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#1 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 12:58 PM

#logantocomics on facebook

 

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Season one

The house

Smack in da face

Guilt trip

Lego lovers

The storm I

The storm II

Girls and guys

Noisy present

Good cat?

Lovins

Bad dreams

LOLWUT?

Snicker

Terren

family reunion

the attic

New Mask Saga

preview

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7

(end of new mask saga)

Just call us parents!

Fridge raid

A place to stay

TV obsessions

Peanuts, arrows, and snipers

A title

Kalarezka quadrilogy

1, 2, 3, 4

(end of kalarezka quadrilogy)

Birthday spirit

 

Season two

Got that power?

Soarin' thru D skiez

The New Mask: Project V2

1, 2, 3, 4- just text (may make a comic soon)

(end of project V2)

KOTU VS SNICKER

1, 2, 3, 4, 5 ,6 ,7 ,8

 

Silly snake

sweet wevenge

Add

Delays!

Loga sense

A party in Pink

Haters gunna hate

 

Parallel

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PGSs (CLOSED FOR SEASON TWO)

soran

reznaz

snicker

giggles requested removal

RG

Tecnokua

Flaredrick

TNG

Malignus

Terren

Gavla

Tahu2014

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Have a good day!

Thanks to: Soran, My PGSs, My Brain, Friends and family, Paint.net, Justax-Kal, And myself.Oh and Oneker for being in Dr. Who.


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#2 Offline Leraku

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 01:11 PM

Okay... unfortunately, not much good to say about this. For starters, some of the character's colors look like they were taken from the default MS Paint color pallet. Then there's the background - there's no shading to add detail, but this can be excused. However, the line distinguishing the floor from the wall is too thick, and it looks odd. The couch looks decent, however, with no shading, it also seems to ruin that fact. Also, the speech bubble looks too smooth to match with the rest of the comic, thus making it seem... well, a little strange on the eyes. Other than that, i commend you for choosing Razor - i don't think there are any on-going comic strips at the moment that use the Razor sheet, so, nice choice on that. Also, i suggest that you should quickly get two more strips up - the best way to start a comic is to have at least three strips, so as people can get a good idea about what the comic is like/is about/how it looks in general. Unfortunately, at the current moment, this says nothing about the comic other than the fact that a couch is miscolored. Good luck, though, an aspiring comic maker is always welcome.


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#3 Offline Soran

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 01:15 PM

Since you just started (and theres only one comic) I can't really judge much from it but anyway, the pixelated background actually looks fitting surprisingly. I'll be able to judge more about it with more comics, so I hope to see more soon. I'll keep an eye on the comics,~Soran
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#4 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 04:16 PM

thanks leraku and soran. love your comics.
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#5 Offline Axilus Prime

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Posted Jun 24 2012 - 08:30 PM

Haven't seen a Razor comic in ages. That's a new one. Or perhaps an old one?Decent attempt at spriting a couch bending from the pressure of one sitting in it in the middle area, but humor is a bit lacking.Keep trying! No comic maker starts out amazingly!
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#6 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jun 25 2012 - 09:39 AM

New comic!http://www.brickshel...in_the_face.pngThis new comic introduces Brutico, he is crazy and his favorite food is pizza flavored icecream... and I think he broke my leg...

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#7 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jun 25 2012 - 08:36 PM

New Comic!!!http://www.brickshel...ganto_hello.pngThis comic makes me happy.
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#8 Offline Axilus Prime

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Posted Jun 25 2012 - 08:53 PM

I must stress the humor desert problem here. Too much randomness is a bad thing. One thing most good comic makers do is put a storyline that has jokes in it, for a cohesive, yet funny, and not too random comic. The door slamming, to be honest, was not that funny. The Y U SMACK DOOR IN MY FACE Was slightly better, but you really need to take our advice, while you still can. Don't make a habit of doing what you're doing right now.
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#9 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 11:54 AM

http://www.brickshel...yface/legos.pngnew comicPS: this is all about randomness. random is funny to me. and I hope you.
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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 09:33 PM

It's a rarity that first tries are awesome. And, unsurprisingly, this is no different. Keep working at it though. It only goes uphill from here.Oh, and randomness is soooo 2006 :P
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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 10:49 PM

All right, you did it! Awesome! I wasn't expecting that. Creepy how Brutico would be anywhere near his bathtub though... O_oBest comic you've ever made. Keep it up! Randomness as a plot device, just like I said many times before. This is precisely what I meant.
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#12 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 10 2012 - 01:54 PM

wow! I thought I did good, but not as good as you say! thank you very much!!! :sigh:

Creepy how Brutico would be anywhere near his bathtub though... O_o

Btw, it is a huge bin, I have one at home, 90% full, mostly bionicles. :updown: Booyah.

