<Reverb> Posted May 31, 2012 Share Posted May 31, 2012 (edited) That Awkward Moment the name of this topic is spelled wrong.Welcome to:That Awkward Moment!The madness is here....The awkwardness will prevail, the normal will fall.K so here's the comics. xDSeason 1:1.Introduction...2.Backstories RockFiller 1. Announcements3.A Hero To Become4.Warning: Explosive Rahi5.Nightmare Factory: We Build Nightmares6..Defying Physics NEW!7.TheevilbutnotsmartbadguythatisineverycomicseriesNEW!GS and PGS Form:PM me this:The Kit you want for your character.(Any!)Name.Colour Scheme.A little bit about yourself.Easy as Pie.PGS:1.2.3.4.5.GS:1.2.3.4.5.Awards!:None! Credits to everyone here:http://www.majhost.c...bmr7.png (RZMK)here:http://www.brickshel...sprite.png (RZ)here:http://www.brickshel...t.png (Chimoru)here:http://www.brickshel...it_2.png (Razor)and here:http://www.majhost.c...orufansmash.pngThanks for looking! Hope to see you soon! Edited July 12, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 (edited) New Comic! Backstories RockCnC welcome, enjoy. Pwease post this time. :3~Gravity Edited June 4, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vataki Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 This is really not half bad for a first shot. (This is your first shot, right? ) There's always room for improvement, in this case, I'd specifically name the humor. Although, it's only two comics in, so I'm sure it will get better as it goes on.If I had to choose one thing I like the most so far, it's probably the title. It's nice to see you didn't just name it "Caiox's Comics" or something, and that there's a more or less creative title to the series.You're doing a good job so far! Quote naw man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 I see a lot of potential. I understand that you're only two comics in, but the further you develop the storyline (or don't, if it's strictly comedy), I think these will get a lot more views.These remind me so much of when I first started: I wish you luck! Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 This is actually my third try, but I got better. If you guys saw my first 2 attempts, you guys would cry at the look at them.~Gravity Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 Well, to new beginnings, eh?Can't wait to see the rest of the storyline! Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 Hey my new filler is up: Announcements Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 26, 2012 Author Share Posted June 26, 2012 (edited) New Comic! 3. A Hero To Become~Gravity Edited June 26, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 Ah yes, plot advancement.The only issue was that the text was sort of hard to read, but otherwise the comic was good. Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 27, 2012 Author Share Posted June 27, 2012 (edited) Quick huh?New Comic!4. Warning:Explosive Rahi~Gravity Edited June 27, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted July 1, 2012 Author Share Posted July 1, 2012 (edited) New Comic Up!Nightmare Factory: We Build NightmaresAlso, PGS,PG Form is up. Edited July 1, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted July 1, 2012 Author Share Posted July 1, 2012 New Comic!Defying PhysicsAlways wanted to do a comic like that. :3~Gravity Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~kh Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 These have quite the bit of potential. But there's several things you may want to deal with first.The later comics are rather...well, large. True, the panels are large in an of themselves, but there seems to be a lot of empty whitespace. Is there any way you can crop them down?Also, the text is kind of hard to read at times. From the way your comic layout works, I'd suggest seeing if you could implement a glow or outline to distinguish it more from the background. I'm not sure what program you use, but it shouldn't be hard to Google an answer.Otherwise, there's a bit of promise here. Keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted July 12, 2012 Author Share Posted July 12, 2012 These have quite the bit of potential. But there's several things you may want to deal with first.The later comics are rather...well, large. True, the panels are large in an of themselves, but there seems to be a lot of empty whitespace. Is there any way you can crop them down?Also, the text is kind of hard to read at times. From the way your comic layout works, I'd suggest seeing if you could implement a glow or outline to distinguish it more from the background. I'm not sure what program you use, but it shouldn't be hard to Google an answer.Otherwise, there's a bit of promise here. Keep at it.Thanks Kahi. I know these are problems, and I'm trying to fix them as fast as I can. Just trying to figure out how to do them with the mix of MSpaint, and Gimp. In the meanwhile, here's a new comic. Theevilbutnotsmartbadguythatisineverycomicseries~Gravity Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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