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#1 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 09 2012 - 08:20 PM

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Welcome to the Short Stories Critics Club!As many of you authors know, it can be difficult to get a lot of reviews in the Library here on BZPower. Unfortunately, we cannot provide a lot of reviews. Instead, we hope to provide something better: one in-depth review by one of our very own critics that will help everyone grow as a writer. After all, there's always room improvement and that is precisely the reason this small handful of kind and helpful BZP members have come together: To help others become better writers.

 

 

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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Civility: Number one on the list, this encompasses quite a bit, so read carefully. No rudeness to the staff. Easy enough. No posts or PMs asking about why your story hasn't been reviewed yet (if the week is not up – if it has been a week you may politely PM myself or Tolkien asking about the status of your review). This one will result in your request being thrown out and we will not accept any further requests for that story in the future. The same goes for begging and back-seat reviewing.[/color][color=#000080;]One Time, One at a Time: To be fair to other writers, we will not accept more than one of your stories at a time. This is to ensure while critics are handling other requests, we are not overwhelmed by a nearly exclusive number of your requests. Once you have received your review, you are more than welcome to return with another story to be reviewed. A short story will only be reviewed once by the SSCC.[/color][color=#000080;]OTC Short Stories: The SSCC takes Off Topic Culture requests, but only short stories.[/color][color=#000080;]Favoritism: Writers may not request a specific critic to review his/her story. If you want, you may PM them for a review and it will be at their discretion whether they have time or not.[/color][color=#000080;]Errors: We are not infallible. If you believe we have done something in error regarding your story, please feel free to contact us through PM. This includes polite questions about a request that has been active for over a week or reporting any grievances about an unsatisfactory review you received. We will try to remedy the situation as quickly as possible. [/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Issues: If you have any issues with a review or a critic, please PM me! We want to have complete customer satisfaction, so please do not hesitate to PM myself or Tolkien with any issues or concerns you have. Furthermore, if you believe a BZPower rule has been broken, then again please do not hesitate to PM myself, a Forum Assistant in the Short Stories forum, or any other staff member here.[/color][/font]

 

 

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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Critical info to all you authors, your post will contain the following or it will be disregarded. Type out the name of your short story, highlight it, and click the Link button above your post (the chains with the green plus symbol). Paste the URL of your short story in there. Follow with your name and you're all set. It should look like this:[/color][color=#000080;]My Story[/color] - My Name[/font][color=#000080;]Please note that having the link in your sig is not a proper substitute for the above format.[/color]

 

 

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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]The Short Stories Critics Club prides itself on its elite team of reviewers. Quality is our primary goal and we aim to succeed every time. If you are interested in joining our stellar team, please send one of the curators a PM titled "SSCC Application" containing the following:[/color][color=#000080;]Username: (put a link to your member profile here; it saves me the later trouble of having to edit this part of your bio whenever you change your username)[/color][color=#000080;]Current status: (Any written works of your own? Libraries? What stories [if any] are you working on right now?)[/color][color=#000080;]What I look for: (as a reader/reviewer, what do you look for in a story? Good grammar? Interesting characters? Descriptions? Good solid plots?)[/color][color=#000080;]Misc: (What do you do? What other Clubs are you in? What forums do you visit in BZP? Anything else you want to put in here; hobbies in real life, etc.)[/color][color=#000080;]Once we receive your PM and look over the details, you will undergo screening and asked if you are able to fulfill the guidelines set for our critics. If so, you will be asked to submit a mock-review for a short story of the curators' choosing. Once a decision is reached on the quality of your review, you will be contacted. If your review was unsatisfactory, we will give you tips on how to improve, and you will be given a second chance in 30 days. If you are rejected a second time, you may not reapply. Remember, only apply if you are serious about delivering in-depth reviews to requesters.[/color][color=#000080;]Probation Period: When a critic is hired, he or she will be a Probationary Critic until he or she has completed 3 satisfactory reviews. The exception to this is if the critic is recruited, in which case the probationary period is waived.[/color][/font]

 

 

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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]The aforementioned team of elite writers does their best to ensure optimal quality in every review. They are the motor behind our machine, and here you can learn a bit about them.[/color][/font]

 

 

