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The Comedies Critics Club


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#1 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 01:18 AM

[color=#000000;]Posted ImageNote: Please, read this entire post before requesting to be a critic or requesting a review![/color]

[color=#000000;]Credit goes to Click for the banners and signoffs! A huge thank-you!We all know that feeling: You’ve just completed your best comedy to date. It’s your masterpiece, your crowning achievement, a tale that will go down in history! Your name will be mentioned with Togariku, Fresh Makuta of Bel-Air, and Bionicle Guru!So you post it.And… no one reviews it. :(But don’t panic- that’s where we come in.The purpose of the Comedies Critics Club is to allow any author of a comedy to get a review for said comedy. With oh, so many members on BZPower, and more coming every day, it is no surprise that many great comedies are overlooked and don't get many – if any – good reviews.As I'm sure many of you know, most posts in comedies are bits of spam-filled praise. Well, this club is designed to give in-depth reviews to comedies, giving good feedback, and tips to improve. A small group of members have come together in this club to offer their time to review your comedies. All you authors have to do is post here with a link to your comedy asking for a review, and one will be given [after you read the whole first post, of course!]. However, it must be understood that everyone here is human, and people do have lives, contrary to popular belief. Do not fret if we’re a little late in getting to you![/color][color=#000000;]Posted Image[/color]

[color=#000000;]All authors [and critics] must adhere to Comedies Forum Standards as outlined by the Forum Leader. Neither myself, nor any of the critics are responsible for any comedies being closed because they violated one of BZPower’s rules. We go to your comedy upon request to review, not to reprimand or arm-chair moderate.Request limit ~ At this time, there is a limit of five chapters per review request and authors may request only one review at a given time.Civility ~ We will not tolerate any rudeness towards any of our staff. Also, do not start spamming this topic with complaints of “My comedy hasn't been reviewed yet!” and so on. Additionally, do not PM any critics along the same lines [or myself, for that matter]. This may, and most likely will, be considered harassment, and you will be reported to the proper authorities and taken care of. Not to mention we will never review your comedy. Please, no spamming in this topic. If you see an error, or it has been a while and no one has reviewed your comedy, you may politely PM myself asking whatever it is you want to ask. Make sure, however, that it has been at least a week since you requested a review. Of course, if we made a mistake when adding your comedy to the list, feel free to PM me, or post in this topic politely, pointing out the error.Comedies only ~ No, we will not review your Short Story, or Epic, no matter how good they are. End of story.Comedy Size ~ Your comedy does not need to be finished, nor does it have to be past the first chapter. It's your choice when you want a review, or how much you want to be reviewed. Your comedy can be in any state when you request a review.Back-Seat Reviewing ~ We've all heard the term “back-seat driving”. This is what happens when a passenger in your car [if you drive, of course] starts telling you what lane to turn into, when to brake, when to accelerate, etc. It can get really annoying. Back-seat reviewing is the same idea, where writers explicitly tell us how to do our job. We're here for you, but we also know what we're doing.So please, don't tell us how your want your comedy reviewed. If you have a preference, you may explain such in your own topic. However, whether or not the critic reviewing your Comedy takes such into account, the Comedies Critics Club cannot be blamed. We're writing reviews how we feel will help you best. Only if the review you receive goes against the BZPower rules do you have the option of reporting such grievances to me [ibrow/Kermit the Frog], the Head, or the Forum Leaders of the comedy forum [currently: Hahli Husky and McSmeag]. If you have a problem with your review, please PM me and I will review your situation.Favoritism ~ Writers may not request that a specific critic review his or her comedy. A critic will be assigned to your comedy, based on his or her availability at that given time. If you don’t like the critic assigned, tough- we’re all hardworking people, and we’re dedicating our time so that the authors of BZP get recognition. All critics are either handpicked by myself, or have undergone heavy scrutiny and screening. We have full faith in them.Begging ~ It is not alright for an author to beg for a review. I understand that you may not get reviews, or if you do all you get are reviews filled with spam, but that does not mean you are allowed to beg and spam. Don't give us that. Just post saying you'd like a review [following the guidelines below], and one will be given. This follows under the rule of Civility. If we catch any wind of begging, your comedy will most likely not be reviewed.Posted Image[/color]

