Axilus Prime Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 Whoa, didn't expect this to show up here too!So then, every birthday he must battle Kalarezka to live another year, along with other stuff like saving Matoran? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 (edited) Actually Alaxus, long before my comics, this guy, kalarezka, was a soul eater back when I was a toa. I had been of two elements, Air and plantlife. The soul eater stole the souls of all Le-koro, so I sacrificed my air elemental abilities for them. stealing the souls back from kalarezka, and returning to matoran form. Yet, a debt must be payed. for eternity, I must dual him every birthday, otherwise, brutico is going to find me soulless on my bedroom floor. No one elce knows about this but me.and those tho are wondering:nalhasayit xa fesh hososh eis xa hotafhogh dahie hashea - this is in the ancient words of the great beings.Open the gates to go to the relam of the soul stealer - what it means Edited November 12, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 Ah, so a more serious story arc? I'd like to see you try your hand at it. It could be interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 Ill try to add some zing, put no promeses. or however you spell it. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 New comic.A battle, a death, and a truth. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 I didn't know Loganto could fire energy waves...Your graphics have improved, but there's a glaring flaw in Kalarezka's finishing move.How do you stab someone in that manner...with a scythe? I did not see that Snicker bit coming. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 (edited) what are you calling a bit? ummmmmmm.... nevermind.a circular swing and a push. that is how it got in there.thankyou for graphics compliment, i'll look at that. aw dangit. forgot about that.yep he can!thankyou! goodnight! Edited November 12, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 I find it funny how you answered everything in the opposite order that I said it...Anyway, that's a rather awkward move to make. Oh, and since it looks like you're using GIMP, don't use the pencil tool for blood. Use the brushes that look like stains, but in red. It looks more like blood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 nope, still on paint.net. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 Then use the brush or the airbrush/spray can. Pencil is not good for blood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 Make room for the newest great being in town, 'cuz it's tomorow!THEREFOREnew comic! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 12, 2012 Author Share Posted November 12, 2012 Nope, ever scence last year, I planed this. so no sewage. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 Well, that's an interesting twist, but there are a few problems with that. I'll give you some critique so you can improve next time around. Basically, too many plot holes, and it came across as random and anticlimactic. 1. Who is that gold guy? Where did he come from? How does he know Loganto? What's their relation? How did he get the power to turn people into great beings, and why did he do it?2. What about Loganto? Why did he go to him when he died? Why was he worthy or capable of becoming a great being? 3. Great Beings aren't made for fighting, they're made for creating and being really tall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 13, 2012 Author Share Posted November 13, 2012 (edited) Alaxus, remember bulita, from the new mask saga? that's him, and he IS a great being, therefore, he has the authority.He saved me so I could live. I dont die, AND i can do cool stuff.When a matoran dies, he goes thrue his mask's spirit. most masks dont have a spirit, so streight true the vail they go. I have bulita as my mask spirit. the one who gave me the powers, remember?the only way to make me live was to become immortal, so I turned into a great being.I just needed to live to fight kalarezka, and I know, but look at rohalison, he is still a matoran, yet a great being too. Edited November 13, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 13, 2012 Author Share Posted November 13, 2012 NEW COMIC!excuse me. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Which Is Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 (edited) Hehe, wow! XDYou fired your lazer... Never seen that before..Awesome!!Great job, dude! Edited November 13, 2012 by Haldir of Lorien Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 13, 2012 Author Share Posted November 13, 2012 (edited) What about the others? you arent, wierded out?Ummmmm so yeah. Edited November 13, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Which Is Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 OH EM GEEE!!! WHUT!?!?!....... Eeeeeew... No offense.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 13, 2012 Author Share Posted November 13, 2012 It's for the comics though... I think.Most likely.Quack?LETS GET AWAY FROM THE SUBJECT.cheese. