onionfarb Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Is it possible for me to get an extension of a couple days? I might need a bit more time to finish mine up. I miss BIONICLE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 Sorry but one extension really should be enough. You can rush to the end and get permission to make some edits, within reason, if you must. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scanty Demon Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 On the last part of my entry so I will be able to post it. My fear is the grammar; I just hope I do well this time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7745"]http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7745[/url]BrothersAuthor: DeltaStrikerProtagonist: JovanWord Count: 1,601I made it! Edited November 29, 2012 by DeltaStriker Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 Don't worry about grammar; that can be edited later. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scanty Demon Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Guess who made it in! Title: Hunter's FollyProtagonist: GorastWord Count: 4,713 (not counting the title and trivia)Author: Felix DzerzhinskyNote: Anything in color and bolded is NOT a part of the entry. The word count at the end isn't either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicBOOM XS Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 I. Am. SO. FLIPPING. !#!%$@!I ended up having to do another story for a class of mine. Guess I'm sitting this one out Undergoing Renovations... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Emissary Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Title: The First HunterAuthor: Emissary to the VoidProtagonist: AncientWord count: 3,655 (including title and dividers) [ BZPRPG ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) I FINALLY FINISHED HAHHAAHHAHAhttp://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7749"]The Unknown Turaga[/url]Author: ZippyWharrgarblProtagonist: KodanWord count: 1229 Edited November 30, 2012 by ZippyWharrgarbl Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Space: Ocean of Awe Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Gah, I wish I would have been able to write something for this...darn you, procrastination! =) "Baby, in the final analyses, love is power. That's where the power's at." TumblrTwitterWattpad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scanty Demon Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Don't worry about grammar; that can be edited later. Can an entry be disqualified if there are too many grammar problems (like too many typos or just being unreadable)? I don't think my entry is unreadable per say it just may have a lot of grammar errors and I'm afraid it suffer because of that. To the judges of the contest: my entry appears to have some errors in it with regards to grammar. This is because I rushed the last part of the entry point out every error you see. I just thought you could use an FYI when you're judging. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infrared Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7751"]Memento Vivere[/url]Author: InfraredProtagonist: ReysaWord count: 2,619Unfortunately, the rich text editor changed the formatting of my post a bit. Would it be okay for me to change it? Specifically, the title and breaks aren't spaced properly. Edited January 5, 2013 by Infrared Helryx BS01 / Flickr Makuta, Master of Nothing (The Legend Continues) / 3D Printed Nuva Cube / Okoto font! Zemahri, Toa of Sand / Dark Hunter Rampage (BBC 73) / Arkhevai / Keetongu, Venom Healer (BBC 69) / Voodude (BftGM) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Would it be okay for me to quickly edit my entry to include a title? It doesn't have to have one, I just am beginning to get the impression that it is required.It has a title, by the way, but it is in the name of the topic. Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) Yes, made it, last minute entry!Unfortunately, a lot of the other last minute entries were also Reysa, so I'm not as unique anymore. http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7752"]The Journal[/url]Author: ClickProtagonist: ReysaWord Count: 2,712Probably one of the longer entries, but I don't know. I still haven't read through all the others. Edited December 11, 2012 by Click ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onionfarb Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Now that Greg's sorta-returned, is it likely that there will be more story contests in the future? I miss BIONICLE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 (edited) Don't worry about grammar; that can be edited later. Can an entry be disqualified if there are too many grammar problems (like too many typos or just being unreadable)? I don't think my entry is unreadable per say it just may have a lot of grammar errors and I'm afraid it suffer because of that. To the judges of the contest: my entry appears to have some errors in it with regards to grammar. This is because I rushed the last part of the entry point out every error you see. I just thought you could use an FYI when you're judging. Thank you.It's practically impossible. Don't worry about it. Memento VivereAuthor: InfraredProtagonist: ReysaWord count: 2,594Unfortunately, the rich text editor changed the formatting of my post a bit. Would it be okay for me to change it? Specifically, the title and breaks aren't spaced properly.Approved. Would it be okay for me to quickly edit my entry to include a title? It doesn't have to have one, I just am