[color=#000000;]Copy and paste the following form into your post, adding in the necessary information:[/color]

[/b][url=(your comedy url)]Comedy Title[/url]Author:Status of your comedy: Beginning/In Progress/Finished.Chapters to be reviewed:

 

 

[color=#000000;]You must link to your comedy. Do not say 'It's in my sig'. Your request will be ignored if you do. Then, you must put your name under the 'author' section. After that, please choose one of the options for your status. If your comedy is just a few chapters and you plan to write more, put Beginning. If it's more that than, put In Progress. If it's finished, put Finished. Then list how many chapters you would like to be reviewed. For example: Chapters to be reviewed: Chapters 2-4, 7. Also, if your comedy is pages long, and has many chapters, don't expect us to review all of them. Choose a few, and list those- I would recommend including the first chapter. Due to time restraints for our staff, we are only accepting FIVE chapters at a time.Posted ImageI will be checking over each and every review, to assure that is of the appropriate quality. If I find one which does not give enough insight, then I will PM that critic asking them to edit their post and give them pointers how to improve.We value quality as a very high priority, and if you find that we have not performed to the best of our abilities, please, don’t hesitate to PM me.Posted ImageThe Head is not assigned comedies to review.[/color][color=#000000;]The Head[/color][color=#008080;]Name: iBrowPosition: Head of ReviewsWhat I Look For: First and foremost, a plot. If you can't be bothered to give your comedy an interesting, well thought out plot, then I can't be bothered to read your comedy. The second thing is your characters. I will rip your characters apart, because they are an extremely important part of your story. If your characters can't capture my attention, I will tell you so and I will suggest what you can do to fix it. Next is your spelling and grammar, because if you aren't going to check your spelling or have someone else check it for you, chances are there are going to be some mistakes. It's my job to point them out. As far as grammar goes, I just like to nitpick.[/color]

 

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[color=#0000cd;][font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Name: Jalina[/color][/font]

[color=#0000cd;][font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]Position: Critic/Co-Curator[/color][/font]

[color=#0000cd;][font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif;"]What I Look For: Some stuff about me and how I review: I'm a stickler for proper spelling and grammar, and I love to see witty wordplay and subtle jokes. I see formatting as a very important aspect of writing (poor format can make a comedy hard to read) and I consider a LOT if different aspects of how a piece is written, not just the jokes. I'm not sure how the reviews are supposed to be written now, but I'm pretty sure it's the old format. (The really big one with different categories) Either way, I tend to write really long, detailed reviews. (I also like Reses' peanut butter cups, Superchick, and a good book. But that's beside the point.)[/color][/font]

 

[color=#000000;]Pending:[/color]Hubert

 

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[color=#000000;]To become a critic, you must PM me [ibrow]. I do not want this thread to be filled up with requests to become a critic. Also, if you wish to become a critic, or are a critic, you may still request a review.Critic Screening ~ Critics Screening just means that I will screen everyone before they become a critic, and ask them if they are able to fulfill the guidelines set for critics below. I will make my decision, and ask one of the current critics for input. If we are not in agreement, we will send your request out to the other critics for a vote. If you are rejected, you may reapply after a two month waiting period. If you are rejected a second time, you may not reapply.Note: To save yourself the embarrassment of being rejected twice, please only apply if you are serious about delivering in-depth reviews to requesters.Critic duties ~ Every comedy will have a critic assigned to it. I will be keeping careful track of how many go to each critic, so that no one person gets an advanced workload. If a critic does not complete his review within 7 days of the assignment, one of the other critics or the Head will review it and the critic in question will receive a strike. If the critic has informed us beforehand that he will be unable to review, the strike will be dropped. When a critic accumulates three strikes he will be released. To reapply, the critic must wait two months. If a critic is released twice, they will not be allowed to return to the CCC. Once again, please only apply if you can review at least one comedy every two weeks.Reviews ~ Each critic is required to give a full, in-depth review. Following these (WARNING: LINK GOES TO ARCHIVE) guidelines set by Nikira in her blog [sure, it was written for art, but works literature, too] would be good to do. You must give positive feedback and constructive criticism. WE WILL NOT accept simple posts saying “I love it! KUTGW 3443543/2323!”. If you like the comedy, tell the writer why. If you don't, tell the author why politely, and say how said author can improve. Some good advice would be that of ToM Dracone given to a different Comedies Critic Club [please follow this advice, too]:[/color]

