The Lonesome Wanderer Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 Nekron is pulling a "Come to the dark side" combined with "Take the shot, I dare you" moment. EPIC. Quote "Go beyond the impossible, and kick reason to the curb! That's how Team Gurren rolls!"BZPRPG PROFILES Exo-Force RPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 Nekron is pulling a "Come to the dark side" combined with "Take the shot, I dare you" moment. EPIC.Reminds me of Batman Begins a bit. Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted August 18, 2012 Author Share Posted August 18, 2012 ... No comment...Having a mental conundrum trying to contain the whole story and its turns...Trying to determine what Inc will do......-Scratch Nekron is pulling a "Come to the dark side" combined with "Take the shot, I dare you" moment. EPIC.Good to know I'm in the right forum, then. Reminds me of Batman Begins a bit.Everything reminds you of Batman, Wotz.- Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 Everything reminds you of Batman, Wotz.- VorexIt's the reference this epic deserves, but not the one it needs right now. Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted August 18, 2012 Author Share Posted August 18, 2012 Everything reminds you of Batman, Wotz.- VorexIt's the reference this epic deserves, but not the one it needs right now.No. Just... no. - Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 As usual, Vorex threw in some new characters, had Inc act completely out of character from the last time we saw him, and referred to the end of the world half a gazillion times. :PHe also included some action and plot twists, and tried to bring the Time-Keepers back together to give the story something remotely resembling coming full circle. (Read it as Vorex the author (). Although, if you read it as Vorex the character, it's kinda funny)And having plot development or character development for the sake of plot development or character development is not a recipe for good writing. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted August 23, 2012 Author Share Posted August 23, 2012 As usual, Vorex threw in some new characters, had Inc act completely out of character from the last time we saw him, and referred to the end of the world half a gazillion times. :PHe also included some action and plot twists, and tried to bring the Time-Keepers back together to give the story something remotely resembling coming full circle.(Read it as Vorex the author ( ). Although, if you read it as Vorex the character, it's kinda funny)And having plot development or character development for the sake of plot development or character development is not a recipe for good writing.I don't see any new characters. Any currently existing characters have been referred to previously (even the 'True Mystix', who might be seen as new characters, were referred to in the prologue of Shadows). Incommodo isn't acting completely out of character -- if you look back to the prologue of DM:PI, he had already started on this way.Full circle? What's this about a full circle? We're not even finished with the first part yet... - Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 Bit 1: Hooray for extensive apocalyptic destruction!Bit 2: So why did Nekron get hurt if only the lower class ones get hurt when their host does?Bit 3: Owned.... you killed the world.” Erm... That was kind of a lame line to end on. Couldn't he have said 'ended the world' or 'destroyed the world' or something less meh? Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 Oi! Don't knock it, Wotz! This chapter was brilliant! Pure brilliance! I'm guess we now have to deal with some new consequences... Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 Bit 1: Hooray for extensive apocalyptic destruction!Bit 2: So why did Nekron get hurt if only the lower class ones get hurt when their host does?Bit 3: Owned.... you killed the world.”Erm... That was kind of a lame line to end on. Couldn't he have said 'ended the world' or 'destroyed the world' or something less meh?I disagree, those two lines that you offered are much too cliché. I like the line that Vorex gave. Quote profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted August 26, 2012 Author Share Posted August 26, 2012 Okay, I'll just post, it's obvious I'll never manage to get an even number of replies. :lol:About the last line: Look back to Inc and Reich's conversation near the end of DM:PII.@Wotz:1: Indeed.2: They can feel pain, but what happened to Nekron happened for very specific reasons. Have a look at the changes and then look back on DM:PII.3: As I said, Inc and Reich's conversation. Also, what Kal said.@Scratch: Thankyou, and wait and see...@Kal: I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks so. :PAlright people, I hope you're all looking forward to the next chapter -- because starting now, plot armour means . (I will happily accept bets on the first to die)- Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted August 28, 2012 Share Posted August 28, 2012 Nikarra. I'm just throwing caution to the wind at this point. I stopped trying to see what will happen around chapter 9, so anything from here on out is a surprise to me. Feel free to share my history with the younger gentlemen, Vorex. - Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Could it be? An actual chapter posted? Over a month late?Well, I've been busy, but Chapter 13's finally up, with quite a few changes made to it compared to my original plans. But, still. NEW CHAPTER.(also, yes, I'll admit, his death may have been a little predictable)- Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 (edited) Proditor... What a way to go...Anyway, back to the review. AMAZING return to form (and it figures you'd start out by killing a main character!)And the rift between Incommodo and Pirok continues to widen! Meanwhile that sneaky chronicler,(as I call him), continues to get his facts wrong.Wait... is it me or does Nekron seem a bit like Smith from The Matrix now? And what is the true nature behind Terror glitch and there are MORE of the Society of Shades?In conclusion, fantastic return chapter. Just, please don't make us wait too long for the next one!