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#13 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 10 2012 - 03:31 PM

new comic!NVM

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#14 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 11 2012 - 09:40 PM

new comic!http://www.brickshel...face/da_pow.png
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#15 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 10:24 AM

new comic!http://www.brickshel...ling_heads2.pngno more razor. sorry

About the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps.

thanks!

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#16 Offline Soran

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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 01:34 PM

That was entertaining. Its funny for me because of how true it is. Nice effect in the last panel by the way. I also liked the "previously on LTLM" panel at the top. Its a great idea to include when your doing story arcs.Great job on the comics and keep up the good work,~Soran
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#17 Offline Felinuva Toa of Felines

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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 02:30 PM

About the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps.
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#18 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 05:59 PM

new comic!http://www.brickshel...pyface/gfvg.pngI dont know how... anyway, my GF kotu is here.

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#19 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 07:36 PM

new comichttp://www.brickshel...isy_present.pngkitten!
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Posted Jul 12 2012 - 09:46 PM

Nice kit switch. You should probably double size everything though. EVERYTHING. Panels, sprites, everything. OH KARZ THE FOURTH WALL WAS BROKEN METEORS--Second comic was funny. I've done that before, though in a less ridiculous way.Third comic is why I don't have pets. No, really, it is.
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#21 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 13 2012 - 09:03 AM

I put him there for fun. I like cats.done. and. done.....MWAhahahhahhahahahaha!meow. :3new comic!http://www.brickshel...face/lovinz.pngRESPECT
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Posted Jul 13 2012 - 10:48 AM

new comic!http://www.brickshel...ling_heads2.pngno more razor. sorry

About the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps.

thanks!

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#23 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 13 2012 - 11:22 AM

yup.
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Posted Jul 13 2012 - 11:32 AM

Love your comics so far, the humor is pretty good so far.Good job, bro. :)
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#25 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 14 2012 - 09:44 AM

Sup, new comic.http://www.brickshel...n_da_wowald.png
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#26 Offline Soran

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Posted Jul 14 2012 - 11:46 AM

The kitten appears to have brainwashed Loganto! That diabolical cat, messing with our minds. I'm starting to wonder what the cat's purpose is in the story. Perhaps its a talking, sarcastic cat. That could prove interesting. Or its just a cat... Either way, nice comic, but it appears to be lacking a little in humor.~Soran
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#27 Offline Axilus Prime

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Posted Jul 14 2012 - 07:13 PM

I see you took my advice to double-size everything. Definitely looks better, and does justice to the kit. (Chimoru R's details do not show well in small size.)The owner is really the cat's pet. That's why I don't like them XDYep. Brainwashing. NEVER trust a GLOWING, FLUORESCENT CAT.
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#28 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 02:31 PM

heheheh. well. did you know brutico has a bad snoring problem? New comic.http://www.brickshel..._bad_dreams.pngOK, My PGS Comic is almost done!

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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 01:14 PM

OMG that last comic has happened to me so many times. D:
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#30 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 05:13 PM

lol, terra is in my new comics!but first....http://www.brickshel...ace/snicker.png BOROMIR!
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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 07:11 PM

The classic madhouse intro. Nice work.I knew most girls wouldn't like living in a comic setting...
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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 08:08 PM

*barf* HOT DOG? WITH FAKE CHEESE? EEEEEEWWWW!!!!! THAT'S GROSS!!! With that outta the way, great job.The whit sox *shutter*
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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 08:42 PM

Every thing in that comic would anger/sicken my sister in real lifeYou are my new best friend
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#34 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 24 2012 - 11:47 AM

why thank you. anyway... my new comic! http://www.brickshel..._nuva_comic.png
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Posted Jul 24 2012 - 09:13 PM

New comic?http://www.brickshel...face/lolwut.pngI blame snuggle wuggles for this.
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Posted Jul 25 2012 - 05:59 PM

He needs to get paid for that doorman job. XDHowever, you may want to tone down the randomness.Ok, screw toning down the randomness! I just read the other comic, and that was hilarious and unexpected. Nice work.
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#37 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 27 2012 - 02:33 PM

haha. terra nuva REQUESTED randomness... yet he is cool and collected... and sarcastic.... hmmmmmmmmmm.......
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Posted Jul 27 2012 - 03:14 PM

You're comics aren't too bad but I think you could try and develop your characters a bit because so far none of them seem too unique. As far as graphical changes I can't really see anything I think you should improve other than learn how to make actual speech bubbles.
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Posted Jul 27 2012 - 07:19 PM

New comic!!!http://www.brickshel...milyreunion.pngBTW... Like my new mask?<---

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Posted Jul 28 2012 - 12:26 AM

Lol. As long as you don't have to share your room, eh? Looks like Loganto has quite the bad luck streak. Brutico wasn't smashed at all!
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