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Dark709

Soran

King Lehvak

Gerlicky

Vataki Teridax

Feline Oneker

Terton the Many

Blade Titan 974

Edited June 8, 2014 by Terra Nuva

FrozenFlash · July 18, 2012

It's a nice introduction. The characters are well introduced except the Lerahk who randomly appeared from no where. Also, I'm not quite sure how Macku ended up there though.

Edited July 18, 2012 by FF Ice Master

Terra Nuva · July 18, 2012

It's a nice introduction. The characters are well introduced except the Lerahk who randomly appeared from no where. Also, I'm not quite sure how Macku ended up there though.

Thanks.Yeah Lerahk was supposed to be random. But Macku isn't the Macku from metru Nui. It's supposed to be a common name. (Even though that doesn't happen in Bionicles)

Edited July 18, 2012 by Terra Nuva

previnyl · July 18, 2012

Not a bad introduction; nothing's really wrong with the series, it's just a very generic introduction. But it's hard to gauge a series based on the first comic, so I'll keep an eye on this series.

Terra Nuva · July 18, 2012

A New Comic

Macku goes for a new mask while Krazon plots to destroy Terra Nuva. Part 1

The Venom · July 18, 2012

I see this series has potential.While I'm not a big fan of the kit choice (almost everyone uses Chimoru nowadays =P), your graphic style isn't too bad.You have some decent looking backgrounds that do alright with the sprites, and it looks like you're doing okay with GIMP effects. The humor isn't too bad either. Kinda random, but it still works.This is a pretty good start for you, and I'll be looking here to see how you do through time. =D-V-

Terra Nuva · July 19, 2012

Not a bad introduction; nothing's really wrong with the series, it's just a very generic introduction. But it's hard to gauge a series based on the first comic, so I'll keep an eye on this series.

Thanks for viewing :biggrin:

I see this series has potential.While I'm not a big fan of the kit choice (almost everyone uses Chimoru nowadays =P), your graphic style isn't too bad.You have some decent looking backgrounds that do alright with the sprites, and it looks like you're doing okay with GIMP effects. The humor isn't too bad either. Kinda random, but it still works.This is a pretty good start for you, and I'll be looking here to see how you do through time. =D-V-

Thank you very much. I will try not to disappoint

The New Mask Part 2 Edited July 20, 2012 by Terra Nuva

-Absorba- · July 21, 2012

Ah, self deprication. Always a nice thing. :)Yeah, not looking so bad!

Terra Nuva · July 21, 2012

The New Mask Part 3

Find out if Krazons plan will work

Introducing PGS FrozenFlash

Introducing the first PGS FF. Can he survive the randomness?

FrozenFlash · July 21, 2012

Haha. The random things happening are actually pretty entertaining. I wonder if the comic actually has a place in the story though. Now hopefully, I can survive the randomness.

Terra Nuva · July 23, 2012

New Comic

Family Members

Terra Nuva · July 25, 2012

It's Alive

So, It's back

FrozenFlash · July 25, 2012

It's Alive
So, It's back

Something good is going to happen. I like this! It's great on how it makes me wonder what's going to happen in the next comic.

Axilus Prime · July 25, 2012

An excellent positioning of Lerahk in comic 4, great work. It was funny, and evidently he needs to make more instantaneous masks.Now that is a lot of randomness, but it was well-positioned and used as a plot device. (Sort of.) Not much to do there? High standards indeed.WAIT, LERAHK'S FAMILY?! WE'RE ALL DOOMED.Aw, wanted to see Lerahk's family. Still, that's quite a suspenseful comic...

Terra Nuva · July 26, 2012

An excellent positioning of Lerahk in comic 4, great work. It was funny, and evidently he needs to make more instantaneous masks.Now that is a lot of randomness, but it was well-positioned and used as a plot device. (Sort of.) Not much to do there? High standards indeed.WAIT, LERAHK'S FAMILY?! WE'RE ALL DOOMED.Aw, wanted to see Lerahk's family. Still, that's quite a suspenseful comic...

Thanks for the positive review. I hope to improve everything in the future :biggrin:

One Final AttemptWill we see Lerahks family this time?

Axilus Prime · July 26, 2012

Whoa, is that Makuta or something? Avak's weapon might work...but can a Matoran lift it? XDSo there is a less generic reason for him wanting him dead. Great job there. And that can't be good...first the mask is alive, then he's gonna put it on?Another great comic.

Terra Nuva · July 26, 2012

Your Here

All cliffhangers will be resolved in the next comic

Edited July 26, 2012 by Terra Nuva

Axilus Prime · July 26, 2012

Now that is just cool. A defense program of some sort in a toybox! For a simple comic like this, you could have done with some closeups and maybe a shot of the inside of his brain. But, oh well. Awesome anyway.

