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#361 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 05:45 PM

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 


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#362 Offline Zaxvo

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 12:57 PM

Woah, this took me a while, but here're the reviews for Climbing the Tree of Life and Rock, Paper, Scissors. And with that, I believe the charity reviews are completely concluded.
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#363 Offline Grantaire

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 08:45 PM

Prelude to Darkness reviewed.


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#364 Offline Al the Chicken Man

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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 07:16 PM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi


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#365 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 01:47 AM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi

 

Assigned to...myself. Thanks for choosing the SSCC!


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#366 Offline Dual Matrix

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 11:15 AM

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#367 Offline LONG LIVE TYLER

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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 11:28 PM

 

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 

 

 

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#368 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 28 2013 - 01:55 PM

"The Best Catch" reviewed.


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#369 Online The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 11:04 AM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?


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#370 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 12:52 PM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tolkien. =][/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]And geh, I'm really sorry about that! Tolkien and I were really busy with other projects, and then I just completely forgot. >_< I'll try to talk to Tolkien ASAP and get back to you! Really sorry again about the wait. [/color][/font]


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#371 Online The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Jul 04 2013 - 08:59 AM

Averted Trial has been reviewed has been reviewed.


Edited by Wasp, Jul 04 2013 - 09:00 AM.

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#372 Offline Tolkien

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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 11:14 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]"Find the Power", by Wasp hath been reviewed.[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]JRRT[/font]


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#373 Offline Prodigal

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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 09:14 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]


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#374 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 11:50 AM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Nuile. [/color][/font]


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#375 Offline Nick Silverpen

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Posted Jul 25 2013 - 08:13 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!


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#376 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 07:30 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Oops, sorry for the delay--assigned to Yukiko.[/color][/font]


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#377 Offline Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 11:06 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]With a brushing-off of dust and creaking of rusty hinges (has it really been little more than a month?) my review is complete:[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Jon Osterman's [/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);]Ozymandias[/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);].[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:[/color]


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#378 Offline Lord Koji

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 05:04 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji


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#379 Offline Velox

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 09:29 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! [/color][/font]


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#380 Offline Yukiko

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 10:11 PM

Truth at the Fingertips has been reviewed.


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#381 Offline Zaxvo

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Posted Aug 10 2013 - 09:46 PM

For the Glory of the Arena is reviewed.
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#382 Online The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Aug 16 2013 - 04:27 PM

Could you guys please review this?

 

Also, how's that hiring process coming?


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#383 Offline Rhaegar Targaryen

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Posted Aug 21 2013 - 05:02 PM

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]


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Posted Aug 22 2013 - 02:27 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Sorry for taking so long for this. [/color][/font]

 

Could you guys please review this?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Dual Matrix. [/color][/font]

 

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tyler Durden. [/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Thank you both for choosing the SSCC![/color][/font]


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Posted Apr 14 2014 - 09:50 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob


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#386 Offline Velox

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Posted Apr 17 2014 - 12:05 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob

 

I forgot about this topic...but assigned to myself as I'm not sure who/if anyone is still active besides Nuile. I'll have your review for you within a week. =]


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