toa kopaka4372 Posted December 10, 2012 Share Posted December 10, 2012 So, what if your story topic dies. Does that matter?I don't think it'll take the judges that long to judge all the entries. If they do, I think revival would be alright in this case. Credit goes to Linus Van Pelt (Formerly known as Cherixon) and Spectral Avohkii EnterprisesMy Memoirs of the Dead entry, Reflectons:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7351 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted December 11, 2012 Author Share Posted December 11, 2012 I completely forgot, when I edited my story, I added 13 words to the word count, going from 2,699 to 2,712. Can you change that in the entry list, and do I have permission to edit my entry form and story?Go ahead. We're not including it in the entry list though; that's just to make sure you stay within the limit. So, what if your story topic dies. Does that matter?Entry topics follow Library rules, so they can be revived. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 11, 2012 Share Posted December 11, 2012 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7486"]First Kill[/url] by TheSkeletonMan939I approve this entry. -TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted December 11, 2012 Share Posted December 11, 2012 So, what if your story topic dies. Does that matter?Entry topics follow Library rules, so they can be revived. Ok, good, because mine hasn't been posted in in a while, and I was starting to get worried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mersery Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 I've noticed two minor typos in my entry, which I've asked to be corrected. However, since nobody has replied to those requests in my entry's topic, I guess I'll just repost my question here. May I make minor grammatical corrections to my entry? "The ships hung in the sky in much the same way that bricks don't." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 As an authorized contest judge, I have read and judged this entry: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7675&p=475128]The Mentor's Way[/url] by Mersery/Fezmaster I see minor grammar problems with this entry. (Also authorized edits for the errors he caught. ) Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 I've noticed two minor typos in my entry, which I've asked to be corrected. However, since nobody has replied to those requests in my entry's topic, I guess I'll just repost my question here. May I make minor grammatical corrections to my entry? I think your entry may be missing from the list. Can you post a link to it? "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 I've noticed two minor typos in my entry, which I've asked to be corrected. However, since nobody has replied to those requests in my entry's topic, I guess I'll just repost my question here. May I make minor grammatical corrections to my entry? I think your entry may be missing from the list. Can you post a link to it? His entry is right here, TL. Mersery just changed his name. The Mentor's Way by Mersery Judged by:The First Speaker: Problems FoundEdits were made to fix the errorsThe First Speaker: Approvedfishers64: Problems Found I authorized his edits. Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 (edited) Hey, I fixed the issues on mine a few weeks ago and I haven't heard anything. I know you guys are busy, but I kinda wanna know if it's ready to go to the poles. Edited December 13, 2012 by DeltaStriker Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Hey, I fixed the issues on mine a few weeks ago and I haven't heard anything. I know you guts are busy, but I kinda wanna know if it's ready to go to the poles.Ok, I know what you meant, but I still want to point that out because it gave me a good laugh. Good job! PS. Not laughing at you, just laughing at the thought of you actually meaning it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Hey, I fixed the issues on mine a few weeks ago and I haven't heard anything. I know you guts are busy, but I kinda wanna know if it's ready to go to the poles.Ok, I know what you meant, but I still want to point that out because it gave me a good laugh. Good job! PS. Not laughing at you, just laughing at the thought of you actually meaning it. Ok, THAT would be funny. However, that is proof of why you should read everything typed from a mobile device before publishing it. Auto-check is trying to take over the world. However, I am (still) anxious to know if it's all set. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Makao Posted December 19, 2012 Share Posted December 19, 2012 (edited) Zaktan:Rising by Toa MakaoJudged by:Toa of Italy: Problems foundEdits were made to fix the errorsTLhikan: Problems Foundbonesiii: Problems FoundPosts were addressed, but the errors might not have. Errors were all addressed, just FYI. Edited December 19, 2012 by Toa Makao Last of the Matoran Universe (please read and review) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Legendary TNT Posted December 20, 2012 Share Posted December 20, 2012 (edited) Hey, I noticed that on the front page, it has my user name as the author. I don't want my whole username to be the author, I just want TNT. I'm going to get a name change soon so, I still want people to recognize me (Cuz' it's still gonna be TNT-somethin'.). So yeah...could you do that for me please?Oh, and another thing, could