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[font="'times new roman';"]Velox[color=#000080;]: [/color][color=#000080;]Current status: Currently I only have a handful of short stories posted here on BZPower. There were a few epics at one point that I started back in my beginning stages as a writer, but let's not talk about those, shall we? All of my at least good-ish-quality writing can be found in my library, The Shadowy Verge. I'll also occasionally post vignettes in my blog that may or may not get transferred to my library depending on how lazy I am. [/color][color=#000080;]What I look for: One of the main things I look for when reviewing a story is proper grammar and spelling. The first thing I'll do is comb through a story and point out any grammar or spelling flaws I find. Another big thing for me is characterization. Some people may tell you that I could rant for hours about characterization, and they'd be right. However, I do realize that with short stories characterization is often partially lost due to the shortness of the story (especially if it's a vignette), but I'll still usually mention something about it. I'll also usually mention something about the title or the opening of the story (or both) -- I believe that a strong opening is vital; something that grasps the reader's (in this case, me) attention right away. If I'm bored at the beginning of your story, it'll be harder for me to enjoy it. I'll also try to point out the other mechanics of a story, such as good dialogue, plot, originality, writing style, etc. I will also always try to point out in detail the things I liked and didn't like, as well as an explanation as to why. [/color][color=#000080;]Misc.: I love to write. I consider it my passion, more than just a hobby -- something that is, to me, simply something enjoyable to spend time on. Recently I've been trying to write more and more, thanks in part to and idea that John (better known as 55555) had where a group of us writers would write for fifteen minutes on a specific theme. Coupled with writing, I also love to read. Some of my favorite authors include Vince Flynn, Michael Connelly, Jim Butcher, Agatha Christie, J. R. R. Tolkien, and many more. I am currently a Forum Assistant here on BZP (awesomely in this very forum), a host of the Ambage, the co-curator in the ECC, and I previously held the position of curator for the CCC. I have hosted several short story contests here and hope to do more. Outside of BZP I enjoy ranting and rambling (which I also often do on BZP as well), watching movies and TV, talking about and being a part of religion and politics, etc.[/color][/font]

 

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Current status: I’ve written a handful of things—mainly short stories, with a couple of epics sprinkled in (only one finished though!). Check out my blog for a listing of them.What I look for: As both a reader and reviewer, I look mainly for originality when it comes to the plot of a story—something that grabs your attention and holds it. This might seem kind of basic, but you’d be surprised at how subtle writing can be in this respect. In a review, I try to evaluate both the structure of the writing (writing style) and the structure of the narrative itself, although I probably tend to focus on the former more than the latter. This includes elements such as description, dialogue, and the flow of the story—transitions, etc. Good grammar and spelling is always great too!Misc: I’ve tried various things in my time on BZP: art, blogging, etc. Writing is my main focus at the moment though, so I tend to lurk around the Library forums (mostly the Short Stories forum). I’m also a BZP Reporter, and a member of the Ambage. Favorite (modern) authors include J.R.R. Tolkien (if you couldn’t guess), Ursula K. Le Guin, C.S. Lewis, Arthur C. Clarke, and many, many more.

 

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NuileCurrent status: Writing is my passion. I write actively both on and off BZPower, from other types of fan fiction to the incipience of a professional career. All my BZP writings can be found in my sanctum.What to look for: When I read a story, I want proper grammar; but that's just a foundation. Built upon this base I want--well, everything. I want drama, romance, depth. But what I consider most crucial in any story is the prose that conjures its world and pulls me into it. I want descriptions to give me eyes; I want dialogue that gives me ears. I want prose that takes puts me in that world alongside the characters, experiencing everything they do. I don't want to read stories; I want to live them.Misc: In addition to writing and reviewing here on BZP, I am founder and co-host of the Ambage. In the physical world where I try to live when I can, my passion for literature extends from writing to reading and back again. I enjoy classics especially, and rarely read contemporaries. My genre is mystery; some of my favorite authors therein are Wilkie Collins, Dame Agatha Christie and Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Other passions include food and nature; from cooking to eating, from playing sports to climbing trees.

