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#161 Offline Phovos

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 05:24 AM

Hai. I'd like a review of some random about of the Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings please. I've gone and picked out the Skylim arc, featuring Nuhvok, Lehvak and Gahlok, as the arc with Pahrak and Tahnok and Kohrak's chapters have been a tad random.The Bohrok-Kal's RamblingsAuthor: Phovos the RaptorStatus of your comedy: In Progress, for ever and ever also forever.Chapters to be reviewed: The Skylim Arc - 1, 2, 3, 4


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#162 Offline Lucina

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 06:02 AM

Kaithas: It's just the first strike. No big deal.Phovos: I'll try to get this review done myself.


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#163 Offline Scott Sterling

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 09:19 PM

I would like a review.

 

Just a quick warning/description: The comedy is mostly based on the game Technic Coliseum, and uses a lot of RoboRiders and Slizers as characters. Thank you for reviewing!

REVIEW COMPLETE

 

Also, I'm handing in my resignation for the foreseeable future. I can't juggle this and finals at the same time, and I have a lot of stuff over the summer.

 

Sorry.


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#164 Offline Phovos

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Posted May 01 2013 - 01:50 AM

I'm in no rush for a review, so I don't mind if I'm waiting a few weeks.


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Posted May 01 2013 - 03:57 AM

Yo.

 

How does one apply to be a Critic?


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#166 Offline Lucina

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Posted May 01 2013 - 07:18 AM

[color=#008080;]Same as before - through looking at the first post, pming me, all that good sorta stuff.[/color]


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Posted May 01 2013 - 07:34 AM

Right then! Here we go again~


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#168 Offline Lucina

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Posted May 01 2013 - 08:48 PM

[color=#008080;]Jalina & Kaithas: Reviews are being logged. Jalina, am I correct in assuming you scored the comedy in the 70% area?[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]Kaithas: Sorry to see you go, but life must come first.[/color]

 

[color=#008080;]ZHX: Glad to see you back. You'll probably pass screening, but we must go through the formalities.[/color]


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#169 Offline TinkerTech

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Posted May 02 2013 - 01:07 PM

[color=#0000ff;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]Yeah, 70%-ish sounds about right. Thanks for letting me know, I wasn't sure.[/color][/font]


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#170 Offline Phovos

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Posted May 08 2013 - 12:49 AM

My review sucked. I think I'll just give up now.


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#171 Offline Lucina

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Posted May 08 2013 - 07:40 PM

The review doesn't look that bad, but it wasn't my comedy being reviewed. Shoot me a pm and I'll try to work this out.


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#172 Offline Tech Warrior

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Posted May 23 2013 - 11:12 AM

Okay, well, after wrongfully assuming that the 'Comedy Discussion and Planning Topic' was the new CCC, here I am again. I'm here because I would like a review. Yes, I have been given a review in the past, as you'll see in my topic, but that was over the first five chapters. I'm requesting a review over the next five (6-10). I only recently updated this comedy, so it will seem like the first CCC review was quite recent. It was, infact, over six months ago. :3 Yeah, I've been slow. But you know how it is; you start working on something, get tired of it; then you get inspired again.

 

[/b]http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4468]Tahu's Tips to Survival[/url]Author: Tech WarriorStatus of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 6-10

 

Because I want the review to be over these chapters (and since it may require knowledge of the previous ones), here is just a quick back-story to aid in the reading and reviewing of these chapters: It began as a talk show. Tahu is the main character; Helryx, Makuta, Gali, Lewa, and Vezon are the cast, each with their own distinct personalities. Their facility blew up in Episode 4 by a tornado, and they found a village in Episode 5 as a safe haven. Tahu was believed to be "cursed" by Hakann (someone who applied to be a cast member but didn't really work out), and that is where Episode 6 begins. The plot is sort of just opening (was my big error of the comedy as discussed in the first CCC review; plot is introduced somewhat late in the story).

 

Right, forgot to ask; I am allowed to request a second review, right? :P

 

Anyway, thanks,

~ TW


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#173 Offline Lucina

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Posted May 23 2013 - 02:15 PM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]Of course! And you didn't wrongfully assume anything; we were located in the CP&D Topic for about four months before deciding we needed our own topic.[/color]

 

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]ZHX/Hubert, welcome back aboard - this review is yours. Try not to, urm, be controversial with your review this time? I guess? xD[/color]


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Posted May 23 2013 - 10:01 PM

I'm not really that controversial.