 

[color=#000000;]Here is a piece of advice: Only sign up if you feel like you can actually give helpful, thorough, and polite reviews. It won't do much good to just say "hey, this is good, you should change these two things here" or to criticize so harshly it becomes flaming. Go into detail, explain things, et cetera. And if you think a comedy is absolutely terrible, for goodness' sakes don't say that. Explain what can be improved, and if you can't find anything to actually compliment, see if there's something that has the potential to be funny or creative and say how to use that potential. That's the sort of review that helps people. [/color]

 

[color=#000000;]Civility ~ Same thing for critics. Civility is crucial. We will not tolerate anyone being rude to anyone else, and will take necessary action for the action to be punished.Review Notification ~ As soon as you review a comedy, post saying so! Give a link and the author's name, and tell how much you reviewed of it [or if you reviewed every chapter they asked for, then just put 'all']. It's that simple. Just take thirty seconds of your time and post to say what you reviewed. PMing either me will also be accepted.General Stuff ~ If a critic spots a comedy they think needs more exposure, they may note so in their review notification post- it will be bolded on the reviewed list to show that it is recommended. If you do not give proper reviews, you might be removed from the critics list and placed on a suspension. Of course, you'll have a few warnings and chances, but if you continuously give spammy or rude reviews, you will be asked to leave. So, please, just follow these guidelines. I will be working with you guys to make sure you give good reviews. If you have any questions about a proper review, DO NOT hesitate to PM me. :)[/color]

[color=#000000;]Extra Review Guidelines ~ Once a critic has finished their review, the comedy should be given a grade (whether it be a percentage or fraction is up to the critic). Any comedy that is given a score equal to 85% or higher will also be bolded for recommendation.[/color]

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#2 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 01:37 AM

[color=#008080;]I am an overlord.[/color][color=#008080;].__.[/color][color=#008080;]Regardless, much thanks. To the list of reviewed comedies![/color] 

Comedies Reviewed: (Bolded Links = Must-See Comedies)

 

M.O.D.S. by Rarity = 60% (Reviewed by Fishers64)

Undivine Comedy by TradTheMentalist = 70% (Reviewed by Fishers64)

World Domination 101 by Zoma & Biobeast = 70% (Reviewed by iBrow)

Takua's Brainy Adventure by Rarity = 20% (Reviewed by Fishers64)

The Bionicle Entrepeneur by Toarobot18 = 83% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Tales of the Hubertverse by Hubert = 85% (Reviewed by Fishers64)

University of North Spherus Magna by tent163phantoka = 73% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Spinning Doctor Drake by fishers64 = 98% (Reviewed by iBrow)

Lord Vakama Strikes Back by Cinnamon Grochi = 85% (Reviewed by Rarity)

Bionicle: Mission Space by Toarobot18 = 40% (Reviewed by fishers64)

The Adventures of Tahu by Tahu Nuva: Toa of Silver = 75.5% (Reviewed by Hubert)

The Three Matoran and Hakann by The Smoke Monster = 70% (Reviewed by iBrow)

The Voyage of Awesome by iBrow = 95% (Reviewed by Hubert)

The War For BZPower by TradTheMentalist = 75% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Toy Wars by Toarobot18 = 75% (Reviewed by Jalina T.T.)

