Voltex Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 Okay, since I'm getting sick of 0 replies to my topics and I'm just posting this so someone actually READS the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings, here's another one.The Bohrok-Kal's RamblingsThe Bohrok-Kal appear in a colour-coded comedy because they hate scripts.In ProgressWritten by me.Oh Huuuuubert....-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 Which chapters? You cannot review a comedy without knowing which chapters to review! The template is required~! http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 5, 2012 Author Share Posted October 5, 2012 Oh god it;s not a oneshot aaaaaaaughYou must fix it, Phovos of the Raptors!-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 All of the chapters.Especially the recent ones.I don't get it, I read everyone else's comedies but no one reads mine Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 5, 2012 Author Share Posted October 5, 2012 There's a chapter limit for reviews, so if your comedy is longer than that, Hubert'll probably just do the newer or older ones, and not both.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 Okay, let's have it from this chapter then. That's since the last person replied.I update TBKR daily, in the hope to get someone to actually read it, but maybe that's in vain... Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 5, 2012 Author Share Posted October 5, 2012 You heard the fellow, Hubert. Onward, soldier!-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 (edited) Yessir!It's good that I'm only doing those six chapters from that post, because if I did the entire comedy, there would be nineteen chapters to review.EDIT: Anyway, Review here. Edited October 6, 2012 by It's a Gundam! http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 And I just replied to your review. I have a feeling that you kinda didn't get the idea behind it. Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 6, 2012 Author Share Posted October 6, 2012 fightfightfightkisskisskissAnyway, I'll leave this mostly up to Hubert to defend his reviewing style (since it's uh, his reviewing style). However, having a cohesive plot can give any piece of writing far more appeal, and can help to keep drawing readers in as they will want to read the next instalment of the piece.That's all I will say here; Hubert can defend himself from here. =P-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 6, 2012 Author Share Posted October 6, 2012 A piece of fiction can be interpreted in many different ways. Even ways completely different from the idea that was the driving force behind its creation.And the defense has arrived! Would the accuser like to take this to the CCCC*, or shall we simply debate here, or has it all ended?-ibrow*Comedies Critics Club Court JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 Hahaha, CCCC. Let's hope there isn't a CCCCC. Or a CCCCCC. Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted October 10, 2012 Share Posted October 10, 2012 I'll give you guys something to do.I have two comedies with 0 replies. I wish to correct that. I've been good, reading other people's comedies but no one seems to want to return the favour.An Ask Us Comedy With A Twist (AAUSCWAT)So, since you've interrupted their peace and quiet, you might as well ask them some questions...In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Yet Another Comedy I Will Probably Forget About (YACIWPFA)Nidhiki is stuck with a Bohrok, a Bohrok-like being, a Raptor, an Enderman, a doctor and a worm with a jetpack. If something funny doesn't happen, I'll eat Lehvak.In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: All of them.Author: Me.Reviewed! >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 14, 2012 Author Share Posted October 14, 2012 Added into the list.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tech Warrior Posted October 18, 2012 Share Posted October 18, 2012 (edited) Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TW Edited October 18, 2012 by Tech Warrior I AM A TOA OF SOUND. I CAN IDENTIFY DRUM N BASS BY THE VIBRATION OF THE GROUND. I CAN HEAR MAKUTA ROAR FROM MILES AWAY. I AM JUST THAT FREAKING AWESOME. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 18, 2012 Author Share Posted October 18, 2012 Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TWAssigned to fishers64.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted October 19, 2012 Share Posted October 19, 2012 (edited) Been working on this for a bit now; I think it's time to request a civilized review...[/b]http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your Comedy: In progressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5 (assuming that's the limit)It's nothing too incredibly serious, but there is a devious plot behind it... Chapters 1-5 give a good introduction to the story, I feel; the later chapters further the plot. I'd like a review on the beginning five chapters for now, though, since that's where most of the humor lies.Thanks!~ TWAssigned to fishers64.-ibrowGot it. Will try to pull it in by the end of this weekend. (I've already read some of this... in the past, so shouldn't take me too long.)Edit: Sorry for the delays, but here it is: Tahu's Tips to SurvivalChapters Reviewed: 1-5, per request. Reviewer's Rating: 8/10 Edited October 25, 2012 by fishers64 Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted October 25, 2012 Author Share Posted October 25, 2012 The review has been recorded!-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TinkerTech Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 (edited) I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun! Edited November 2, 2012 by Jalina T.T. Defy Expectations Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!Hubert, this review shall be yours!-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1 Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!Hubert, this review shall be yours!-ibrowI should have it finished by the end of the Melbourne Cup Long Weekend. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 4, 2012 Author Share Posted November 4, 2012 fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!ROBOTS!Author: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: 3-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 5, 2012 Share Posted November 5, 2012 (edited) fishers, time to get busy! I am throwing a request at you!ROBOTS!Author: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: 3-ibrowReviewed.ROBOTS!Author: iBrowChapters Reviewed: All.Number Rating: 7/10.Don't turn purple. Edited November 5, 2012 by fishers64 Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 6, 2012 Share Posted November 6, 2012 I'm an honorary curator? Aww, thank you!You guys look like you need something to keep you busy. That... or a CHALLENGE!Road Trip 2!Status: In progressChapters to review: 1-5, of course. But you're welcome to read more if you want/need too.Have fun!REVIEW COMPLETE. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 10, 2012 Author Share Posted November 10, 2012 Belatedly I will inform you that your review was recorded. Rarity, you have 5 days to finish you review starting tomorrow.Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 But I like the 2 week window. :(I'll have to review it tomorrow, when I'm back home. >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 Just as a word of warning to you all, I'm considering shortening the window you have to review comedies from two weeks to one - other critics club operate under that just fine, and they are far more busy than we are.-ibrow It doesn't matter to me one way or another, since I usually finish within a few days anyway. Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 I prefer the two week, but I can manage with one. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 Well, I haven't posted a comedy in over five years and since I don't recall there being a CCC back then, it's nice to be able to make use of your service here. Thanks. RewriterAuthor: CederakStatus: FinishedChapters: 1Since I've already sort of reviewed this, Rarity, you're up!-ibrowR-R-Reviewed! >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 17, 2012 Author Share Posted November 17, 2012 Alright, review recorded.As of right now, the review time window has been reduced to one week.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 Aw. I liked the 2 week window.Oh well. >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 Thank you for the CCC review. Any/all criticism is greatly appreciated. -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Will be on camp for the next five days. So I won't be able to do any reviews. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 25, 2012 Author Share Posted November 25, 2012 Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4 JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped. Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Also means we may have to recruit more minions critics for the cause. http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Alright, Rarity or fishers, this is to keep you busy:Dark Unto DaysAuthor: iBrowStatus: FinishedChapters: All 4That one should go to Rarity. End of semester...I'm swamped.I have end of semester too.Eh. I'll try. >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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