-Eredar Edited September 30, 2012 by The Archaic Predicament Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Yep -- just about the same way he went last time. :PIt's what I do. His name is Elax, seeing as everyone keeps forgetting it. ;)League of Shades, and I'm glad that you picked up on that little reference. I've made a few other references to the Matrix here and there, as well.Also, I thought you'd have the nature of the glitch figured out now, from all the clues I've been dropping...I'll try not to. - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 My memory of the plot is hazy due to the massive gap. Shame Proditor died, that didn't even need to happen Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Actually, Wotz, I think you'll find that it really did... - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 As long as you don't kill Pirok I'm content :3 Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 1, 2012 Author Share Posted October 1, 2012 As long as you don't kill Pirok I'm content :3Yeah, about that... - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 (edited) As long as you don't kill Pirok I'm content :3Yeah, about that... - Austin Powers... NOOO!! Edited October 1, 2012 by The Archaic Predicament Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 (edited) *Dramatic music* Well it looks like everything is drawing towards its curtain call.'The Glitch'. Not very informative, but interesting regardless.To space? SPACE? SPAAAAAAACCCCEEEEE!! Back to business, I can't wait to see how this plan turns out!-Eredar Edited October 1, 2012 by The Archaic Predicament Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 Wait...You aren't-You're actually going to- Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 1, 2012 Author Share Posted October 1, 2012 @Scratch: Actually, it's very informative. The scene with Xylak tells you a heck of a lot about the plot.(also, double posts make me cry, and break the BZP rules. Don't double-post)@Wotz: Ooh. Ooh. Ooh. Lady. Ooh. Lady. Let's go to space!- Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 YOU KILLED HIM YOU MONSTERRAAAAHHHH*ahem*I am greatly displeased that you killed off Pirok in this most recent chapter. Not even spaceTM could fix the hole left in my heart by the death of Pirok.May I ask why he had to die? :'( Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 3, 2012 Author Share Posted October 3, 2012 YOU KILLED HIM YOU MONSTERRAAAAHHHH*ahem*I am greatly displeased that you killed off Pirok in this most recent chapter. Not even spaceTM could fix the hole left in my heart by the death of Pirok.May I ask why he had to die? :'(You may ask, and you will be answered, if you look back at previous chapters and think about recent events. If that doesn't work for you, just wait for the final chapter of Part I, and all will be explained.No comment on Horror's name? - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 (edited) Wait... PIROK!!!The Mistix retreating? Somethings up...Inc stranded, the others go their seperate ways, meanwhile a game of shadows is played behind the scenes...The final chapter of Part I BETTER be EPIC!-Scratch Edited October 5, 2012 by The Archaic Predicament Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 5, 2012 Author Share Posted October 5, 2012 Wait... PIROK!!!The Mistix retreating? Somethings up...Inc stranded, the others go their seperate ways, meanwhile a game of shadows is played behind the scenes...The final chapter of Part I BETTER be EPIC!-Scratch...How did you know that I was planning to have the next chapter be the last one in Part I? (or, the second-last)*backs away, slowly*Not all of the Mystix -- just Zarnarax, who engineered the deaths of other Mystix and planned to escape with Aclaraung, who disappeared after beginning the battle between the Mystix and the Shadows, who are now pretty much invincible.Also, I get it, everyone is sad because Pirok's dead. Don't worry, you'll feel better soon... - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 Also, I get it, everyone is sad because Pirok's dead. Don't worry, you'll feel better soon... bring him back plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 You killed off Pirok.Wow. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 6, 2012 Author Share Posted October 6, 2012 You killed off Pirok.Wow.'Killed off' is such a stro- Yes, I killed off Pirok. - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 You killed yourself off.That's like ...It came completely out of nowhere. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 11, 2012 Author Share Posted October 11, 2012 You killed yourself off.That's like ...It came completely out of nowhere.Well, I did warn you guys that people would die. - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 Well, I did warn you guys that people would die. Pirok was more than just people D: Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 11, 2012 Author Share Posted October 11, 2012 Well, I did warn you guys that people would die. Pirok was more than just people D:Hey, just wait for part two, I guarantee that you'll be feeling better. - Austin Powers Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 I can't believe Pirok died but Frustro survived.Also it seems like Inc's character development is all for nothing now that he's just gone back to being all fourth-wall-break-y.On the other hand the ArkNik shenanigans were tres enjoyables. Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 I can't believe Pirok died but Frustro survived.Also it seems like Inc's character development is all for nothing now that he's just gone back to being all fourth-wall-break-y.On the other hand the ArkNik shenanigans were tres enjoyables.Cowards always live.No, it wasn't. He went like that for a little while while he was unconscious, but he went back afterwards.ArkNik... I like it! We're making that a thing! - Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 (edited) Greatest. Penultimate chapter. Ever. Of all time. Not even kidding. I mean we start out with the arrest of Nikarra and Arkrak. Incommodo, who it appears has finally begun talking to himself. Enough said. Frustro is threatened be an unknown assailant, who gives him a very clear warning. And all the while, Nekron prepares his endgame. WOW. Looking forward to the next installment. -Eredar Edited November 3, 2012 by The Archaic Predicament Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 Greatest. Penultimate chapter. Ever. Of all time. Not even kidding. I mean we start out with the arrest of Nikarra and Arkrak. Incommodo, who it appears has finally begun talking to himself. Enough said. Frustro is threatened be an unknown assailant, who gives him a very clear warning. And all the while, Nekron prepares his endgame. WOW. Looking forward to the next installment. -EredarWell, the thing about unknown assailants is that they always reveal themselves shortly afterwards and spoil the sense of mystery. Yay! Endgame. Nekron is such a villain. - Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 7, 2012 Share Posted November 7, 2012 ArkNik is an amusing pairing.I still support Arkcommodo. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 9, 2012 Author Share Posted November 9, 2012 ArkNik is an amusing pairing.I still support Arkcommodo.Yeah, I was going for that. Arkommodo will never be beaten. Ever. Best OTP.- Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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