Tahu vs. Tahu: Aftermath by iBrow = 95% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About by Phovos the Raptor = 50% (Reviewed by fishers64)

Mixed Up: The Bohrak-Kal's Ramblings by Phovos the Raptor = 80% (Reviewed by Hubert)

An 'Ask Us' Comedy With a Twist by Phovos the Raptor = 20% (Reviewed by Rarity)

Tahu's Tips to Survival by Tech Warrior = 80% (Reviewed by fishers64)

ROBOTS! by iBrow = 70% (Reviewed by fishers64)

Road Trip 2 by Jalina T.T. = 83% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Rewriter by Cederak = 50% (Reviewed by Rarity)

Nuva Nation by X-Ray = 81% (Reviewed byHubert)

Ask Makuta Returns! by Karzahni the Utahraptor = 70% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Dark Unto Days by iBrow = 70% (Reviewed by Rarity)

Mata-Nui High School by Jordboy1 = 72% (Reviewed by Hubert)

X-Ray: The Return by X-Ray = 86% (Reviewed by Toa Kaithas)

The AfterWords by iBrow = 90% (Reviewed by Jordboy1)

BIONICLE: The Legend Imploded by TNTOS = 78% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Glatorian of Bara-Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal by X-Ray = 83 Doubloons (Reviewed by Toa Kaithas)

Terry's Horrendous Misadventure by Dude w/ a Hat = 23% (Reviewed by Hubert)

Solek's Story Part 2 by Frezon = 45% (Reviewed by Toa Kaithas)

Bionicles at Work by X-Ray = 74% (Reviewed by Toa Kaithas)

Legend of the Bionicle... Toys by ToaKapura1234 = 70%? (Reviewed by Jalina)

Technic Coliseum: After Hours by Canis Lupus = 68% (Reviewed by Kaithas)

 

[color=#000000;]Comedies Reviewed: 35[/color]


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#3 Offline Hahli Husky

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Posted Jul 08 2012 - 03:43 AM

Pinned! Thanks to ibrow and everyone helping with this. :) You guys are awesome!
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#4 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 08:56 AM

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#5 Offline Ddude the Insane

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 11:03 AM

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#6 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 11:48 AM

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#7 Offline Onarax

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 07:51 PM

They deleted my post proclaiming you to be an overlord.
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#8 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Jul 15 2012 - 08:26 PM

Makes for a cleaner topic though. =PWithin the next day I'll toss up a comedy of mine for one of you guys to review, but I still have to decide which one it'll be.-ibrowPosted Image

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#9 Offline Onarax

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Posted Jul 16 2012 - 03:08 AM

I can review your comedy if you want then I suppose.I'm still somewhat disheartened by the disappearance of my epic post though.
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Posted Jul 16 2012 - 08:09 PM

Here you are Hubert.Voyage of AwesomeAuthor: ibrowStatus: In ProgressChapters: One (and Two if completed)-ibrowPosted Image
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#11 Offline Onarax

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Posted Jul 18 2012 - 07:13 AM

Okay, I'll try get it done during the weekend or before.
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Posted Jul 22 2012 - 09:18 AM

[/b] The War for BZPowerAuthor: TradStatus of your comedy: BeginningChapters to be reviewed: 1This comedy's prologue might seem a bit too dark.

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Posted Jul 22 2012 - 12:51 PM

[/b]The War for BZPowerAuthor: TradStatus of your comedy: BeginningThis comedy's prologue might seem a bit too dark.

You also need to include which chapter(s) you want reviewed.

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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 04:34 AM

Here you are Hubert.Voyage of AwesomeAuthor: ibrowStatus: In ProgressChapters: One (and Two if completed)-ibrowPosted Image

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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 11:00 AM

[/b]The War for BZPowerAuthor: TradStatus of your comedy: BeginningChapters to be reviewed: 1This comedy's prologue might seem a bit too dark.

