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#121 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Jan 23 2013 - 06:02 PM

[color=#008080;]Kaithas: Acknowledgement acknowledged.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Hubert: Appreciated and logged.[/color]

 

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#122 Offline Joseph Cooper

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Posted Jan 27 2013 - 11:24 PM

<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="Gavroche" data-cid="494172" data-time="1358741028"><p><blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="X-Ray" data-cid="494123" data-time="1358735987"><p><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'><span style='color: #008080'>Comedy: </span><a href='http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=7847'><span style='color: #008080'>Glatorian of Bara Magna: Curse of the Grey Crystal</span></a></span><br /><span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Author: X-Ray</span></span><br /><span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Status: Finished</span></span><br /><span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'>Chapters to be reviewed: 14-18</span></span><br /> <br /><span style='color: #008080'><span style='font-family: trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif'> :akaku: X-Ray :akaku:</span></span></p></blockquote> <br />Kaithas, for you.<br /> <br />-ibrow</p></blockquote>Review complete: http://www.bzpower.c...c=7847&p=497411


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#123 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Jan 29 2013 - 10:16 AM

[color=#008080;]That quote is messed up. But still, being logged.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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#124 Offline Joseph Cooper

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Posted Jan 29 2013 - 08:03 PM

Blame mobile posting. The tags don't work with it.
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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 11:51 PM

http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=8464]Terry's Horrendous Misadventures[/url]

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Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I 


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Morally unambiguous.


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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 06:52 AM

The tags don't work because it seems more HTML-ey than BBCode.


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#127 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 09:54 AM

Terry's Horrendous Misadventures

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Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I 

 

 

[color=#008080;]This one goes to Jordboy.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Feb 04 2013 - 04:23 PM

  • [/b]http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=2509]Solek's Story Part 2[/url]
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Bionicle news #2 click it, you know you want to. It's a comedy. With awesome humor. And contests. And a shadow leech. Who's evil.
http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=987 Solek's story. Its probably my best comedy ever. Plot, action, and in narrative form.

#129 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Feb 05 2013 - 07:56 PM

Terry's Horrendous Misadventures

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Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I 

 

 

[color=#008080;]This one goes to Jordboy.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Reassigned over to Hubert.[/color]

 

  • [/b]Solek's Story Part 2
  • Author: Me
  • Status of your comedy: Almost Finished.
  • Chapters to be reviewed: All 3 of them

 

[color=#008080;]Assigned to Toa Kaithas.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 11:48 AM

Acknowledged.
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#131 Offline Purple God

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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 07:24 PM

I'll get to it on the weekend.


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Posted Feb 06 2013 - 08:11 PM

[color=#008080;]Good to hear, lads! Good to hear![/color]

 

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Posted Feb 09 2013 - 08:45 AM

Terry's Horrendous Misadventures

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In Progress

Chapters I-II, Non-Canon Misc. Nonsense I 

 

 

[color=#008080;]This one goes to Jordboy.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Reassigned over to Hubert.[/color]

I have no idea how I took so long to do this review, but eh, it's done.


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Posted Feb 09 2013 - 04:54 PM

Logged in! And no font color!

 

-ibrow


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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 11:03 PM

Solek's story: REVIEW COMPLETE

 

I was a bit timelimited, but I got it done.


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Posted Feb 13 2013 - 03:45 PM

[color=#008080;]By my computer's clock you submitted your review three minutes late. I think I might be able to survive that without giving a strike. [/end jokes][/color]

 

[color=#008080;]ALSO: Jordboy has temporarily resigned, meaning that we are once again dangerously low on critics! Advertise the club! Drag someone in (actually don't)! Get an in-depth reviewer to bring our numbers back up![/color]

 

[color=#008080;]-ibrow[/color]


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Posted Mar 05 2013 - 07:38 AM

I'd review for you, except my attention span is probably too low for me to efficiently review constantly.

 

Sorry; I'm too lazy to read. It hurts my eyes.

 

Even though I spend more time on technology than on paper.


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 12:00 AM

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Comedy: [/color][/font][/font]Bionicles at Work

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Author: [/color][/font]X-Ray

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Status: [/color][/font]Finished

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Chapters to be reviewed:[/color][/font] 1-4

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]


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#139 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 08:04 AM

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Comedy: [/color][/font][/font]Bionicles at Work

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Author: [/color][/font]X-Ray

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Status: [/color][/font]Finished

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Chapters to be reviewed:[/color][/font] 1-4

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;] :akaku: X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

 

[color=#008080;]This request is assigned to Kaithas - you have one week. [/color][color=#ffffff;]lol giving hard time[/color]


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Posted Mar 20 2013 - 10:19 PM

Karzahni. My life is nuts.

 

Oh well, I'll try to get it done.


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#141 Offline Purple God

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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 12:30 AM

I've lost my groove guys.

 

So I gotta quit.

