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#361 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 05:45 PM

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 


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#362 Offline Zaxvo

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 12:57 PM

Woah, this took me a while, but here're the reviews for Climbing the Tree of Life and Rock, Paper, Scissors. And with that, I believe the charity reviews are completely concluded.
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#363 Offline Grantaire

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 08:45 PM

Prelude to Darkness reviewed.


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#364 Offline badabababa obesity

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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 07:16 PM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi


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#365 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 01:47 AM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi

 

Assigned to...myself. Thanks for choosing the SSCC!


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#366 Offline Dual Cee

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 11:15 AM

117 Reviewed


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#367 Offline Tyler Durden

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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 11:28 PM

 

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 

 

 

Byawwwwwww.

 

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and again, pathetic confusion.

 

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dorian, you aint changed.


#368 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 28 2013 - 01:55 PM

"The Best Catch" reviewed.


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#369 Offline The Phantom Terror

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 11:04 AM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?


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#370 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 12:52 PM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tolkien. =][/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]And geh, I'm really sorry about that! Tolkien and I were really busy with other projects, and then I just completely forgot. >_< I'll try to talk to Tolkien ASAP and get back to you! Really sorry again about the wait. [/color][/font]


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#371 Offline The Phantom Terror

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Posted Jul 04 2013 - 08:59 AM

Averted Trial has been reviewed has been reviewed.


Edited by Wasp, Jul 04 2013 - 09:00 AM.

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#372 Offline Tolkien

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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 11:14 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]"Find the Power", by Wasp hath been reviewed.[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]JRRT[/font]


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#373 Offline L'Etranger

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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 09:14 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]


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#374 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 11:50 AM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Nuile. [/color][/font]


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#375 Offline Nick Silverpen

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Posted Jul 25 2013 - 08:13 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!


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#376 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 07:30 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Oops, sorry for the delay--assigned to Yukiko.[/color][/font]


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#377 Offline Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 11:06 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]With a brushing-off of dust and creaking of rusty hinges (has it really been little more than a month?) my review is complete:[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Jon Osterman's [/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);]Ozymandias[/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);].[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:[/color]


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When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . .

 

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I know I am ready to start my voyage.

 

A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books?


#378 Offline Grey Snow

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 05:04 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji


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#379 Offline Velox

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 09:29 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! [/color][/font]


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#380 Offline Mel

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 10:11 PM

Truth at the Fingertips has been reviewed.


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Posted Aug 10 2013 - 09:46 PM

For the Glory of the Arena is reviewed.
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Posted Aug 16 2013 - 04:27 PM

Could you guys please review this?

 

Also, how's that hiring process coming?


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Posted Aug 21 2013 - 05:02 PM

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]


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#384 Offline Velox

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Posted Aug 22 2013 - 02:27 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Sorry for taking so long for this. [/color][/font]

 

Could you guys please review this?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Dual Matrix. [/color][/font]

 

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tyler Durden. [/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Thank you both for choosing the SSCC![/color][/font]


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Posted Apr 14 2014 - 09:50 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob


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"You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant."
 
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LAST DESTINY, starring an Agori and a Turaga
 
DESCENDANT, starring Kraata-Kal and Makuta Teridax
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THE END OF THE BROTHERHOOD, starring Tobduk and Makuta Chirox

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Posted Apr 17 2014 - 12:05 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob

 

I forgot about this topic...but assigned to myself as I'm not sure who/if anyone is still active besides Nuile. I'll have your review for you within a week. =]


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 10:22 AM

Ah, yes, I hadn't noticed how desolate it was. If this club is defunct, you needn't bother.


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"You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant."
 
-- Harlan Ellison
 
Short Stories:
 
LAST DESTINY, starring an Agori and a Turaga
 
DESCENDANT, starring Kraata-Kal and Makuta Teridax
AN EVEN EXCHANGE, starring the Makuta of Stelt
THE END OF THE BROTHERHOOD, starring Tobduk and Makuta Chirox

#388 Offline Velox

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Posted Apr 30 2014 - 01:54 AM

To all Short Story writers: Unfortunately, as is obvious, this club hasn't been very active as of late, and due to inactivity and the lack of demand, it's time for this incarnation of the SSCC to be shut down. We've had a great run, and it's been my honor to be a part of several incarnations and even curate a couple. I'd like to thank all the critics and my co-curators for making this club possible, and to everyone who requested reviews, as it has been our pleasure to provide them. I also owe a great deal of thanks to Cederak, my partner in crime for many years, who has been absolutely invaluable to the SSCC and library as a whole.  

 

If anyone is interested in seeing a new critics club or even running one themselves, please feel free to PM the library staff, as if there's enough interest I'm sure something can be worked out. 

 

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