Hubert, assigning this to you as I believe fishers is away on vacation right now. Rarity, you have until the 28th to finish your review of Ddude's comedy.-ibrow

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Posted Jul 23 2012 - 06:28 PM

Got it boss.I'll do it soon.
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Posted Jul 26 2012 - 07:31 PM

Rarity, you have roughly 2 nights to finish your review. And fishers... I have no idea when you said you would vanish. .__.-ibrow
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Posted Jul 27 2012 - 01:39 AM

Reviewed his comedy!

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Posted Jul 28 2012 - 11:41 AM

I don't mean to nag or bother, and sorry if this is interpreted as such, but don't forget my Toy Wars review. It was assigned to Rarity a little while back.
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Posted Jul 28 2012 - 07:14 PM

I don't mean to nag or bother, and sorry if this is interpreted as such, but don't forget my Toy Wars review. It was assigned to Rarity a little while back.

iBrow gave it to someone else.

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Posted Jul 28 2012 - 08:46 PM

I don't mean to nag or bother, and sorry if this is interpreted as such, but don't forget my Toy Wars review. It was assigned to Rarity a little while back.

Arrrrrgh.Rarity, you finish your current review. Toarobot, I'll try and get yours done tonight/tomorrow morning. So sorry. If it's not up by then, I need Rarity or Hubert to tackle it as fishers is away.-ibrowEDIT EDIT EDIT EDIT

Thanks Fishers! I don't mean to hog the CCC, so feel free to shove this down the list if someone else requests, but since Fishers finished my previous request and no others are outstanding, here is new request:Toy WarsAuthor: Toarobot18Status of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1 - 4 5Author's Note: this comedy is based in the "real world" except with enchanted living toys. The main toys are Bionicle sets, but the sets are not assumed to have the same personalities as their Bionicle story-line partners. (In fact, there are even duplicate sets and M.O.Cs.)

I don't have time for the request, but Jalina T. T., former Curator of the CCC will be taking charge until August 26th, when I return, and she'll be handling the request. Thank you Jalina!-ibrow

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Posted Jul 29 2012 - 02:57 AM

[/b]The War for BZPowerAuthor: TradStatus of your comedy: BeginningThis comedy's prologue might seem a bit too dark.

Review CompleteSo the Secret Final Boss of the CCC is taking your place for the time being?I for one, gladly welcome our old Comedic Overlord.

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Posted Jul 29 2012 - 10:20 AM

Secret Final Boss.... I like the sound of that.Hello Everybody! While iBrow's on vacation, I'm taking his place as babysitter CCC curator. I won't be able to update the list of completed reviews (Because it is in iBrow's post, not mine) But I'll assign reviews and do some myself, Including Toy Wars. I'm basically taking iBrow's place, with a few limitations.Some stuff about me and how I review: I'm a stickler for proper spelling and grammar, and I love to see witty wordplay and subtle jokes. I see formatting as a very important aspect of writing (poor format can make a comedy hard to read) and I consider a LOT if different aspects of how a piece is written, not just the jokes. I'm not sure how the reviews are supposed to be written now, but I'm pretty sure it's the old format. (The really big one with different categories) Either way, I tend to write really long, detailed reviews. (I also like Reses' peanut butter cups, Superchick, and a good book. But that's beside the point.)To make sure I have everyone straight and the comedies on the list, Here's the skinny on who's where and what needs to be done:Active Curators:Jalina T.T.It's a Gundam!RarityOn Vacation:iBrow Hearts RarityFishers64To be completed reviews:Toy Wars DONE!

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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 05:18 PM

Hey Secret Final Boss Chief President of Doom, don't we have to link to the review thingy?
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Posted Aug 02 2012 - 05:56 PM

I was having trouble getting the link to work, but thanks for reminding me. I'll get it fixed soon.Edit: FIXED!