I have a banner at the top of my story like The Mentor's Way? Edited December 20, 2012 by TNT-DJ Vezon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First Speaker Posted December 20, 2012 Share Posted December 20, 2012 Oh, and another thing, could I have a banner at the top of my story like The Mentor's Way? Yes, you are allowed to have a banner for your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 (edited) As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7693#entry461145"]Protector[/url] by Colt McCoy/Codin the Fe-Matoran (according to the topic, Colt wrote it, but Codin posted/edited it because of Colt having account problems.)I approve this entry. As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7753"]Dawning Valor[/url] by DoomIgnikaI approve this entry. Edited December 22, 2012 by TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa of Italy Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry: The Unknown Turaga by ZippyWharrgarbl I approve this entry. As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry: Memento Vivere by Infrared I approve this entry. My collection of epics: The Sanctum of Writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Has anyone's entry not been judged at all? -TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willess12 Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Has anyone's entry not been judged at all? -TLhikanNo, but some (like mine) have only been judged once. On 9/29/2014, Greg Farshtey said: "Just wanted to say a quick something -- A lot of you guys are BIONICLE fans, many from way back. It's no secret that you are some of the smartest, most loyal, and most dedicated fans out there. You, and you alone, have carried the torch for the line over the last four years. Hopefully, you will feel rewarded for your efforts by 2015 BIONICLE. Regardless, I wanted to take this opportunity to say that I am really proud to be associated with you, and you should be really proud of yourselves" Ordinarily, I don't do quotes, but this is special.Fire Ice Water Stone Earth Air... I mean Jungle. Bionicle: The Legacy Hero An attempt to put some magic back into Bionicle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 (edited) Has anyone's entry not been judged at all? -TLhikanNo, but some (like mine) have only been judged once. Yeah, but Fisher approved yours already . Seriously speaking, if you'd like, I can go over it and approve it as well. I would like to get to people who haven't been approved and are waiting on it first though. EDIT: As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7745"]Brothers[/url] by DeltaStrikerI see problems with this entry. Edited December 26, 2012 by TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 How many times is each entry going to be judged? Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 (edited) How many times is each entry going to be judged? As many times as we can, but Bones has the final say on all stories. As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7743"]Certainty[/url] by Baron Von NebulaI approve this entry. As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7746"]Hunter's Folly[/url] by Felix DzerzhinskyI see problems with this entry. As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7720"]Belief[/url] by Dual MatrixI see problems with this entry. -TLhikan Edited December 26, 2012 by TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaksDudekVA Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 I too have also had only one Judge look at my entry. Also, may I make a few edits to my entry to fix spelling errors and grammar errors? Need a voice over done? PM me or reach me at mikolajdudek@gmail.com! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted December 28, 2012 Author Share Posted December 28, 2012 (edited) I too have also had only one Judge look at my entry. Also, may I make a few edits to my entry to fix spelling errors and grammar errors?Yes. Just be sure to post the details of what you changed. Edited December 28, 2012 by bonesiii The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 Has anyone's entry not been judged at all? -TLhikanNo, but some (like mine) have only been judged once. I've been judged by two judges and fixed what they saw was wrong. However, I have yet to get responses back. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takhamavahu Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Memento Vivere by InfraredI see problems with this entry. Minor stuff. Two minutes to fix. Flash Fire Adaptive Armour Where They All Are Tobduk Nikila Iron Wolf Artakha Adaptive Armour 2 Helryx Lariska Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaksDudekVA Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 Ok, Ive fixed my story. the word count still stays the same by the way. Need a voice over done? PM me or reach me at mikolajdudek@gmail.com! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mersery Posted December 31, 2012 Share Posted December 31, 2012 Just made a minor grammatical correction to my entry: "We strode past several the rooms of prophecy..." to, "We strode past several rooms of prophecy..." "The ships hung in the sky in much the same way that bricks don't." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaksDudekVA Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 Ok, Ive fixed my story. the word count still stays the same by the way. oh yeah, I have also changed the toa of Psionics to a toa of Lightning to keep continuity in order. Need a voice over done? PM me or reach me at mikolajdudek@gmail.com! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted January 2, 2013 Author Share Posted January 2, 2013 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:The Mentor's Way by MerseryI see problems with this entry. All easy fixes. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaksDudekVA Posted January 2, 2013 Share Posted January 2, 2013 hey bones, do you mind judging my entry? Its a good read, or so Ive been told by a few people.oh yeah, and the list needs to be updated, my entry has had all its errors fixed. Need a voice over done? PM me or reach me at mikolajdudek@gmail.com! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted January 3, 2013 Author Share Posted January 3, 2013 Okay, list should be up to date now, lemme know if I missed anything. tj, since you asked, I'll make yours the next on my to-do list. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 Okay, list should be up to date now, lemme know if I missed anything. tj, since you asked, I'll make yours the next on my to-do list. I fixed the errors, but have yet to get a response from the judges. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted January 4, 2013 Author Share Posted January 4, 2013 Alright, list updated for that. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First Speaker Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 (edited) As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:The First Hunter by Emissary to the VoidI approve this entry. Edited January 4, 2013 by The First Speaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaksDudekVA Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 How many times do the stories have to be judged in order to be up in the polls? Need a voice over done? PM me or reach me at mikolajdudek@gmail.com! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infrared Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 (edited) How many times do the stories have to be judged in order to be up in the polls?Three judges need to approve an entry for it to be "tentatively approved," but bonesiii gives the final approval.Also, for the list, Takhamavahu approved of my fixes, but hasn't officially approved my entry as of yet (in the same fashion as fishers64). Anyway, here are the changes to the entry so far (minus the spacing issues beyond the first edit and word count changes). I hope linking to applicable posts is okay (some involve spoilers, and it wouldn't really make sense to quote the posts and put them in spoiler tags when I can just link to them). I put the post numbers there as well, because it looks like links to posts don't always work correctly: - Fixed spacing of title and breaks (approved here [the 296th post of this topic]) (I posted about this originally, but I guess I must have forgotten to switch tabs because I posted it in the Ask GregF a Question topic, and it was moved to the actual story topic, not this one.)- Made ending less ambiguous and italicized a line (see the fourth post of the story topic) (approved in the fifth post); my original revision to the ending (the one that was approved) was missing a space between two sentences, which I fixed as well, as it directly relates to the already-approved revisions- Edits detailed in the seventh post of the story topic and the eighth post and approved in the first link (the seventh post) and the ninth post. Also, my word count has now risen from 2,595 to 2,619. Can I change both my entry and story posts to reflect this? Edited January 4, 2013 by Infrared Helryx BS01 / Flickr Makuta, Master of Nothing (The Legend Continues) / 3D Printed Nuva Cube / Okoto font! Zemahri, Toa of Sand / Dark Hunter Rampage (BBC 73) / Arkhevai / Keetongu, Venom Healer (BBC 69) / Voodude (BftGM) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted January 4, 2013 Author Share Posted January 4, 2013 Can I change both my entry and story posts to reflect this?Yes. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takhamavahu Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 Infrared, just repost all that info on what you changed in your story's thread and I'll approve it. Flash Fire Adaptive Armour Where They All Are Tobduk Nikila Iron Wolf Artakha Adaptive Armour 2 Helryx Lariska Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Makao Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 Is my entry approved? It's been judged, errors were pointed out, and I fixed them, but it's all a bit ambiguous. Last of the Matoran Universe (please read and review) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mersery Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 (edited) I have left a VERY long list of small things I'd like to correct. Just posting here so I don't have to wait for such a long period of time for someone to approve. I recommend a judge/contest host who has enough to time to go through all of them, and also because in some instances I'm asking whether changes actually need to be made at all. Perhaps bonesii, seeing as he did the most in-depth critical review of my piece. Edited January 5, 2013 by Fezmaster "The ships hung in the sky in much the same way that bricks don't." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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