the blog posts...it's actually sort of embarrassing, but, ah...back in the day, I wasn't sure what I was doing and decided to introduce a new mysterious character, and, for whatever reason, I decided to just transplant someone from a manga I was reading at the time. The official in-canon explanation is that in some alternate timeline of the Fruits Basket series, the world was destroyed and a character named Hanajima survived and ended up in Twilight Space, where her "Master"--a powerful interdimensional being named the Twilight Monarch--recruited her so that he could influence the Bioni-Lords world without directly interfering.
The other BionicleKeyblade-user would be King Syrag, a legendary figure from the Bioni-Lords world's medieval age who used a special technique to defeat a powerful enemy. Each of the Freres was going to have a powerful suicide attack, but it would be revealed that BionicleKeyblade's attack actually sent the user to Twilight Space instead of killing them. Syrag ended up there and became a guardian under the Twilight Monarch's command.
I liked the characters I was starting to build for some of the Original Element-Lords, so those people will probably show up in some form in the next iteration. I'd expect to see Norscu, Vitirus, Aile, and Zempyst make a comeback at the very least. As for new stories about them in the Bioni-Lords world...I'm a little hesitant.
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