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Posted Aug 18 2012 - 05:17 PM

I'm back. ;)
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#27 Offline Onarax

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Posted Aug 19 2012 - 03:37 AM

Welcome back Fishy. Anyway, seems like we haven't gotten any requests recently. Must have been the move.
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#28 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Aug 26 2012 - 05:59 PM

And I am back! Thank you Jalina, although it appears it wasn't overly necessary anyway. That said critics, advertise this club! Spread the word!-ibrow
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#29 Offline Onarax

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Posted Aug 29 2012 - 09:51 PM

Well Mr. Leader Boss Guy of Doom, it doesn't seem as if we're getting much review requests lately.How should we plan ahead in order to obtain more business?
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Posted Aug 30 2012 - 02:01 AM

Well Mr. Leader Boss Guy of Doom, it doesn't seem as if we're getting much review requests lately.How should we plan ahead in order to obtain more business?

Silence, foolish fellow minion. Lack of work is a good thing. :PAnd what is this 'we'?

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Posted Aug 30 2012 - 04:39 AM

'We' constitutes this esteemed organisation of ours.Fellow minion. You are the one who is foolish. We must obtain greater business to strengthen our reputation in order to take over the rest of the forum.And I'm also getting twitchy without anything to do.
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Posted Aug 30 2012 - 06:34 AM

Make it your goal to post in at least one comedy a day that you haven't posted in before with a post that gives a little bit of actual feedback. That might help jumpstart the forum again.You could also link to the CCC wherever you go, such as in your signature.-ibrow
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Posted Sep 06 2012 - 03:41 PM

....maybe I could just randomly start writing again and give you guys something to do... :P-Jordboy1 :miru:
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Posted Sep 06 2012 - 03:59 PM

That might b nice lol. Meanwhile, I have another review for you three:Tahu vs. Tahu: AftermathiBrow In ProgressSeason 4 Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5 (if you have trouble finding them, look in the first post of the topic)I'll wait until Sunday for someone to claim it, and if none of you take it by then it's getting assigned.
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Posted Sep 06 2012 - 05:08 PM

That might b nice lol. Meanwhile, I have another review for you three:Tahu vs. Tahu: AftermathiBrow In ProgressSeason 4 Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5 (if you have trouble finding them, look in the first post of the topic)I'll wait until Sunday for someone to claim it, and if none of you take it by then it's getting assigned.

I'll take it. Should be done within the week.EDIT: Review Complete.

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Posted Sep 10 2012 - 04:09 PM

Thank you. Business done! Now maybe someone else will put in a review request.-ibrow
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Posted Sep 28 2012 - 01:23 AM

I'll give you guys something to do.I have two comedies with 0 replies. I wish to correct that. I've been good, reading other people's comedies but no one seems to want to return the favour.An Ask Us Comedy With A Twist (AAUSCWAT)So, since you've interrupted their peace and quiet, you might as well ask them some questions...In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About (YACIWPFA)Nidhiki is stuck with a Bohrok, a Bohrok-like being, a Raptor, an Enderman, a doctor and a worm with a jetpack. If something funny doesn't happen, I'll eat Lehvak.In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Author: Me.
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Posted Sep 28 2012 - 08:21 AM

Alright - Rarity, you get to review An Ask Us Comedy With a Twist.fishers, you get to review Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About.-ibrow
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Posted Oct 01 2012 - 02:55 AM

I reviewed this comedy: Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About... by Phovos the RaptorChapters Reviewed: AllReviewer's Rating: 5/10Link is to my review.
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Posted Oct 04 2012 - 09:57 AM

Okay, since I'm getting sick of 0 replies to my topics and I'm just posting this so someone actually READS the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings, here's another one.The Bohrok-Kal's RamblingsThe Bohrok-Kal appear in a colour-coded comedy because they hate scripts.In ProgressWritten by me.
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