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#361 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 05:45 PM

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 


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#362 Offline Zaxvo

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 12:57 PM

Woah, this took me a while, but here're the reviews for Climbing the Tree of Life and Rock, Paper, Scissors. And with that, I believe the charity reviews are completely concluded.
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#363 Offline Grantaire

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Posted Jun 18 2013 - 08:45 PM

Prelude to Darkness reviewed.


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#364 Offline Al the Chicken Man

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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 07:16 PM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi


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#365 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 01:47 AM

The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi

 

Assigned to...myself. Thanks for choosing the SSCC!


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#366 Offline Dual Cee

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 11:15 AM

117 Reviewed


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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 11:28 PM

 

Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing.

 

Revenge - SonicBOOM XS

 

Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! 

 

 

Byawwwwwww.

 

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#368 Offline Velox

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Posted Jun 28 2013 - 01:55 PM

"The Best Catch" reviewed.


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#369 Offline The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 11:04 AM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?


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#370 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 02 2013 - 12:52 PM

Could someone review Find the Power?

 

And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tolkien. =][/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]And geh, I'm really sorry about that! Tolkien and I were really busy with other projects, and then I just completely forgot. >_< I'll try to talk to Tolkien ASAP and get back to you! Really sorry again about the wait. [/color][/font]


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#371 Offline The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Jul 04 2013 - 08:59 AM

Averted Trial has been reviewed has been reviewed.


Edited by Wasp, Jul 04 2013 - 09:00 AM.

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#372 Offline Tolkien

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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 11:14 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]"Find the Power", by Wasp hath been reviewed.[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]JRRT[/font]


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#373 Offline Kilgore Trout

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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 09:14 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]


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#374 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 11:50 AM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ozymandias - Jon Osterman[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Nuile. [/color][/font]


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#375 Offline Nick Silverpen

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Posted Jul 25 2013 - 08:13 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!


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#376 Offline Velox

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 07:30 PM

Just wondering if I could get a review for

 

"Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen.

 

Thanks!

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Oops, sorry for the delay--assigned to Yukiko.[/color][/font]


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#377 Offline Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa

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Posted Jul 27 2013 - 11:06 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]With a brushing-off of dust and creaking of rusty hinges (has it really been little more than a month?) my review is complete:[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Jon Osterman's [/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);]Ozymandias[/color][color=rgb(0,128,0);].[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,0);]Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith :smilemirunu:[/color]


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#378 Offline Lord Koji

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 05:04 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji


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#379 Offline Velox

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 09:29 PM

It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews).  I'm mostly curious if it was a good read.

 

For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! [/color][/font]


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#380 Offline Yukiko

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Posted Aug 03 2013 - 10:11 PM

Truth at the Fingertips has been reviewed.


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#381 Offline Zaxvo

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Posted Aug 10 2013 - 09:46 PM

For the Glory of the Arena is reviewed.
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#382 Offline The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Aug 16 2013 - 04:27 PM

Could you guys please review this?

 

Also, how's that hiring process coming?


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#383 Offline Rhaegar Targaryen

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Posted Aug 21 2013 - 05:02 PM

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]


Edited by Mr. House, Aug 21 2013 - 05:06 PM.

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#384 Offline Velox

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Posted Aug 22 2013 - 02:27 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Sorry for taking so long for this. [/color][/font]

 

Could you guys please review this?

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Dual Matrix. [/color][/font]

 

[color=rgb(0,0,128);]Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read?[/color]

 

"Go"- [color=rgb(0,0,128);]Mr. House[/color]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Assigned to Tyler Durden. [/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Thank you both for choosing the SSCC![/color][/font]


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Posted Apr 14 2014 - 09:50 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob


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New short story:
 
DESCENDANT, starring Kraata-Kal
 
Older stories:
 
AN EVEN EXCHANGE, starring the Makuta of Stelt
 
THE END OF THE BROTHERHOOD, starring Tobduk and Makuta Chirox

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Posted Apr 17 2014 - 12:05 AM

"An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob

 

I forgot about this topic...but assigned to myself as I'm not sure who/if anyone is still active besides Nuile. I'll have your review for you within a week. =]


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Posted Apr 18 2014 - 10:22 AM

Ah, yes, I hadn't noticed how desolate it was. If this club is defunct, you needn't bother.


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New short story:
 
DESCENDANT, starring Kraata-Kal
 
Older stories:
 
AN EVEN EXCHANGE, starring the Makuta of Stelt
 
THE END OF THE BROTHERHOOD, starring Tobduk and Makuta Chirox

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Posted Apr 30 2014 - 01:54 AM

To all Short Story writers: Unfortunately, as is obvious, this club hasn't been very active as of late, and due to inactivity and the lack of demand, it's time for this incarnation of the SSCC to be shut down. We've had a great run, and it's been my honor to be a part of several incarnations and even curate a couple. I'd like to thank all the critics and my co-curators for making this club possible, and to everyone who requested reviews, as it has been our pleasure to provide them. I also owe a great deal of thanks to Cederak, my partner in crime for many years, who has been absolutely invaluable to the SSCC and library as a whole.  

 

If anyone is interested in seeing a new critics club or even running one themselves, please feel free to PM the library staff, as if there's enough interest I'm sure something can be worked out. 

 

~ Velox

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