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#81 Offline Voltex

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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 03:39 PM

If it's end of semester, I'll boost your limit to two weeks this one time. Also because it's me and I'm not that important.-ibrow
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Posted Nov 27 2012 - 04:29 PM

Comedy: Nuva NationStatus: FinishedChapters requested for Review: 24-28:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:
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#83 Offline Voltex

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Posted Nov 27 2012 - 09:10 PM

Comedy: Nuva NationStatus: FinishedChapters requested for Review: 24-28 :akaku: X-Ray :akaku:

I guess this one is mine, since my critics are all deserting. >.>Expect it Friday or Saturday!-ibrow

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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 03:16 AM

Deserting? Nah, I was just losing blood and water and getting tanned over two days of rest and three days of hiking and camping along the Great Ocean Road.But I'm back now.
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#85 Offline Voltex

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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 07:10 PM

Deserting? Nah, I was just losing blood and water and getting tanned over two days of rest and three days of hiking and camping along the Great Ocean Road.But I'm back now.

 

[color=#008080;]Alright, I'm actually going to give you the request, then. :/ I've got too much on my plate this weekend.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Nov 30 2012 - 07:26 PM

Right on it sir. I have a lot of free time this week, so I can do it.EDIT:

Comedy: Nuva NationStatus: FinishedChapters requested for Review: 24-28 :akaku: [font="trebuchet;"][color=#008080;]X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

REVIEW COMPLETE


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#87 Offline Voltex

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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 03:34 PM

[color=#008080;]Recorded in the index![/color]

 

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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 04:08 PM

Great. Now all we need to do is wait here, twiddling our thumbs until someone wants a review.


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#89 Offline Voltex

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Posted Dec 04 2012 - 08:35 PM

[color=#008080;]Rarity, just a reminder that you have four days to post your review.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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#90 Offline Rarity

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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 01:21 AM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Rarity, just a reminder that you have four days to post your review.[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]-ibrow[/color]

So it IS my review... K.

 

Also, I may have to resign in a few weeks.


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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 01:32 AM

Oh dear.

 

Why is that, though?


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#92 Offline Voltex

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Posted Dec 05 2012 - 09:39 PM

[color=#008080;]Well, yes. You DID say you would take it, and I thusly DID assign it to you. [/color]

 

[color=#008080;]We'll be sorry to see you go, although I must echo Hubert's question here.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 09:05 AM

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta ReturnsAuthor: Karzhani the UtahraptorStatus of your comedy: In Progress Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 


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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 03:22 PM

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta ReturnsAuthor: Karzhani the UtahraptorStatus of your comedy: In Progress Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 

 

[color=#008080;]Alright, assigned to Hubert.[/color]

 

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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 05:04 PM

Will get onto that as soon as possible. Like, a day or two.


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Posted Dec 06 2012 - 05:49 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Well, yes. You DID say you would take it, and I thusly DID assign it to you. [/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]We'll be sorry to see you go, although I must echo Hubert's question here.[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]-ibrow[/color]

I'm not going to have much free time.

Workin all day, school all night, all day, erry day, next semester. :/

 

 

Also, I should have your comedy reviewed either tonight or tomorrow.


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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 06:15 AM

 

Hi, I'm here to request a review (: 

 

 

Comedy Title: Ask Makuta ReturnsAuthor: Karzhani the UtahraptorStatus of your comedy: In Progress Chapters to be reviewed: 92 and 93 (optionally 1-91, but that's in the archive) 

 

 

Edit: Hi, for some reason the editor isn't allowing me to link the text above, so the link is here  (: 

 

[color=#008080;]Alright, assigned to Hubert.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]

 

REVIEW COMPLETE.


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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 05:03 PM

[color=#008080;]Recording review. Rarity, you have until tonight to finish your review or you will receive a strike.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Dec 08 2012 - 06:22 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Recording review. Rarity, you have until tonight to finish your review or you will receive a strike.[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]-ibrow[/color]

Cool. It's quick review time ya'll. :afro:

 

Posted it just before midnight.

 

Anyway, that's it for me.

Thank you iBrow for letting me have the opportunity to be a reviewer, it was nice while it lasted.

 

Now to fly off into the sunset and hope my wings don't burn off.


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#100 Offline Voltex

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 03:42 PM

[color=#008080;]It was good working with you, Rarity. Perhaps you'll have the time to re-join us in the future. To my lone remaining critic, Hubert, I must inform you of fisher's disappointing departure as well. School has caught up to all of us, it seems.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]So now we must hire![/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 05:50 PM

Oh dear. Time to advertise using my super awesome signature then.