 

Am I?

 

But I'll do my best to get this done.

 

Even with exams.

 

Multitasking hweee.

 

EDIT: DONE


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#175 Offline Dapper-Sama

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Posted Jul 15 2013 - 11:29 PM

[color=#008080;]What Really Happened to Azeran[/color]

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Posted Jul 16 2013 - 02:40 AM

You want me to handle that, chief?


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#177 Offline Lucina

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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 08:39 PM

Yes please.


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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 09:44 PM

I'll get to it by the end of the week.

 

EDIT:

 

REVIEW COMPLETE


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Posted Aug 10 2013 - 07:47 PM

The Misadventures of Nobody (and X-Ray)

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Author: X-Ray[/color][/font]

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Status: In Progress[/color][/font]

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Chapters to be reviewed: 1-5[/color][/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]Thanks for your help![/color][/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"][color=#008080;]:akaku: X-Ray :akaku:[/color][/font]


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Posted Aug 10 2013 - 11:18 PM

Do you want me to take that, iBrow, or do you wanna do it?


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Posted Aug 11 2013 - 07:13 AM

[color=rgb(0,128,128);]I'll need you to do it - I leave again soon for another two weeks.[/color]


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Posted Aug 11 2013 - 05:15 PM

Haha; next thing you know, you're stepping down as chief and promoting me to the position.


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Posted Aug 12 2013 - 04:27 PM

ITT: Hoodie saves BZ-Koro

Author: Rarity

Status: Complete

Chapters to be reviewed: The first and only chapter.

 

 

Hope you guys like greentext!


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Posted Aug 12 2013 - 05:15 PM

Oh god. I have to do that too, don't I?


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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 08:03 PM

I'll go ahead and request one as well to support local business.

 

The Bionicles Try To Run a Mansion

Author: MT Zehvor

Status: Ongoing/In Progress

Chapters to Review: 1-3

 

-MT


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Posted Aug 14 2013 - 11:51 PM

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]As a former Curator of the CCC, I'm willing to step in for iBrow while he's away and handle requests.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]Um... How many critics are there, aside from me and CWL?[/color][/font]

 

Comedies to be Reviewed:

The Misadventures of Nobody (and X-Ray)-By X-Ray (Chapters 1-5) -Assigned to Content With Life

 

ITT:Hoodie saves BZKoro-By Rarity (Chapter 1) -Assigned to Jalina T.T.

 

The Bionicles Try to Run a Mansion-by MT Zehvor (Chatpers 1-3) -Assigned to ???

 

 

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]CWL, since you have already taken on X-Ray's comedy, I will let you have that. I will take Rarity's, and Zehvor's may have to wait until either of us is done. (Or until I find another critic.)[/color][/font]

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]Zehvor, are you a member of the CCC? I can't remember.[/color][/font]


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Posted Aug 15 2013 - 12:17 AM

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]As a former Curator of the CCC, I'm willing to step in for iBrow while he's away and handle requests.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]Um... How many critics are there, aside from me and CWL?[/color][/font]

 

Comedies to be Reviewed:

The Misadventures of Nobody (and X-Ray)-By X-Ray (Chapters 1-5) -Assigned to Content With Life

 

ITT:Hoodie saves BZKoro-By Rarity (Chapter 1) -Assigned to Jalina T.T.

 

The Bionicles Try to Run a Mansion-by MT Zehvor (Chatpers 1-3) -Assigned to ???

 

 

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]CWL, since you have already taken on X-Ray's comedy, I will let you have that. I will take Rarity's, and Zehvor's may have to wait until either of us is done. (Or until I find another critic.)[/color][/font]

 

[font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"][color=#0000ff;]Zehvor, are you a member of the CCC? I can't remember.[/color][/font]

I am not currently, no, though considering the lack of critics, I think at this point I'd be willing to set aside my own personal grievances in order to get things running again.

 

-MT


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Posted Aug 16 2013 - 12:42 AM

I took Rarity's already.

 

I'm working on X-Ray's now.


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Posted Nov 14 2013 - 09:26 PM

I regret to announce that the CCC will be closing up shop. A combined lack of activity within the Comedies forum and a lack of time on the part of myself and Hubert has left this topic without the proper attention it deserves, and I am shutting it down. I leave it up to those still with the time and interest in the forum to decide whether they will begin a new CCC or find some other solution.

 

-Voltex, CCC Curator


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