[color=#000080;]Yukiko:[color=#000080;]Current status: You can find my library here. Currently I am working on the third story in the Those Who Burn series, featuring Nuparu. By "working on," I mean "thinking about once in a while" but maybe someday soon I will get over my laziness and actually write something.[/color][color=#000080;]What I look for: The two big clinchers for me are good characters and good dialogue. As long as your plot makes sense, it’s fine with me. But an excellent story is one that brings the characters to life. I want to feel like I could have a conversation with them. Another important thing is economy of language: usually I will recommend one or two things you can cut just as examples, but I encourage you to always look over your work and find any unnecessary words before posting it.[/color][/color]ZaxvoCurrent status: A couple of years ago, I started an epic. It was fittingly bad, for a first attempt. I've always told myself that it'd be nice to reboot that story, but I simply haven't gotten around to it. Other than that, I wrote a couple of comedies and a handful of short stories, but those were all on the old forums. Since then I've sort moved on into non-Bionicle works, but I plan on getting back into writing soon enough.What to look for: I love a solid plot. No plot holes, believable characters, the works. It should all tie together, be convincing (not necessarily realistic, but convincing), and should just work. I also love believable characters. It doesn't really matter where the character starts, as long as everywhere they go as a character makes sense. (And that's my philosophy for what makes a good story.)Oh, and solid grammar is a must. I'll turn a blind eye to oen or two minor issues, but if the grammar is simply bad throughout the entire work, I'll let you know.Misc: I tend to frequent the BBC forum and the SS forum. I used to read a ton of epics, but again, that was before the massive downtime. Also used to be on the ECC, but not anymore. In my freetime I like to play video games (I've got a Wii and a 3DS. Yes, I'm a Nintendo fan. Sue me. If anyone wants to play some Mario Kart 7, check out the mario kart thread in COT). I also love reading and watching movies. Also trying to learn to play guitar. I'm a pretty friendly guy, if you have any questions or whatnot, feel free to pm me.

 

Zarayna:[color=rgb(0,0,128);] [/color][color=#000080;][color=#000080;]Current status: Zarayna is a fairly active writer of (mainly) fanfiction. He writes occasional Short Stories, and is working on an epic written as a philosophic inquiry to how the Great Beings creating rational souls while attempting to make machines. However, his main focus as of now is a complete rewriting of The Hunger Games series.[/color][color=#000080;]What to look for: There are different types of stories, and what Zarayna looks for is mainly contingent upon the type. For instance, if a story is focused mainly on an event, characterization is not in great demand. However, in stories that focus greatly on emotion, or a character, it is. Overall, Zarayna enjoys stories with good description, not overmuch length, realistic action and dialogue, and fairly good grammar. He is especially partial to stories of the Toa vs. Dark Hunter war.[/color][color=#000080;]Misc: Zarayna is a semiactive member of BZP, mostly hiding in Bionicle RPGs, Short Stories, and blogs. He is a member of the SSCC, as well as the founder of the now inactive RPGCC. He enjoys writing as a hobby, as well as archery and swordfighting. He is currently in highschool, and hopes to enter a seminary upon graduating.[/color][/color]

 

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Current status: I've written quite some short stories now, which I really like doing by the way, altough I'm planning to start a big epic saga soon. Also I'm doing some in-depth reviews for stories of friends: here and here are my works so far. Also I consider myself a semi-ative RP'er.

 

What I look for: Well, I really appreciate it if people take a canon event and give it a little twist(For Bionicle ones only). Also if a story blends well with the normal canon I'm most likely going to like it, so having canon mistakes in a story is in my opinion not that good. For all stories in general I like it if they have a good description of the surrounding and background. I don't mind spelling/grammar mistakes that much since I'm not really good at that too. But me being still on school will possibly help me detecting basic grammar/spelling faults.

 

Misc: I really have too much time in my life,so I'm doing quite a lot: I'm on the fourth grade of Belgian school. I like programming and modding Minecraft. As favourite topics on BZP are in order : S&T(I love Bionicle Canon), SS(I'm not really into long epics.) and General Art(Because I'm really not an artist and love seeing others do the stuff I'll never be able to do). Do my lot of time, I'll never enter my review too late or something. I also consider myself a quite good reporter of news and spam&such.

 

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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Receiving Strikes: If a critic does not complete their assignment within one week, they will receive a strike against them. This strike will be denoted on your critic bio as well. Please inform one of the curators within a day or two if you will be unable to complete the assignment on time, to prevent receiving a strike. If a critic accumulates three strikes he/she will be released. Simple as that. To reapply, the critic must wait two months. If a critic is released twice, they will not be allowed to return to the SSCC. Once again, please only apply if you can comply with the standards and regulations of the club[/color][color=#000080;]Removing Strikes: If you receive a strike, providing your record remains clean for the next 90 days, it will be removed and disregarded. Reviewing: Each critic is required to give a full, in-depth review. We encourage correcting the spelling/grammar as well as giving your thoughts on the plot, characters, etc. You must give positive feedback and constructive criticism. If you like the short story, tell the writer why. If you don't, tell the author why politely, and say how said author can improve.[/color][color=#000080;]Critic Civility: If you are rude to the curators, another critic, a requester, or anyone for that matter, you will be released and not allowed to reapply. No questions asked.Review Notification: Post in this topic once you've completed an assignment.[/color][color=#000080;]Extension Requests: A critic may request an extension on an assignment no later than 96 hours (4 days) from the initial assigning. A critic may not request an extension two assignments in a row. If you are going to be late on an assignment, it is your responsibility to contact one of the curators. Failure to notify one of the curators and request an extension within the 96 hour period will result in receiving a strike.[/color][color=#000080;]~ Velox[/color]Posted Image[/font]


