BioCry Posted July 1, 2012 Share Posted July 1, 2012 (edited) This is my Entry for the second comic contest: Onomatopoetic JusticePages:[1] [2] [3] [4] [5]Credits:All Characters used belong to Lego, DC, and MarvelEnjoy! - Edited July 1, 2012 by Biocryptid21 (Deadpool) Quote :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted July 1, 2012 Share Posted July 1, 2012 The comic has a very cartoonish style to it which actually flows well with the rest of the comic. I like all the little details you added to the comic like the pizza slice, his weapons that are near him, the other shelves in the store, the doors, etc. Although some of the bodies are really off at angles, that can't really be helped due to the amount of time that was left. The effects worked out great with the over all happy tone of the comic. I think you did a great job on it, but there are a few things that irk me. One of them is the lack of a stud on Deadpool's head. When I think of lego I think of heads with studs on them so it really just doesn't look right without it. Another thing is the flooring. It looks odd without any perspective, I think it would look better if it faded a little in the distance. Other then that it looks pretty good, definitely a great entry, nice work!~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BioCry Posted July 1, 2012 Author Share Posted July 1, 2012 The comic has a very cartoonish style to it which actually flows well with the rest of the comic. I like all the little details you added to the comic like the pizza slice, his weapons that are near him, the other shelves in the store, the doors, etc. Although some of the bodies are really off at angles, that can't really be helped due to the amount of time that was left. The effects worked out great with the over all happy tone of the comic. I think you did a great job on it, but there are a few things that irk me. One of them is the lack of a stud on Deadpool's head. When I think of lego I think of heads with studs on them so it really just doesn't look right without it. Another thing is the flooring. It looks odd without any perspective, I think it would look better if it faded a little in the distance. Other then that it looks pretty good, definitely a great entry, nice work!~SoranThanks, Soran!The thing with Deadpool not having a stud on his head is that it looked terrible when I drew it on him. So, there wasn't much I could do there...And, I now see what you mean about the flooring perspective. I guess that's something that I can work on in future comics.Thanks a lot for the review!- Quote :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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