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S&T Contest #7: Memoirs of the Dead


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#481 Online bonesiii

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Posted Apr 27 2014 - 05:13 PM

Why don't you PM me what you want to add (and where; include a bit of the context in each case). And make it very minimal, please. :)


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#482 Offline Toa Makao

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Posted Apr 28 2014 - 05:28 PM

Why don't you PM me what you want to add (and where; include a bit of the context in each case). And make it very minimal, please. :)


Very good, I'll get back to you tomorrow :)

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#483 Offline TheSkeletonMan939

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Posted Apr 29 2014 - 01:41 PM

I modified my story; I assume someone needs to check it over again now. Thanks, bonesiii. All I really changed was some word choice.


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Posted May 08 2014 - 02:11 AM

Same here, I've finished amending mine.
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Posted May 08 2014 - 08:23 AM

Thanks for the notice.

Progress report: Halfway through reformatting entries to fix the squish-together glitch. :)

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#486 Offline Mersery

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Posted May 09 2014 - 07:39 AM

Oooh, now that this place seems to gearing up again, I might give my entry a quick read through again. Hopefully, there won't be too many nitpicks, seeing how laboriously I combed through the entry earlier last year. :P


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"A Toa is not someone who has no fear - but someone who masters their fear."

 

 


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Posted May 22 2014 - 07:21 PM

Okay, I believe all the entries' formats are fixed. I had to guess in a few places how it was supposed to be, but for the most part I think they're as the authors intended.

Now I'm going through and updating the judgments lists. Any outstanding problems raised that were not fixed, but that I deem not major enough to really matter, I'm making a note about on the list and calling the entry approved to go to polls. We can still work out more minor fixes after they win if it comes up. Note though that for now authors may still fix things judges have brought up, even if I say it's okay without the fixes.

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#488 Offline fishers64

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Posted May 22 2014 - 07:32 PM

>>LIST
 
Well okay, guess I should pull it and put it back on BZP: 
 
Nidhiki: 
 
Memory by Exitum:
Toa Lhikan Hordika: Approved
Infrared: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Problems found
fishers64: Approved
Takhamavahu: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
(Takamavahu: suggestions given)
(Suggestions taken)
Takamavahu: Approved
Infrared: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Infrared: Approved (suggestions given)
(Suggestions taken)
(Additional corrections made; approved by Infrared)
 
Casualties by Toa Jalokim
TLhikan: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems found
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Infrared: Problems found
fishers64: Problems found

[bones: No edits have been made to the latest two judge posts, but I see nothing major among the problems. I'm calling this approved enough to go to polls.]
 
Zaktan:

Rising by Toa Makao
Toa of Italy: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
fishers64: Approved
Infrared: Problems Found (note: some errors need to be checked by bonesiii)
 
Spiriah:
All That Glitters by Magnus Greel

bonesiii: Approved
fishers64: Problems Found
Toa of Italy: Approved
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
Ihu:
Reflections by toa kopaka4372
fishers64: Approved (suggestions given)
(Suggestions taken)
bonesiii: Approved (suggestions given)
(Suggestions taken)
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Approved (suggestions given)
(Suggestions taken)
(Suggestions given by Click, who isn’t a judge)
(Suggestions taken)
 
The Mentor's Way by Mersery
The First Speaker: Problems Found
(Suggestions given by Codin the Fe-Matoran, who isn’t a judge)
Edits were made to fix the errors
(Suggestions taken)
The First Speaker: Approved
(Additional corrections made)
(Suggestions given by Willess12, who isn’t a judge)
(Additional corrections made)
fishers64: Problems Found
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
(Additional corrections made)
(Additional corrections made)
 
 
Naho:
First Kill by TheSkeletonMan939
TLhikan: Problems found
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
fishers64: Approved
 
Toa by Iku 
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Approved
 
Hydraxon:
Three on Three by Makuta Matata
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
 
Lhikan:
Protector by Colt McCoy & J. Mascioli 
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Legends of Lhii by Yio
TLhikan: Problems Found
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Dawning Valor by DoomIgnika
TLhikan: Problems Found (Later approved without edits being made)
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
TLhikan: Approved
fishers64: Problems found
 
Reysa:
Predators by Toasylar
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors (note: one error needs to be checked by bonesiii)
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Memento Vivere by Infrared
(Corrections made)
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits made to fix errors
Toa of Italy: Approved
Takhamavahu: Problems Found
Edits made to fix errors
Takhamavahu: Approved
 
The Journal by Click
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors (note: one error needs to be checked by bonesiii)
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Mavrah:
Dragon by Willess12 
fishers64: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Approved
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems found
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Approved
 
Botar:
Belief by Dual Matrix
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors (note: one error needs to be checked with bonesiii?)
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
TLhikan: Approved
fishers64: Approved
 
Jovan:
Teacher by Tikiturbo
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
fishers64: Problems found
fishers64: Approved
 
Brothers by DeltaStriker
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
(Error found by toa jalokim, who isn’t a contest judge.)
fishers64: Problems Found (specifically, approved fixing toa jalokim’s error)
 
Icarax:
Certainty by Baron Von Nebula
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Approved
The First Speaker: Approved
fishers64: Approved
 
Matoro:
Invasion by Lewa Krom
TLhikan: Problems Found
fishers64: Problems Found
 
Gorast:
Hunter's Folly by Felix Dzerinsky
TLhikan: Problems Found (one error addressed by bonesiii)
fishers64: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Problems Found
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
Ancient:
The First Hunter by Emissary to the Void
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
The First Speaker: Approved
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
fishers64: Approved
 
Kodan:
The Last Chronicle by TNT
Toa of Italy: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
(Additional corrections were approved by fishers64 and made)
Edits were made to fix the errors
bonesiii: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
 
The Unknown Turaga by ZippyWharrgarbl
Judged by: TLhikan, Toa of Italy, fishers64
Approvals (2): Toa of Italy, fishers64
TLhikan: Problems Found
Edits were made to fix the errors
Toa of Italy: Approved
fishers64: Approved
 
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The First Speaker = Mr. Hyde on the judges list (he changed his name back).
 

 

That should be current. :P


Edited by fishers64, May 22 2014 - 08:24 PM.

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#489 Offline Infrared

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Posted May 22 2014 - 10:44 PM

Just to double-check, it would be okay for me to change some minor punctuation, wording, etc. issues on my entry, right? It wouldn't be plot changes or anything; some sentences just don't convey their ideas as clearly as I'd like. I can try to get diffs up on GitHub or something if you want (they're widespread enough writing them all up would take a while).


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Posted May 23 2014 - 09:49 AM

That's fine.


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Posted May 23 2014 - 11:35 PM

Alright, done. The word count has changed but is still within the allowed range.
 
Also:
 
As an authorized contest judge, I have read and judged this entry:
 
Rising by Toa Makao
 
I approve this entry.

 

It turns out the Piraka (minus Avak) rebelled against TSO 5,000 years ago but actually left the organization at a later point, so the timing of the Nidhiki scene checks out.


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Posted Jun 05 2014 - 02:10 PM

So, how is the contest being voted on again?


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Posted Jun 05 2014 - 03:53 PM

When bones finishes it he will likely post some official polls in this forum. 


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Posted Jun 07 2014 - 11:29 AM

Just wondering, is this still official and approved by Greg as of now? I mean, he's been out-of-contact for so long... he might forgot about this or something


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Posted Jun 24 2014 - 02:29 PM

So, any progress?
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