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#2 Offline Toa of Dancing

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Posted Jun 10 2012 - 01:34 PM

Assuming you can do this, as all together they equal the length of a medium- to long-length short story:Bionicle Flash Fiction Compilation (Predictions of the Unpredicted, And Nothing Happened, Fight or Flight, Frosting, Not Everything, and Dirge) - Toa of DancingAlso, do you review CoT stories in addition to Bionicle?
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#3 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 10 2012 - 02:25 PM

Assuming you can do this, as all together they equal the length of a medium- to long-length short story:Bionicle Flash Fiction Compilation (Predictions of the Unpredicted, And Nothing Happened, Fight or Flight, Frosting, Not Everything, and Dirge) - Toa of DancingAlso, do you review CoT stories in addition to Bionicle?

We'll review three of those stories at a time, so for now I'll assign Nuile to "Predictions of the Unpredicted," "And Nothing Happened," and "Fight or Flight." After he posts his review you may request the other three. =]And yes, we do accept CoT stories. ----On that note:To those with flash fiction compilations: We will review your collection topics, but only three flash fiction stories at a time. When requesting a review, be sure to state which three you'd like to be reviewed. Once those three are reviewed, you may of course request another review; all other rules are the same. Those three stories must be flash fiction, however. Of course, it is entirely up to the critic if he or she wishes to review more than three, but please only request three at a time. Thank you!Posted Image

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#4 Offline Grantaire

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Posted Jun 10 2012 - 08:23 PM

Yes! CoT stories accepted at last! Thanks for putting that in.I just realized that I'm the only person to write their bio in third person. :-|Anyways, requesting a review for:An Assassin's Reflections by Zarayna.
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#5 Offline Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

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Posted Jun 10 2012 - 08:55 PM

Today . . . I am a critic!Glad to be here, glad to be reading stories penned by those who share my passion, and glad to say . . .

Assuming you can do this, as all together they equal the length of a medium- to long-length short story:Bionicle Flash Fiction Compilation (Predictions of the Unpredicted, And Nothing Happened, Fight or Flight, Frosting, Not Everything, and Dirge) - Toa of Dancing

We'll review three of those stories at a time, so for now I'll assign Nuile to "Predictions of the Unpredicted," "And Nothing Happened," and "Fight or Flight." After he posts his review you may request the other three. =]

Reviewed, as requested.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:


Edited by Nuile: The Daft Wordbender, Jun 10 2012 - 09:00 PM.

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#6 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 10 2012 - 09:08 PM

An Assassin's Reflections by Zarayna.

Assigned to myself. And thanks for the prompt review, Nuile (as well as reviewing more than you had to -- much appreciated!). Posted Image

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Posted Jun 11 2012 - 11:41 AM

I'd really like, if possible, to ask someone to do a review of MILCOM Transcript N.293-7-840 - Emile A239Since it's an "experiment", I'd love to see how it works on Critics. I was minding to do another of the same type, so it would be very important to me. Thanks in advance!

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#8 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 11 2012 - 11:45 AM

I'd really like, if possible, to ask someone to do a review of MILCOM Transcript N.293-7-840Since it's an "experiment", I'd love to see how it works on Critics. I was minding to do another of the same type, so it would be very important to me. Thanks in advance!

Assigned to Cederak, but please use the proper requesting format next time as outlined in the main post. Posted Image

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Posted Jun 11 2012 - 11:48 AM

I'd really like, if possible, to ask someone to do a review of MILCOM Transcript N.293-7-840Since it's an "experiment", I'd love to see how it works on Critics. I was minding to do another of the same type, so it would be very important to me. Thanks in advance!

Assigned to Cederak, but please use the proper requesting format next time as outlined in the main post. Posted Image

Oh, whoops, sorry. Fixing that, if possible.EDIT: Done! Sorry again, I was writing fast.

