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Bionicle X Heroes: Loss


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#1 Offline Kryst Cyclone

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Posted May 25 2012 - 10:23 PM

Firdaus "Ferd" Armstrong looked up, blood flowing from his wounds. Around him, people and BIONICLE alike are dying as both the human world and the BIONICLE World (more specifically Spherus Magna) are merging together due to the action of The Demon Prince Belial. The Demon Prince planned to merge both worlds together and cause utter chaos. Then, he will absorb the souls of the human race and the light of the BIONICLEs when they are at their weakest state, creating an unimaginable power that surpass even God. Currently, Nicholas N."NJ" Jackson aka Toa Kryst and Toa Lewa Nuva are fighting Belial, hoping to gain an upper hand. Ferd wished to help them but only Kryst and Lewa, who possess the 45th Seal of Solomon, can defeat Belial. Ferd has to make sure that Belial's demonic followers do not reach the stadium where most of the human survivors are hiding. Ferd looked around. At least a quarter of his force are killed or ran away. He looked around again and notice his partner, Toa Aqors, not around the area. Oh yeah, he though, She said she has to escort some survivors to the stadium. Then, at the corner of his eyes, he saw a familiar figure. Ferd stood up and walked towards the figure despite the other Toa, BIONICLE Toa or Earth Toa alike, were fighting against the demons. When he reached where the figure stood, he could not fight back the tears welling in his eyes. There stood Aqors, the same Toa of Water he partnered with, barely alive. Her armor was torn up and her Aqueous Dagger damaged beyond repair. Her heartlight was flashing rapidly, showing that her life is almost up. Suddenly, ambush! Demons got out from the shadows attacking Ferd from every corner. The worse part was Ferd was in human form. When the demons stopped their attacks, Ferd collapsed, greatly injured. As his life was flashing before his very eyes, Ferd only managed to utter a sentence," Sorry, i could not keep my promise," Then, he closed his eyes, this time for eternity. As Ferd felt as if his soul is drifted toward the light, a voice stopped him,"Wake up, Ferd. You still got a duty to perform," The voice is so familiar, it's Aqors' voice. "Remember your promise? You promise me that you will fight to see me smiling again,to protect my smile. Now it's time you protect everyone's smile. A Toa's duty, doesn't matter where he or she came from, is to protect the helpless so they could smile for another day. If you failed to perform your duty, how am I supposed to smile from The Light?" This gave Ferd strength as his soul was sent back to his body. Fighting against the pain in his body, he stood up, ready for battle once again. The demons charged towards Ferd as a shockwave stunned them. The very same shockwave came from the production of the MainFrame Driver on Ferd's abdomen. Taking the Hawk, Peacock and Condor memory Chips, he inserted them into the Driver and pressed the shutter. There were flashes as the Hawk, Peacock and Condor symbols appeared and then merged together into Ferd's chest, forming MainFrame's Central Frame. Then, there stood Toa MainFrame in Phoenix Form. In Phoenix Form, Ferd harnessed the powers from the Hawk, Peacock and Condor Memories. He could plan his next target using the Hawk Visor, fly and project energy feathers using the Peacock Torso and execute high-powered kicks using the Condor Legs. When the demons charged again, Ferd looked around, planning his next move using the Hawk Visor. then, using the Peacock Torso, energy feathers flew around, destroying most of the demons. He destroyed the remaining demons using the sharp edges provided by the Condor Legs. When the tide has changed and a huge explosion is heard, showing the defeat of Belial, Ferd cancelled his transformation, reverting back to human form. He turned back to Aqos' body, hoping to find a way to revive her but there is none. Ferd pressed his hands against her lifeless body,"Requiscat in Pace," he uttered as he turned to face a new world where he could protect the smiles of everyone, BIONICLE or human alike, as Aqos' last wish.
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#2 Offline Athmos

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Posted May 25 2012 - 10:47 PM

What? I did not get one part of that, sorry. First, did you mean, "Fred?" Not "Ferd?" Second, it was confusing to read. There was nothing to really tell us what was happening. I could see an epic maybe out of what little story you showed us, but I don't know, it was confusing.
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#3 Offline Kryst Cyclone

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Posted May 26 2012 - 07:25 AM

What?I did not get one part of that, sorry.First, did you mean, "Fred?" Not "Ferd?"Second, it was confusing to read. There was nothing to really tell us what was happening. I could see an epic maybe out of what little story you showed us, but I don't know, it was confusing.

Seriously, the guy's name is Ferd. Some of the human characters are actually my friends in reality. For example, Ferd is actually my Malay friend Muhammad Firdaus, "Ferd" is sorta his idea, since he knows I'm making a fictional series. Sorry if I confuse you.

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