T.o.a Episode L

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Alright this is my action/comady, you get a little mix of both so enjoy.T.O.A Part 1: The Treasure(Kongu looks behind him, so far so good. You never know what to expect when you raid one of the most dangerous temples in Metru-Nui, even one of the more dangerous ones in the whole Bionicle universe! You may ask why someone would go into a temple like this, you'd have to be an cool dude!)Kongu: Hey-Well okay maybe a bit...(That or a very devoted treasure hunter of course! You see this temple, the Temple of Antheon, besides having a reputation of danger, it also holds a rare and vauluable treasure, if you could retrieve it, you'd be set for life, and a very rich life as well!)Kongu: You read my mind...stop doing that.(Well Kongu had just tken the golden idol (that we "borrowed" from Indiana Jones) off the pedestal, he just made it past the first hallway when he reaches a small pit.)Kongu: (laughs) No match for the great Kongu!(Kongu jumps but falls in the pathetically small hole to his death. Then En- wait (narrirator switches scripts) I had the first draft, anway he makes the small jump just fine without a scratch.)Kongu: That's better, wow for a dangerous temple this is pretty lame. It's like they forgot the traps, vicous animals, and the epic music-(Woops sorry. just then the floor splits apart and are now sourounded by lava. 3 vorox also drop down for the ceiling and start chasing kongu as he hops across lava.)Kongu: (While running) You forgot-the epic-music!!(We had a tight buget and had to cut somethings out. Why are you breaking the fourth wall by talking to me all the time! Your not staying in character!)Kongu: Sorry, lets never talk again.(Well that's harsh...oh well, I can get back to the scene. Kongu nearly avoids a swipe from a Vorox as he jumps to the next platform. He then gets stoped by a rockey hill.)Kongu: No where to go but up!(No duh! Kongu climbs the hill with trouble. When he gets to the top a fire ball flys over his head and hits the vorox about to grab Kongu. That vorox lands on to of the other two and they all fall into the lava. The unkown hero holds out his red hand out to kongu and pulls him up. He then throws him to the ground.)Kongu: Some hero you are...HakannHakann: I try...to kill you!Kongu wow that's terrible grammar, did you not go to school?Hakann: No, I was too busy being a slave for an evil warlord! (Starts crying) I never could do anything I wanted to, ever in my life!Kongu: Hey don't cry, if it makes you feel better, I never went to school either. By the way that's really creepy how you smile when you cry.Hakann: really? You think I'm creepy?Kongu: i really do.(Hakann points his fire gun at Kongu who is still on the ground.)Hakann: That doesn't change the fact that you have something I want!(Hakann pulls out a tape recorder that plays Hydraxon saying " I beleive that idol belongs to me!")Kongu: It's sad how much you thought that through.(Hakann shrugs his shoulders and is about to pull the trigger when Thok comes running with only one foot, with three vorox chasing him, Hakann gets destarcted by Thok's missing foot and Kongu runs out of the temple safe and sound. Hakann then notices that vorox are chasing him and shoots one down.)Thok: Help he ate my foot!!(Thok freezes another Vorox and smashes it with his pickaxe. The last vorox spits up Thox's foot. Thok gives him and evil glare. The vorox chucks the foot back and forth between his hands and gives an evil laugh. He then throws it in the lava.)Thok: No!! You'll pay for that!!Hakann: Alright we'll both charge on the count of three.Thok: Wait on three or after three?(the vorox stares at the two cool dudes argue over if they should go on three or after three. The Vorox gets fed up and snarls at them.)Hakann: Three!!(neither of them move.)Thok: You where gonna betray me!Hakann: So where you!!Thok:...I have a missing foot so I-Hakann: Right sure you do, any way one two three!(hakann charges yet Thok stays back. hakann realizes too late and the vorox starts mauling him.)Thok: missing foot remember?(The vorox throws Hakann into the lava. Thok watches Hakann fall to his firery grave and then freezes the Vorox and pushes it/him/her into the lava as well.)To be continued...Tell me what you think i will be accepting GS and PGS.