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted November 14, 2012 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Kinda creepy Loganto. It seems like you have an internet crush lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 14, 2012 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Good enough explanation, Loganto. In that case you're fine.Well. This is awkward. Have you two even met?On to the comic, then.I couldn't really tell who was saying what around the beginning, the dialogue was confusing. Anyway, SHOOP DA WHOOP LAZOR. Instantly solves villain problems instantly.Looks like he burned him so badly that his blood congealed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 14, 2012 Author Share Posted November 14, 2012 IT'S FOR THE COMICS! GOODNESS!I said lets change the subject to cheese! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 14, 2012 Author Share Posted November 14, 2012 (edited) Or birthdays!NEW COMIChello? anyone home?END OF SEASON ONE!PGS spots open (go for it soran! I dare ya!)Time for changes.All my PGS's, can you:give me your element type and any extrasyour personalityany changes you wish to make to your char.If anyone has comic sugestions, go for it.Cat names Contest! poor (to be named later) has no name!ALL ENTRIES MUST BE IN THE FORM OF A PM.only one entry per BZPerno I will not name him oneker. unless that's the best you got.it is a HE. Edited November 15, 2012 by -Windrider- ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 Well, the conclusive happy ending!Season 2! Fresh start, leaving all the noobish fails from before deep within the bottomless pits of old Brickshelf folders...You've definitely improved a lot. I guess I'll go PM you now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 15, 2012 Author Share Posted November 15, 2012 ah ha ha. thanks. but season one will always be on my hard-drive... I mean heart, yea heart.Also, I found a patch on PDN for object outlines, so glow text comics are coming up! (clap for me will ya!)I'll give ya a preview in about an hour. im at school right now. last piriod though!See ya soon! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 He must be in my time zone Loganto. Some suggestions I can give you:Glow text( which you will be doing anyway) it looks cleaner if your not a pro on speech bubbles. Grammar: It will be better if you come up with conclusive grammar for the next season. You have obviously improved since the first comics but just keep that in mind. Connect thoughts clearly and put text that comes first above other text so people can read the story downward. Spelling: Use google and try not to misspell any words. It will make the comics more enjoyable. I know I'm not great at spelling because English is not my language but I try to look up all the words I don't know. You have improved the asthetics from the beginning so I don't have much more to say other than good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 19, 2012 Author Share Posted November 19, 2012 (edited) I am going to use glow text from now on.I am working on my grammar and spelling.Also, I am working on getting cash for a virus protection program.I am trying to get comic Ideas, so feel free to help.I also only have... two PGS spots left? so hurry up and get some grub!see ya guys! Edited November 19, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted November 19, 2012 Share Posted November 19, 2012 Umm, your not in the UCS. I said you will be a cameo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 28, 2012 Author Share Posted November 28, 2012 make that one PGS spot, and what is all this comotion about chimoru R? ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 make that one PGS spot, and what is all this comotion about chimoru R?Nothing, I suggest you keep with Chimoru r. Contrary to what I have said before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 This is a bit late but its been awile since i've seen one of the huge BLARGH lazers for a while i miss seeing those but nice ending to season 1 one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted December 2, 2012 Author Share Posted December 2, 2012 (edited) Thanks! back in my roblox days that used to be my favorite thing to do. did my comics die? am I all alone in this world? somebody say something! PLEASE! Edited December 26, 2012 by -Windrider- ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Just post a comic man. That's one reason I started Pursuit, Aa lost steam. Just remember to put something new out during holidays (like one panels or psa's) to keep our (short) attention(span)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted January 2, 2013 Share Posted January 2, 2013 Who cares if people aren't commenting. Just keep posting comics if it's what you enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted January 7, 2013 Author Share Posted January 7, 2013 Thats the thing, all my files are on My computer. but I cant go on mine. only the family computer. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted January 8, 2013 Share Posted January 8, 2013 Atleast your files still exist, unlike mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted February 7, 2013 Author Share Posted February 7, 2013 NEW FRIGGAN COMIC UP! WOHOO! I have the power! but don't tell anyone, I'm still grounded. Shhhhh! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 I'm telling your mom.About the cat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 LOL. Great Being powers are hilarious. It was a good random short comic, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 That was one random take there, yet hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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