beginning to get the impression that it is required.It has a title, by the way, but it is in the name of the topic.Go ahead. Now that Greg's sorta-returned, is it likely that there will be more story contests in the future?It's possible. I wouldn't bet on likely, though. I had plans for a series of contests we'd do instead, which would have less constraints. We'll see, though; no reason we couldn't do that that anyways as well as more canon ones, I suppose. But it's all up to Greg. Edited November 27, 2012 by bonesiii The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewa Krom Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Now that Greg's sorta-returned, is it likely that there will be more story contests in the future? I sure hope so. I would love to see some contests placed during the current storyline, even if it is more like "Meanwhile, the Matoran are..." and not the central storyline. Maybe it could be in the same sort of fashion as ATYU so that Greg can make approve it and there would be less likely to be holes? Keep in mind that if Star Trek fans had, as a group, said, "No point in talking about this anymore, it's never going to come back," it never WOULD have come back. -- Greg Farshtey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Would it be okay for me to quickly edit my entry to include a title? It doesn't have to have one, I just am beginning to get the impression that it is required.It has a title, by the way, but it is in the name of the topic.Go ahead. Thank you very much! Do I need to put down the date of when I edited it, or... well, I guess it does that itself, huh? Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 No need to do that. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoomIgnika Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Title: Dawning ValorAuthor: DoomIgnikaProtagonist: LhikanWord Count: 5,912 (including dividers)Sorry for the last-minute entry. Hope this will work. ~ DoomIgnika ~ (too lazy to make an actual sig) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 Alright, my clock reads 11:59, so that's the end of the entry period.Repeating to be clear, judging and approved editing will now continue.I'm hoping to get the Shards polls up as my next priority, while we judge the many new entries. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSkeletonMan939 Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 I'm amazed at how many people were able to post their entries in the last two hours of the contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 I'm amazed at how many people were able to post their entries in the last two hours of the contest.It's fun to be a judge . -TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 I'm amazed at how many people were able to post their entries in the last two hours of the contest.It's fun to be a judge . -TLhikanThat was really random. Though I do wonder; how are you guys gonna read and judge all of these entries? Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa of Italy Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Dawning Valor by DoomIgnikaI see problems with this entry. My collection of epics: The Sanctum of Writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Matata Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Wow. So many last-minute entries. XD Three on Three - Memoirs of the Dead - Winner!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 I'm amazed at how many people were able to post their entries in the last two hours of the contest.It's fun to be a judge . -TLhikanThat was really random. Though I do wonder; how are you guys gonna read and judge all of these entries?Probably by consuming much sugar. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLhikan Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 (edited) Crud, I've been forgetting to do this.As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Predators by Toa SylarI see problems with this entryAs an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Dawning Valor by DoomIgnika.I see problems with this entry.As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:The Journal by ClickI see problems with this entry. Edited November 28, 2012 by TLhikan "So I'm TL now?""Yeah, 'cuz if we said it the other way it'd have to be TLhiKHAAN!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Predators by Toa SylarI see problems with this entry.As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry:Memento Vivere by Infrared.I see problems with this entry. Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scanty Demon Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 So how is the judging period before the polls?Also I'm waiting for my entry to get judged kinda puts me on edge when I think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 So how is the judging period before the polls?Also I'm waiting for my entry to get judged kinda puts me on edge when I think about it.Same here. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iku Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 Should someone put all the links to all the stories up at on the first post? I think that would make it easier for judges to find the stories. "Keep in mind that if Star Trek fans had, as a group, said, 'No point in talking about this anymore, it's never going to come back,' it never WOULD have come back." -Greg Farshtey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 29, 2012 Author Share Posted November 29, 2012 Should someone put all the links to all the stories up at on the first post? I think that would make it easier for judges to find the stories.Yeah, I'll put together an entry list soonish. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 Things are getting intense here. I'm getting all fidgety just waiting around; have any entries been judged with no problems yet? Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Yio:. Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 Um, just noticing a few entries after mine have been looked at but mine hasn't yet, not trying to be pushy but just letting the judges be aware of it As infrequent as I post, I will always continue to be a BIONICLE fan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 Two questions:1. Can there be two winning entries with the same protagonist, as long as they don't contradict each other?2. Can I add a brief conclusion, only a paragraph or so, to the end of my entry? I feel it would make the ending more meaningful. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonesiii Posted November 29, 2012 Author Share Posted November 29, 2012 1) I haven't yet decided how to divvy up the entries; we can discuss possibilities here. Must say that I do think it would be best to have only one winning entry per protagonist. The issue is protags that only have one story; how to divide those up. But I'm willing to consider if a different simple division method might allow multiple entries per protagonist if anyone can think of one (consider, but likely not approve...).2) Go ahead. The Destiny of Bionicle (chronological retelling of Bionicle original series, 9 PDFs of 10 chapters each on Google Drive): Part 1 - Warring with Fate | Part 2 - Year of Change | Part 3 - The Exploration Trap | Part 4 - Rise of the Warlords | Part 5 - A Busy Matoran | Part 6 - The Dark Time | Part 7 - Proving Grounds | Part 8 - A Rude Awakening | Part 9 - The Battle of Giants My Bionicle Fanfiction (Google Drive folder, eventually planned to have PDFs of all of it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordmeister Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 I think that Reysa has the most entries. Johan, Lihkan and Nidiki have around two. As far as I know, Mataro only has one...Idea! Maybe there should be categories, like hero/villain. Each category gets threeish winners. Rock Bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 I would make categories on story length I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 (edited) Entry lists: 1. By protagonist: Nidhiki:Memory by ExitumCasualties by Toa Jalokim Zaktan:Rising by Toa MakaoSpiriah:All That Glitters by Magnus GreelIhu:Reflections by toa kopaka4372The Mentor's Way by Mersery Naho:First Kill by TheSkeletonMan939Toa by Iku Hydraxon:Three on Three by Makuta Matata Lhikan:Protector by Colt McCoy & J. MascioliLegends of Lhii by YioDawning Valor by DoomIgnika Reysa:Predators by ToasylarMemento Vivere by InfraredThe Journal by Click Mavrah:Dragon by Willess12 Botar:Belief by Dual Matrix Jovan:Teacher by TikiturboBrothers by DeltaStriker Icarax:Certainty by Baron Von Nebula Matoro:Invasion by Lewa Krom Gorast:Hunter's Folly by Felix Dzerinsky Ancient:The First Hunter by Emissary to the Void Kodan:The]http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7439]The Last Chronicle by TNT-DJ VezonThe Unknown Turaga by ZippyWharrgarbl Note: There seems to be a wide variety of protagonists, so not sure we should have categories by protagonist. 2. In order of topic appearance: (* = unjudged as of yet, I think...) MemoryAuthor: ExitiumProtagonist: NidhikiWord count:2390 RisingAuthor: Toa Makao Protagonist: ZaktanWord count: 3986 4073 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7248"]All That GlittersAuthor: Magnus GreelProtagonist: SpiriahWord count: 2,822 ReflectionsAuthor: toa kopaka4372Protagonist: IhuWord Count: 5,973 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7439]The Last ChronicleAuthor: TNT- DJ VezonProtagonist: KodanWord Count: 1,162 Words, including dividers First KillAuthor: TheSkeletonMan939Protagonist: NahoWord count: 3,410 ToaAuthor: IkuProtagonist: NahoWord count: 3299 Three on ThreeAuthor: Makuta Matata aka Knuckles ChaotixProtagonist: HydraxonWord count: 3,943 words 3,981 words (including dividers) The Mentor's WayAuthor: MerseryProtagonist: IhuWord count: 4661 ProtectorAuthor: Colt McCoy & J. MascioliProtagonist: Toa LhikanWord count: 1,278 Dragon*Author: Willess12Protagonist: MavrahWord count: 1129 CasualtiesAuthor: Toa JalokimProtagonist: NidhikiWord Count: 1,168 PredatorsAuthor: ToasylarProtagonist: ReysaWord count: 2913 Belief*Author: Dual MatrixProtagonist: BotarWord count: 707 Legends of Lhii*Author: YioProtagonist: LhikanWord count: 4340 Teacher*Author:TikiturboProtagonist:JovanWord count:2,498 Certainty*Author: Baron Von NebulaProtagonist: Makuta IcaraxWord Count: 5,229 Invasion*Author: Lewa KromProtagonist: MatoroWord count: 2310 http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=7745BrothersAuthor: DeltaStrikerProtagonist: JovanWord Count: 1,535 Title: Hunter's FollyProtagonist: GorastWord Count: 4,713 (not counting the title and trivia)Author: Felix Dzerzhinsky Title: The First HunterAuthor: Emissary to the VoidProtagonist: AncientWord count: 3,655 (including title and dividers) The Unknown TuragaAuthor: ZippyWharrgarblProtagonist: KodanWord count: 1212 Memento VivereAuthor: InfraredProtagonist: ReysaWord count: 2,594 The JournalAuthor: ClickProtagonist: ReysaWord Count: 2,699 Title: Dawning ValorAuthor: DoomIgnikaProtagonist: LhikanWord Count: 5,912 (including dividers) Edited November 29, 2012 by fishers64 Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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