 

Sorry.

 

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Posted Mar 26 2013 - 08:31 PM

[color=#008080;]I guess we'll not be seeing you, then? [/color]


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#143 Offline Joseph Cooper

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Posted Mar 28 2013 - 12:14 PM

And there were two.Welp, recruitment time.
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Posted Mar 31 2013 - 07:26 PM

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Comedy: [/color][/font][/font]Bionicles at Work

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Author: [/color][/font]X-Ray

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Status: [/color][/font]Finished

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Chapters to be reviewed:[/color][/font] 1-4

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;] :akaku: X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]

 

[color=#008080;]This request is assigned to Kaithas - you have one week. [/color][color=#ffffff;]lol giving hard time[/color]

REVIEW COMPLETE


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#145 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 08:14 PM

[color=#008080;]Alright, I'll log it later (remind me if I forget). I'm thinking about re-extending the reviewing window to two weeks, since life is getting me, and everybody.[/color]


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#146 Offline Joseph Cooper

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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 04:18 PM

You haven't logged it, I don't think.

 

And yes, the extra time would be nice.


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#147 Offline Phovos

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Posted Apr 06 2013 - 12:22 PM

Are you guys busy at the moment? I'm considering signing up to be a critic but I have oh so little faith in my own criticising skills (and myself in general) so I don't know if I'd be any good.Also I'd like another review for The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings at some point but I'll ask you properly when I finish the current Skylim (spelling mistake intended) story.
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#148 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Apr 06 2013 - 03:49 PM

Are you guys busy at the moment? I'm considering signing up to be a critic but I have oh so little faith in my own criticising skills (and myself in general) so I don't know if I'd be any good.Also I'd like another review for The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings at some point but I'll ask you properly when I finish the current Skylim (spelling mistake intended) story.

 

[color=#008080;]We're rather un-busy at the moment, actually. And we'd love to have you on board - just shoot me a pm withint the next week and I can start you through the screening process.[/color]


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#149 Offline Phovos

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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 01:38 AM

Not busy then. I'll send you a PM when I'm on my computer. Sending PMs via mobile is annoying.
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#150 Offline Canis Lycaon

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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 11:11 AM

I would like a review.

 

Just a quick warning/description: The comedy is mostly based on the game Technic Coliseum, and uses a lot of RoboRiders and Slizers as characters. Thank you for reviewing!


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I used to have a banner here.

 

But that RPG is dead.

 

What now?


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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 06:48 PM

Kaithas, this is yours. You have two weeks.


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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 12:54 PM

It should be noted that I know about this, I just forgot to post an acknowledgement.


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#153 Offline Jalina T.T.

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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 01:18 PM

[color=#0000ff;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]iBrow, are you still looking for critics? I've got a pretty light spring term, so I'm not busy on the weekends if you need a hand. [/color][/font]

 

[color=#0000ff;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]It's nice to see the club doing well, by the way. You're doing a good job.[/color][/font]


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Posted Apr 18 2013 - 02:30 PM

It should be noted that I know about this, I just forgot to post an acknowledgement.

 

[color=#008080;]No problem.[/color]

 

[color=#0000ff;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]iBrow, are you still looking for critics? I've got a pretty light spring term, so I'm not busy on the weekends if you need a hand. [/color][/font]

 

[color=#0000ff;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]It's nice to see the club doing well, by the way. You're doing a good job.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#008080;]Thank you! And I actually think I still have you listed as an honorary curator, so if you want to I can just officially induct you.[/color]


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Posted Apr 19 2013 - 07:41 PM

URL: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=9474

Name: The Legend of the Bionicle...Toys

Author: ToaKapura1234

Status: Beginning

Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5.


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#156 Offline CHRIS PRATT

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Posted Apr 20 2013 - 12:19 PM

Jalina, you can have this if you want it. Otherwise it shall be mine.


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#157 Offline Jalina T.T.

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Posted Apr 23 2013 - 12:55 PM

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]Sorry, I'm still working on checking back on a regular basis again. Sure, I'll take it. :)[/color][/font]

 

EDIT: BAM! Done!

 

..BTW, are we still using a numbering system, or did we abandon that due to the fact that everyone rates a '7' differently?


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#158 Offline Canis Lycaon

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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 06:30 AM

I requested my review on the fourteenth. It is now the twenty ninth. It has been two weeks, and I have not received my review.


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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 02:21 PM

I'll talk to Kaithas about it. The CFE might have messed stuff up with timing, but it's still not good.Jalina: Yeah, we use scores, which I then convert into a percentage.


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Posted Apr 29 2013 - 09:07 PM

I apologize. Between tests and writing for the CFE, I've been a bit busy.

 

I'm working on it, should be up tonight. I hope.

 

Just so you know, if I'm not fired I may have to temp resign soon.


Edited by Kaitholas Cage, Apr 29 2013 - 09:18 PM.

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