Grant-Sud Posted August 6, 2012 Share Posted August 6, 2012 The ArtistCan I get this reviewed if that's fine? Kinda short. :B The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 6, 2012 Author Share Posted August 6, 2012 The ArtistCan I get this reviewed if that's fine? Kinda short. :BOf course! I'll assign it to Jedi Master J. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 Might as well start a trend then: Surrounded, Alone by Valixia. Assigned to Nuile.Yes, sir, ma'am, sir! *salutes* Reviewed, as per request and assignment, thank you for choosing the SSCC. I think I'll further this trend. I would like to request reviews, please, for three individual pieces of flash fiction, found in this compilation: The Chimera, The Right Path, and Feel Good. Assigned to--oh, wait, I can't continue that part of the trend. Oh, well, my gratitude, then.From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 Might as well start a trend then: Surrounded, Alone by Valixia. Assigned to Nuile.Yes, sir, ma'am, sir! *salutes* Reviewed, as per request and assignment, thank you for choosing the SSCC. I think I'll further this trend. I would like to request reviews, please, for three individual pieces of flash fiction, found in this compilation: The Chimera, The Right Path, and Feel Good. Assigned to--oh, wait, I can't continue that part of the trend. Oh, well, my gratitude, then. From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith I passed my appreciation of your wonderful review on to Cederak - he informed me what a welcome part of the SSCC you are. He also said something about your request being assigned to Zaxvo and that he thanks you for choosing the SSCC. I'm not really too big on trying to figure out all the critic jargon, but I'm sure you can decipher Ced's code words for yourself. Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 So for flash fiction, I do a review of the three pieces? Just checking. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 11, 2012 Author Share Posted August 11, 2012 Yep. A review for the three ones he requested, since, being FF, the reviews shouldn't take as long. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 Right. Well, those reviews are done. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted August 14, 2012 Share Posted August 14, 2012 As requested, I have reviewed "The Artist". Thank you for choosing the SSCC. - JMJ 2012 **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted August 14, 2012 Share Posted August 14, 2012 (edited) Jedi Master J said if I had any complaints with his review, that I should let you guys know immediately.Okay I'm done. He did a great job and was able to put a good amount of detail into a short story so short. lol Thanks a ton guys! Edited August 14, 2012 by Grant-Sud Rises The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riisiing Moon Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 A Tale of Makuta--Riisiing Moon.My entry for the LSO SSC LOL ABBREVIATIONS. Thanks in advance! "I admire your style, which is colorful, if monochromatic." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 A Tale of Makuta--Riisiing Moon.My entry for the LSO SSC LOL ABBREVIATIONS. Thanks in advance!Assigned to Tyler Durden. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted August 19, 2012 Share Posted August 19, 2012 The Descent - Lord DarkonHaven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 19, 2012 Author Share Posted August 19, 2012 The Descent- Lord DarkonHaven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture.Assigned to Proud Stigma. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted August 19, 2012 Share Posted August 19, 2012 Visitor by ValixiaAssigned to Velox. Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lord Of Wednesday Posted August 21, 2012 Share Posted August 21, 2012 (edited) The Descent- Lord DarkonHaven't written a short story in a while, and I would love your very useful advice on this venture.Assigned to Proud Stigma. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! =]Review complete.Thanks again for choosing the SSCC. Edited August 21, 2012 by Proud Stigma Divinator of Dreams.This Is Proud Stigma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:Letter from a prey - The Renegade EmperorSomething different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted August 24, 2012 Share Posted August 24, 2012 (edited) Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:Letter from a prey - The Renegade EmperorSomething different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance!I'll be handling your request personally. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. EDIT: Done. Edited August 25, 2012 by Valixia Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 Alright I'd like to get The Last Guardian reviewed please. And thank you! The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 Alright I'd like to get The Last Guardian reviewed please. And thank you!Well...since you said please, I'll go ahead and assign this to Tolkien. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 25, 2012 Author Share Posted August 25, 2012 Visitor by ValixiaAssigned to Velox.Reviewed. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 Uh, if possible, I'd take a request. I'd like some advice of my newest work:Letter from a prey - The Renegade EmperorSomething different from my usual style, so I'd like to see how it affects Short Stories Critics. Thanks in advance!I'll be handling your request personally. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. EDIT: Done. Even if you didn't like it that much as I intended, thank you so much! Your words have been precious and I'll surely keep at it. Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Ray Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:The Golden Age - by X-Ray X-Ray "Though one may be overpowered, two can defend themselves. A cord of three strands is not quickly broken." - Ecclesiastes 4:12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 25, 2012 Author Share Posted August 25, 2012 I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:The Golden Age - by X-Ray X-Ray Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 (edited) What We Create-YukikoYay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^ Edited September 4, 2012 by Yukiko There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 29, 2012 Author Share Posted August 29, 2012 What We Destroy-YukikoYay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^Assigned to...well, you're next in the list, so I'll assign it to the next critic: Jedi Master J. haha. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 What We Destroy-YukikoYay, formatting. I just loved going through this and replacing all my quotation marks and apostrophes and ellipses and em dashes since the BBcode turned them in to garbled messes. <<Well anyway, it's a large chunk of text and I really appreciate if someone would tear it apart. ^^Assigned to...well, you're next in the list, so I'll assign it to the next critic: Jedi Master J. haha. Thank you for choosing the SSCC!He reviewed my last story...but I suppose I'm not allowed to request someone else. ._. Oh well, thanks anyway. ^^ There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 I would humbly request this new story of mine to be reviewed:The Golden Age - by X-Ray X-Ray Assigned to Nuile. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =]Reviewed, and please come again, Mr. X-Ray, sir.From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 The Last Guardian, by Grant-Sud Rises...reviewed.JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 Two things:First, requesting a review ofSafe and Sound - ZaraynaAlso, I expect to be back from my hiatus sometime in October. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 Two things:First, requesting a review ofSafe and Sound - ZaraynaAlso, I expect to be back from my hiatus sometime in October.Sometime in October? Well, good to hear. I'll have Yukiko take care of this request. Thanks for choosing the SSCC. Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 Correction, I'm back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted September 5, 2012 Share Posted September 5, 2012 (edited) As requested, I have reviewed "What We Create". Thank you for choosing the SSCC. He reviewed my last story...but I suppose I'm not allowed to request someone else. ._. Oh well, thanks anyway. ^^Ma'am, I believe you are mistaken. I don't believe I have review any of your works before this point. If my review is not to your liking though, feel free to send me any criticism by PM or here, if you so desired. - JMJ 2012 Edited September 5, 2012 by VI. Zexion **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 (edited) Reviewed and recommended! ^^ Edited September 8, 2012 by Yukiko There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 Curiosity-ReznasThanks in advance!-Rez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 Curiosity-ReznasThanks in advance!-Rez...You waited five minutes after posting that to bring it to us? Well, okay - call in the specialists early I suppose. Zaxvo will be handling the assignment. Thanks for (making no delay in) choosing the SSCC! -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riisiing Moon Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 A Bench--Riisiing MoonHere so soon after postage 'cause it's for an English assignment, so I'm hoping to get a review semi-soon. "I admire your style, which is colorful, if monochromatic." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted September 9, 2012 Author Share Posted September 9, 2012 A Bench--Riisiing MoonHere so soon after postage 'cause it's for an English assignment, so I'm hoping to get a review semi-soon. Well, I'll assign your review to Tyler Durden. Thank you for choosing the SSCC. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted September 10, 2012 Share Posted September 10, 2012 Curiosity-ReznasThanks in advance!-Rez...You waited five minutes after posting that to bring it to us? Well, okay - call in the specialists early I suppose. Zaxvo will be handling the assignment. Thanks for (making no delay in) choosing the SSCC! -CedAnd I've done that one. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted September 15, 2012 Author Share Posted September 15, 2012 Attention fellow critics, authors, BZPower members, requesters, etc.:The Charity Initiative has begun. What does this mean? The SSCC Critics will now be assigned one charity review per week. These are completely free of charge, and are given simply to help out our fellow authors on BZPower, stimulate activity within the writing presence of BZPower, and sharpen the skills of our critics. If you have any questions, comments, concerns, etc., please feel free to PM me! Critics, I have also sent you a PM on the matter. Please reply to it to let me know that you understand ASAP (also feel free to ask any questions/etc.). If you did not receive a PM, please PM me ASAP. Zaxvo, I was not able to PM you, so please either PM me or email me at andrew.page99[at]gmail.com so I can send you the information. =] Thank you, everyone, and I look forward to starting this initiative with my fellow critics to stimulate activity! ~ Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted September 20, 2012 Author Share Posted September 20, 2012 (edited) Charity Initiative Assignments! I know it's not technically Wednesday any more, but I haven't gone to bed yet, so I count that as still "today" haha.Velox: Shadows, by The Shouting GodNuile: Inside by Jedi Knight KrazyYukiko: Within Temptation by ZaraynaJedi Master J.: Anathain by IronheartZaxvo: Long Way Down by Legolover-361Tyler Durden: How Could I? by Legolover-361Proud Stigma: [has already been assigned reviews in order for him to complete his probationary period]I simply took the oldest 5 short stories posted in COT. Once every COT story has received a review, we will move to the Short Stories forum. Please remember to state that you are from the SSCC when reviewing. Reviews are due by Wednesday, September 26th. Edited September 27, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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