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The Comedies Critics Club


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#41 Offline Sir Voltex the Blue

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Posted Oct 04 2012 - 06:06 PM

Okay, since I'm getting sick of 0 replies to my topics and I'm just posting this so someone actually READS the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings, here's another one.The Bohrok-Kal's RamblingsThe Bohrok-Kal appear in a colour-coded comedy because they hate scripts.In ProgressWritten by me.

Oh Huuuuubert....-ibrow

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#42 Offline Onarax

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Posted Oct 04 2012 - 07:04 PM

Which chapters? You cannot review a comedy without knowing which chapters to review! The template is required~!
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Posted Oct 04 2012 - 07:12 PM

Oh god it;s not a oneshot aaaaaaaughYou must fix it, Phovos of the Raptors!-ibrow
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Posted Oct 05 2012 - 02:02 AM

All of the chapters.Especially the recent ones.I don't get it, I read everyone else's comedies but no one reads mine :(
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Posted Oct 05 2012 - 06:15 AM

There's a chapter limit for reviews, so if your comedy is longer than that, Hubert'll probably just do the newer or older ones, and not both.-ibrow
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Posted Oct 05 2012 - 10:08 AM

Okay, let's have it from this chapter then. That's since the last person replied.I update TBKR daily, in the hope to get someone to actually read it, but maybe that's in vain...
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Posted Oct 05 2012 - 02:30 PM

You heard the fellow, Hubert. Onward, soldier!-ibrow
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Posted Oct 05 2012 - 06:35 PM

Yessir!It's good that I'm only doing those six chapters from that post, because if I did the entire comedy, there would be nineteen chapters to review.EDIT: Anyway, Review here.

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Posted Oct 06 2012 - 07:40 AM

And I just replied to your review. I have a feeling that you kinda didn't get the idea behind it.
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Posted Oct 06 2012 - 08:53 AM

fightfightfightkisskisskissAnyway, I'll leave this mostly up to Hubert to defend his reviewing style (since it's uh, his reviewing style). However, having a cohesive plot can give any piece of writing far more appeal, and can help to keep drawing readers in as they will want to read the next instalment of the piece.That's all I will say here; Hubert can defend himself from here. =P-ibrow
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Posted Oct 06 2012 - 09:13 AM

A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation.
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Posted Oct 06 2012 - 09:14 AM

A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation.

And the defense has arrived! Would the accuser like to take this to the CCCC*, or shall we simply debate here, or has it all ended?-ibrow*Comedies Critics Club Court

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Posted Oct 08 2012 - 02:51 AM

Hahaha, CCCC. Let's hope there isn't a CCCCC. Or a CCCCCC.
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Posted Oct 09 2012 - 07:30 PM

I'll give you guys something to do.I have two comedies with 0 replies. I wish to correct that. I've been good, reading other people's comedies but no one seems to want to return the favour.An Ask Us Comedy With A Twist (AAUSCWAT)So, since you've interrupted their peace and quiet, you might as well ask them some questions...In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About (YACIWPFA)Nidhiki is stuck with a Bohrok, a Bohrok-like being, a Raptor, an Enderman, a doctor and a worm with a jetpack. If something funny doesn't happen, I'll eat Lehvak.In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Author: Me.

Reviewed!

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Posted Oct 13 2012 - 07:24 PM

Added into the list.-ibrow
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Posted Oct 18 2012 - 04:25 PM

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TW

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Posted Oct 18 2012 - 05:57 PM

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TW

Assigned to fishers64.-ibrow

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Posted Oct 18 2012 - 10:38 PM

Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TW

Assigned to fishers64.-ibrow

Got it. Will try to pull it in by the end of this weekend. (I've already read some of this... :) in the past, so shouldn't take me too long.)Edit: Sorry for the delays, but here it is: Tahu's Tips to SurvivalChapters Reviewed: 1-5, per request. Reviewer's Rating: 8/10

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Posted Oct 25 2012 - 06:26 AM

The review has been recorded!-ibrow
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Posted Nov 02 2012 - 06:47 PM

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. :) But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!

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Posted Nov 02 2012 - 06:59 PM

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. :) But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!

Hubert, this review shall be yours!-ibrow

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Posted Nov 02 2012 - 07:21 PM

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. :)RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1
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Posted Nov 02 2012 - 07:31 PM

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. :)RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1

Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!-ibrow

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Posted Nov 03 2012 - 07:09 AM

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. :) But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!

Hubert, this review shall be yours!-ibrow

I should have it finished by the end of the Melbourne Cup Long Weekend.

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Posted Nov 04 2012 - 08:42 AM

fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!ROBOTS!Author: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: 3-ibrow
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Posted Nov 05 2012 - 04:18 PM

fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!ROBOTS!Author: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: 3-ibrow

Reviewed.ROBOTS!Author: iBrowChapters Reviewed: All.Number Rating: 7/10.Don't turn purple.

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Posted Nov 06 2012 - 04:36 AM

I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. :) But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!

REVIEW COMPLETE.

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Posted Nov 10 2012 - 05:27 PM

Belatedly I will inform you that your review was recorded. Rarity, you have 5 days to finish you review starting tomorrow.Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.-ibrow
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Posted Nov 11 2012 - 12:39 PM

But I like the 2 week window. :(I'll have to review it tomorrow, when I'm back home.
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Posted Nov 11 2012 - 07:52 PM

Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.-ibrow

:shrugs: It doesn't matter to me one way or another, since I usually finish within a few days anyway.

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Posted Nov 12 2012 - 04:29 AM

I prefer the two week, but I can manage with one.
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Posted Nov 16 2012 - 09:55 PM

Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. :)RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1

Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!-ibrow

R-R-Reviewed!

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Posted Nov 17 2012 - 06:25 PM

Alright, review recorded.As of right now, the review time window has been reduced to one week.-ibrow
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Posted Nov 17 2012 - 11:24 PM

Aw. I liked the 2 week window.Oh well.
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Posted Nov 18 2012 - 02:26 PM

Thank you for the CCC review. Any/all criticism is greatly appreciated. :)-Ced
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Posted Nov 24 2012 - 07:18 PM

Will be on camp for the next five days. So I won't be able to do any reviews.
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Posted Nov 24 2012 - 08:44 PM

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4
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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 02:49 AM

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4

That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped.

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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 07:17 AM

Also means we may have to recruit more minions critics for the cause.
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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 01:26 PM

Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4

That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped.

I have end of semester too.Eh. I'll try.

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