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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 08:02 PM

The Comedy Forum being lowly populated? Oh ze noez!

 

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 09:19 PM

[color=#008080;]Good news: I have one possible critic already going through the screening![/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Bad news: Well, none yet.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 11:34 PM

That's good, because we really need some Critics.

 

You should advertise too boss.


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Posted Dec 30 2012 - 10:30 PM

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Comedy: X-Ray: The Return[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Status: Finished[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)[/color][/font]

 

:akaku: [font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]


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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 05:03 AM

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

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Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 04:26 PM

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Comedy: X-Ray: The Return[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Status: Finished[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)[/color][/font]

 

:akaku: [font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

 

[color=#008080;]Toa Kaithas, this one is for you.[/color]

 

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

Author: Jordboy1

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

-Jordboy1 :miru:

 

[color=#008080;]Hubert, this request is yours.[/color]


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Posted Dec 31 2012 - 11:01 PM

Gotcha. By the way, you still haven't added Kaithas to the Critics list.


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#109 Offline Voltex

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Posted Jan 01 2013 - 11:31 AM

[color=#008080;]I know... the past week, I've either been too busy or dealing with migraines (and other assorted sickness stuff) the likes of which I never knew before.[/color]

[color=#008080;]Suffice it to say it hasn't been the best way to close out 2012/open up 2013, but hey. I'm starting to feel better again.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 06:32 AM

Heyyo, old chaps! :P

 

Comedy: Mata Nui High School

Author: Jordboy1

Status: In Progress

Chapters to be reviewed: 18-22

 

The first three chapters are on the old board, but I have "18" linked. It might be a lot to read depending on chapter length...so take your time if you need :P

Thanks!

 

-Jordboy1 :miru:

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#111 Offline Voltex

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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 05:15 PM

[color=#008080;]Review noted![/color]

[color=#008080;]JORDBOY1, I HAVE A REVIEW FOR YOU.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Comedy: The AfterWords[/color]

[color=#008080;]Status: In Progress[/color]

[color=#008080;]Chapters: Prologue-Chapter 4[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Jan 04 2013 - 06:53 PM

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Comedy: X-Ray: The Return[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Status: Finished[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Chapters to be reviewed: 1 (It was a one shot)[/color][/font]

 

:akaku: [font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

 

REVIEW COMPLETE


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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 12:33 AM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Review noted![/color]

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]JORDBOY1, I HAVE A REVIEW FOR YOU.[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Comedy: The AfterWords[/color]

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Status: In Progress[/color]

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Chapters: Prologue-Chapter 4[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]-ibrow[/color]

 

DONE!

 

Also, the link you have in "the list" to the review of "X-Ray: The Return" links to a picture of the "share" image instead of the actual review :P

 

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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 03:24 PM

[color=#008080;]AAAAAUUUUUGH[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]it will be corrected[/color]

[color=#008080;]your review is being recorded[/color]


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Posted Jan 08 2013 - 09:54 PM

BIONICLE: The Legend ImplodedAuthor: TNTOSStatus of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .-TNTOS-
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Posted Jan 09 2013 - 08:29 PM

BIONICLE: The Legend ImplodedAuthor: TNTOSStatus of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .-TNTOS-

 

[color=#008080;]Time to shake my reviewing socks up and put them on; this request is for none other than ibrow. I haven't reviewed a comedy since July, yeesh.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 09:39 PM

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Comedy: [/color][color=#008080;]Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Status: Finished[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18[/color][/font]

 

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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 11:03 PM

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Comedy: [/color][color=#008080;]Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Status: Finished[/color][/font]

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18[/color][/font]

 

[color=#008080;][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"] :akaku: X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

 

Kaithas, for you.

 

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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 11:46 PM

Acknowledged. I'll get to work on that straightaway.
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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 06:12 AM

BIONICLE: The Legend ImplodedAuthor: TNTOSStatus of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1-5I'm interested to see how well you guys review comedies, so I'm requesting a review here. I can always use some constructive criticism :) .-TNTOS-

 

[color=#008080;]Time to shake my reviewing socks up and put them on; this request is for none other than ibrow. I haven't reviewed a comedy since July, yeesh.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]

Because the Chief doesn't have the time, he handed the job of reviewing said comedy to me, and here it is.

 

Ladies.


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