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Posted Jun 11 2012 - 10:27 PM

MILCOM Transcript N.293-7-840 by Emile A239 has been reviewed. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. :)-Ced
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#11 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 12 2012 - 01:22 AM

And An Assassin's Reflections, by Zarayna reviewed.Posted Image
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Posted Jun 12 2012 - 08:23 AM

I'd like to request a review, if it isn't too much trouble. =)Time by #firstworldtyler.-Teezy
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#13 Offline The Renegade Emperor

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Posted Jun 12 2012 - 09:43 AM

MILCOM Transcript N.293-7-840 by Emile A239 has been reviewed. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. :)-Ced

Thanks to you for having been so fast!

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Posted Jun 12 2012 - 02:43 PM

I'd like to request a review, if it isn't too much trouble. =)Time by #firstworldtyler.-Teezy

No trouble at all, thanks for requesting! Assigned to our newest critic, Proud Stigma. Posted Image

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Posted Jun 12 2012 - 08:16 PM

I'd like to request a review, if it isn't too much trouble. =)Time by #firstworldtyler.-Teezy

No trouble at all, thanks for requesting! Assigned to our newest critic, Proud Stigma. Posted Image

My review of Time by #firstworldtyler is up, thank you for choosing the SSCC.

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Posted Jun 13 2012 - 01:15 AM

Okay, if my math is correct (please let it be correct; I am in high school after all), you guys don't have any requests right now. So, if it isn't too much of a bother, I'd like to have three of my entries for the Flash Fiction contest be reviewed. Hopefully it's okay to ask for reviews from different compilation topics...Arrival - DespairLoss and Departure - DespairThanks!
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Posted Jun 13 2012 - 01:56 AM

Okay, if my math is correct (please let it be correct; I am in high school after all), you guys don't have any requests right now. So, if it isn't too much of a bother, I'd like to have three of my entries for the Flash Fiction contest be reviewed. Hopefully it's okay to ask for reviews from different compilation topics...Arrival - DespairLoss and Departure - DespairThanks!

Yeah it's fine. Assigned to Tolkien.Though also, you can still request things even if we have other requests. I'll update the first post if we're ever not taking requests, but with this new system, I doubt that'll ever happen, or at least not any time soon. =]Posted Image

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Posted Jun 13 2012 - 09:30 AM

Thank you so much again, Nuile, for the excellent reviews. =3 Now then...Average Days; Death, Riches, and the Package; and Not Alone - Toa of DancingI used semicolons so as to avoid confusion in listing. =P
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Posted Jun 13 2012 - 11:16 AM

Thank you so much again, Nuile, for the excellent reviews. =3 Now then...Average Days; Death, Riches, and the Package; and Not Alone - Toa of DancingI used semicolons so as to avoid confusion in listing. =P

Assigned to Yukiko. Thank you for choosing the ECC, Toa of Dancing. :)-Ced

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Posted Jun 14 2012 - 12:31 PM

Thank you guys for reviewing so well and so fast. =3
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Posted Jun 14 2012 - 11:52 PM

Departure, Loss, and Arrival, by Despair--all reviewed.JRRT
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#22 Offline Despair

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Posted Jun 15 2012 - 12:10 AM

Thanks so much for the great feedback and speedy reviews!
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#23 Offline Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

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Posted Jun 15 2012 - 05:15 PM

I respectfully request a review for:Gold and Silver Remembrances, by Nuile: Lunatic WordsmithAnd I'd also like to ask that my story be reviewed by that second fellow on the critics list. Oh, dear, wait, I'm not allowed to ask for specific critics, am I? Never mind.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:


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#24 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 15 2012 - 05:20 PM

I respectfully request a review for:Gold and Silver Remembrances, by Nuile: Lunatic WordsmithAnd I'd also like to ask that my story be reviewed by that second fellow on the critics list. Oh, dear, wait, I'm not allowed to ask for specific critics, am I? Never mind.

From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:

In this case I'll make an exception. You can review your own story if you want. =PBut in all seriousness, assigned to Jedi Master J. =]Posted Image

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Posted Jun 16 2012 - 02:16 PM

Writer CederakHey guys, if you have some time, could you please take this request? Thanks!Scourge - Cederak-CedSSCC Co-Curator CederakYes, we can handle that right now, actually. I'll be assigning it to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC, Ced, we hope to see you again! :)-CedWriter CederakAll right, awesome! And you'll definitely be seeing more of me, you guys always do such amazing work with your critiques.-CedSSCC Co-Curator CederakWell, we certainly try our best. ^_^-Ced(I have a feeling I'm going to spend the next couple months convincing some people I don't have dissociative identity disorder.)
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#26 Offline L'Etranger