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T.O.A Episode L Part 2: Set for LifeKongu: Whew that was close, hey narrator look what I got!Narrator: WoW (World of Warcraft)! And Wow you'll be set for life!Kongu: I know just like the title of this part!(Kongu looks at his idol once more. He takes sometime to just sit outside of the temple and look at his new prize, his multimillion prize...well if anyone would buy it off of him.)Kongu: (his smile drops to a frown) Oh...right...I forgot...someone has to buy it off of me...Pourquoi!!!!!(So Kongu was about to go to all the treasure collectors in the market untill he realized that going into that temple was illegal, and he was bound to get arrested. So he knew he had only one choice...Tarix, him and Tarix where on bad terms after Kongu tried to scam him with a fake treausre, yet if Tarix didn't report him then, then he probably wouldn't turn him in now, he'd probably attack him instead.)Kongu: Oh well, at least after he is done attacking me he will buy the treasure off of me...lets hope.(Kongu made his way to a small run down stand in the middle of the market. "Tarix is so cheap, he's the poorest treasure collector in the market." thought Kongu. he also thought that this was risky because the last thing he wanted to cause is a comotion, but konwing his history with Tarix that's bound to happen. he slowley walks up to Tarix.)Tarix: I'm gonna give you three seconds to get away from my stand.Kongu: Tarix, this time it's-Tarix: (Pulls out his blade) Did you not hear what I just said?Kongu: ...No.Tarix: I said I will give you thr-Kongu: I have it!Tarix: *sigh* What?!Kongu: I have the golden idol from the Temple of Antheon.Tarix: You're trying to hard Kongu...I already know you're trying to scam me and burn my house down again.Kongu: Listen I know I-Wait I never burned your house down!Tarix: You didn't? Oh well, um you might want to keep low for a bit then.Kongu: What did you- never mind. Anyway buy my treasure.Tarix: No!! (he throws his blade just nearly missing kongu and it hits someone behind him. Everyone is staring at the dead matoren and at Tarix. Tarix points to Kongu. Everyone starts trying to beat up Kongu except some people who are looting the dead matoran. Some people see these people looting and they start beating up them. Soon the whole market turns into a giant brawl and loot fest. Tarix opens a hatch behind him, and gestures for Kongu to follow, the both go down the stairs and enter a large, high-tech, labratory.)Kongu: Wow! for a cheap scape, this is pretty cool.Tarix: Yea. And about in the market, you defenitly might want to lay low for a while, you've got everyone after you, even me.Kongu: What! you killed the matoran!Tarix: Yea but...I'm a follower. http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.pngKongu: back to the idol.Tarix: Oh let me see it.(Kongu hands Tarix a styrofoam cup spray painted gold ith googely eyes. Tarix examins it for a while and then his eyes widen)Tarix: 2milKongu: Well that was actually a joke but okay sold.(Tarix crushes it with his hand.)Tarix: Woops! Oh no now it's useless. Sad thing is that someone would probably buy that for 2mil, that's a good joke.Kongu: I don't find that funny.Tarix: of course you don't, you're stupid remember?Kongu: i wasn't the won who fell for the paper cup!Tarix: I'm not the one that spells one, won.(Kongu holds back his tears as he hands Tarix the idol. He then thinks that if Tarix doesn't buy it that he can always hit him over the head with it. And if he does buy it, he'll hit him over the head with it anyawy. Tarix reaches into his drawer and pulls out five brief cases.)Tarix: Heh heh, briefs.Kongu: Is that!-Tarix: Yep 25mil.(Kongu faints. He then has a dream of him hitting Tarix over the head with a stack of 100 dollar bills. When he wakes up, he's in his house lying in bed with Tarix leaning over him making sure he's okay. tarix then sees he's awake and slaps him in the face.)Kongu: Ow! What was that for!Tarix: For your dream!(kongu then sees that he's lying in a brand new really fancy bed.)Kongu: You bought me a bed.Tarix: No, you did on your way here in your sleep.Kongu: Oh...now get out of my house before I smack you over the head with a stack of 100 bills.Tarix: I'm actually okay with that.Kongu: Please leave...I can buy ten lawers right now and prove that you poses an illegal idol.(Tarix runs for Kongu's door and leaves. Kongu then goes back to sleep when he hears a know on the door. He grabs a stack of 100 incase it's Tarix and opens the door. Standing there are Lewa and Onua and apparently Kongu has never seen them in his life.)Kongu: Who are you guys?Lewa: We're need to talk with you...Mr.Kongu.To be continued...

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T.O.A Episode L Part 3: The Organization(Kongu Opens the door to find Lewa, and Onua...and in this universe they aren't as reconizable as in the normal bionicle universe.)Lewa: We need to talk to you...Mr.KonguKongu: About what?Onua: In the past few days you ha-Kongu: Wait, first who are you guys.Onua: Here's a tip, look at the name before I speak.Kongu: I don't beleive that you're Onua.Onua: Well I am-Kongu: NO!!Onua: TrollKongu: Anyway what do you want with me?Lewa: We understand that you have come into contact of a rare treasure in the past 24 hours.Kongu: (Thinking: Oh great I'm gonna get arrested) I didn't steal it, kill a matoran at the market and/or burn down a treasure collecters house, have multiple arrest warrents, have attacked a cop.Lewa: Well not that we know of- Wait you attacked a cop and got away with it?Kongu: Let's find out!(Kongu pushes Lewa into Onua and runs past them. Since Onua takes his job too seriously he doesn't catch lewa and uses his rocket boosters (he is his mistika version) to charge into Kongu. Kongu starts over exaturating by rolling on the floor back and fourth screaming and Onua picks him up and pins him against a wall. Lewa walks over slowley.)Lewa: Thanks for catching me-Onua: Punch him!!!Lewa: ...why?-Onua: DO IT!!!!(Lewa punches Kongu in the gut and Kongu drops to the floor. Onua lets go of him and they back off. Kongu slowley stands up.)Kongu: Well aren't you gonna fi-Lewa: Listen we represent Trained Others Association, aka, T.O.A.Kongu: Others?Lewa: Others is a high organization that polices all the locations in the matoran universe, T.O.A trains Other soldiers to complete certain mission that are beyond, or below Other.Kongu: So T.O.A deals with missions that either Other can't do, or don't have time for.Onua: Basically.Kongu: That's kind of a dumb name, Others! (sarcasticly) How intimadating!Onua: Well all the cool names where taken by the Maori people or by children television shows.Lewa: They started out as Hero Factory! That's even lamer!Everyone: Hahaha! Hero Factory!!Kongu: (Wipes tear from eye) Anyway, hehe, So how does this tie in with my treasure?Lewa: Despite being illegal, that's not what we're here for, retrieving the treasure showed off you treasure hunting skills. We would like to recruite you for a retreival mission.Kongu: (Ponders) What if I say no.Onua: (Punches his hand).Lewa: We could turn you in for entering illegal property.Onua: Or (Punches his hand again).Kongu: Fine, I'll go with you, only if I get to keep my money.Lewa: Sure why not.Onua: We have a ship ready to take us to our base hidden in deep of metru-nui.(Three walk into the parking lot outside of Kongu's apartment. They walk to the good sized ship which looks massive compared to all the cars. An angry matoran walks up to the three toa.)Angry Matoran: Hey your ship takes up eight parking spots #####!Onua: Deal with it...Lewa: We really need a troll emoticon.Kongu: I concure.Matoran: I think that you should stop ignoring the fact that you look like total cool dudes parking a ship in the middle of a parking lot, I don't think that thing is even street legal!Onua: You're completly right...that's why it flys.(The three walk into the dropship and head off the the T.O.A base. The ship lands on a landing pad surrounded by armed toa guarding the perimeter of the base. They all walk out and a group of toa run up to Kongu and point their guns at him. Kongu covers his head with his hands.)Lewa: Relax, he's the one that we were sent out to get.(All the toa wallk away and apoligizie. Lewa, Kongu and Onua walk to a door where Lewa puts his hand on a scanner which grants him access to the building. They walk through a few hallways where toas and matoran are busy at work, only some greet our three toa. They eventually reach a briefing room. Also in this room are two toa at the back of the room. A red one, Sire (Pronounced: Sigh-er), and a black one, Nuparu Inika.)Nuparu: The new guy's here.Sire: Hmph, well it's irrelevent, he'll be used for this mission and then thrown back to wherever they found him.Nuparu: ...Sire: ...Nuparu: ...Sire: It's your turn to say something so end the part!Nuparu: I don't know how to!Narrorator: I will!! Gosh (mumbling) I have to do everything...(Kongu walks in and an awkward scilence comes over the crowed. Kongu studies the room from one end to the next. he has a really serious look on his face to look cool but he sees a green toa making faces at him and breaks out into laughter. Everyone looks at him like he's an cool dude. I wonder what Kongu can do to get out of this...)Sire: Thank you for ending it!Narrorator: You're very welcome my good sir.To be continued...