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Posted Jun 16 2012 - 08:36 PM

Well then, let's try out this new-fangled Critics Club. You've always impressed me in the past.Liberator In Black and Gold - D.A.V.E. (aka Lord Darkon)-Gotham's Ultimate Criminal Mastermind
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#27 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 16 2012 - 08:48 PM

Well then, let's try out this new-fangled Critics Club. You've always impressed me in the past.Liberator In Black and Gold - D.A.V.E. (aka Lord Darkon)-Gotham's Ultimate Criminal Mastermind

Assigned to Tyler Durden. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]Posted Image

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#28 Online Parks and Rekt

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Posted Jun 16 2012 - 09:21 PM

Liberator in Black and Gold has been reviewed.-Teezy

Edited by #firstworldtyler, Jun 16 2012 - 09:23 PM.

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#29 Offline L'Etranger

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Posted Jun 16 2012 - 09:23 PM

Thank you for being kind enough to provide a review of my work. Your critic's expert words will be much appreciated.
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#30 Offline Yukiko

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 03:43 PM

Average Days; Death, Riches, and the Package; and Not Alone by Toa of Dancing has been reviewed.I apologize that I'm the only one who didn't get their review in a day after I was assigned. I fear I shall be soon known as the procrastinator. =PI'd like to request a review.Gifts~YukikoThanks guys. ^^
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#31 Offline Cederak

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 04:18 PM

Average Days; Death, Riches, and the Package; and Not Alone by Toa of Dancing has been reviewed.I apologize that I'm the only one who didn't get their review in a day after I was assigned. I fear I shall be soon known as the procrastinator. =PI'd like to request a review.Gifts~YukikoThanks guys. ^^

Well, since your review was so wonderful, I think we have some time for a critic-based request. I'll notify Zarayna that he'll be handling the assignment. Thank you much, Yukiko. :)-Ced

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 07:06 PM

Gifts has been review. Great story, I recommend it. It's especially when you listen to When you believe from The Prince of Egypt (thanks Aderia).
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#33 Offline Yukiko

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Posted Jun 17 2012 - 07:29 PM

Average Days; Death, Riches, and the Package; and Not Alone by Toa of Dancing has been reviewed.I apologize that I'm the only one who didn't get their review in a day after I was assigned. I fear I shall be soon known as the procrastinator. =PI'd like to request a review.Gifts~YukikoThanks guys. ^^

Well, since your review was so wonderful, I think we have some time for a critic-based request. I'll notify Zarayna that he'll be handling the assignment. Thank you much, Yukiko. :)-Ced

Waaaa thanks. I kind of want to give you all virtual hugs now. *hugs*

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#34 Offline Toa of Dancing

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Posted Jun 18 2012 - 09:03 AM

Thanks, Yukiko. Next request:Finality, Mad Science, and False Alarm - Toa of DancingI expect rather harsh reviews on all, even though I quite like the middle one myself. XD
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Posted Jun 18 2012 - 11:19 AM

Thanks, Yukiko. Next request:Finality, Mad Science, and False Alarm - Toa of DancingI expect rather harsh reviews on all, even though I quite like the middle one myself. XD

Rather harsh? Don't be so negative, ToD. Unless you don't consider these your best work. :P In any event, Proud Stigma will be handling the request. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. :)-Ced

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Posted Jun 19 2012 - 12:08 PM

And would you look at that! Writer Cederak, I present to you my review of your story. Thanks for choosing the SSCC. Co-Curator Cederak, I've reviewed Scourge, by Cederak. Thanks for curating the SSCC.
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Posted Jun 21 2012 - 02:22 AM

If there is any critic aviable, I would be grateful if someone reviewed:What lies behind the wall? - Mr. HydeThank you in advance.
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#38 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 21 2012 - 03:07 AM

If there is any critic aviable, I would be grateful if someone reviewed:What lies behind the wall? - Mr. HydeThank you in advance.

Yep, we have plenty of critics available. I'll be handling this request personally, as I'm next on the list. Thank you for choosing the SSCC, Mr. Hyde. =]Posted Image

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Posted Jun 21 2012 - 11:39 PM

Bit of an older story of mine, but I'd like a review of Turning Point (by Knock Out, of course ^^), if it's no trouble.
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Posted Jun 21 2012 - 11:41 PM

As requested, I have reviewed "Gold And Silver Remembrances". Thank you for choosing the SSCC. Posted Image"I'm a heartbreaker...My name...Charles."
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