Terra Nuva · July 26, 2012

Yeah. I thought about that. But the next comic is going to be massive, so I am trying to make small fillers just to keep people wondering. Then I will do some close ups and end all of the cliffhangers.

Terra Nuva · July 27, 2012

Filler-

Boring

Just a filler until the next Comic (Comic 10)

Axilus Prime · July 27, 2012

So, FF really is bored that much. XDI thought that was a one-time only joke.

Terra Nuva · July 27, 2012

Preview-

Revelations

This is just a minor preview of the big Comic #10. Hope you like it

Terra Nuva · July 28, 2012

Revelations

At last, the epic comic #10 is here.

What will happen?

Read it, and find out

Axilus Prime · July 29, 2012

Wow, huge comic. That mind control mask is stronger than its creator...wow!Was that a Batman reference when he hung from the ceiling? I know what the sword is a reference to...lol.Wow, Gavla just saved your life? The way he did it was epic for a comic.And then...wow. Looks like a Comic Villain is actually worthy of his villainship for once!So SeeKay is the one who's being controlled? Oh no.By the way, I see you picked my Mahri Form. It was unexpected, but cool. I'm guessing you picked it because it has shading?

Terra Nuva · July 29, 2012

Yes, that is exactly why I picked it. I might actually six shade one of your other forms of I have time.Yup Batman reference.Glad you liked it. I wish my panels were big enough for your "true" form. Maybe in 2.0 lol.

FrozenFlash · July 29, 2012

I like that surprise appearance by Gavla. Also, I think we could say good bye to Seekay and the Rahkshi.

The Venom · July 29, 2012

Huh. That last comic was... Interesting. Gavla's appearance was definitely far from expected.I appreciate the fact you're doing plot-driven comics, Terra! The style reminds me of my first comics.Since it seems you're looking to changing some things in your next season, I would recommend working on the text.I suggest making it a bit smaller so it fits in the panels more easily, and make sure none of it gets cut off from the panels and that it doesn't blend in with the backgrounds. This will make your story-telling a lot easier for yourself and the readers. Trust me.Good work overall.-V-

Terra Nuva · July 30, 2012

I like that surprise appearance by Gavla. Also, I think we could say good bye to Seekay and the Rahkshi.

InvestigationWhy don't you read this

Huh. That last comic was... Interesting. Gavla's appearance was definitely far from expected.I appreciate the fact you're doing plot-driven comics, Terra! The style reminds me of my first comics.Since it seems you're looking to changing some things in your next season, I would recommend working on the text.I suggest making it a bit smaller so it fits in the panels more easily, and make sure none of it gets cut off from the panels and that it doesn't blend in with the backgrounds. This will make your story-telling a lot easier for yourself and the readers. Trust me.Good work overall.-V-

I intended to do story comics from the beginning because I just love media with a good story.I will definitely change the text in 2.0 and thanks for the advice ;D

FrozenFlash · July 30, 2012

The way Seekay got revived reminds me of Darth Vader. Was that intended? Also, is Krazon really that small? That looks a lot like TNG's leg in panel 22. Great comic by the way.

Axilus Prime · July 30, 2012

Oh wow. Didn't expect that to happen to Seekay. Looks like he's getting roasted by a Toa instead. Overall good comic, lots of action.

Terra Nuva · July 30, 2012

PIELet's see if you can find the homage in this oneand BTW the reason Krazon does not move in the last 3 panels is because his feet are melted to the floor.

Axilus Prime · July 31, 2012

Awesome how I forced him to give me pie. HOW DARE HE STEAL IT HYAAAAAAA--And yes, awesome reference. Especially since I love TF. Starscream! XDAnd it seems I just OWNED everyone! Thanks for putting that in!

Toatapio Nuva · July 31, 2012

I read the comics and here's what I think:The graphics are great and solid. Clean panels and clear backgrounds are always a good thing. And although the Chimoru kit is used by many, it doesn't matter. It's a good-looking and easy-to-use kit, after all.Then there is the content. There is clearly a unified story binding all the comics together, meaning it's not just a series of random comic strips. It works well. I found Lerahk and the two main characters (Terra and the EVIL GUY) a little too similar to Dark709's characters. I didn't notice it until Lerahk came in. Also, Macku is a lot like Zacku. It's not a serious thing, really, but you might want to add some unique personal traits to the characters and create totally original ones (not that there wouldn't be any of those even now). It's good you don't have too many characters, though. Too many characters could make reading the comics hard. The amount of characters you are using seems to be sufficient enough.There's definately action and drama going on with these comics. Kind of clashes with the humor some times, but sure makes the series more interesting in a way. The mask plot was good, and I especially like the fact it was not abandoned after the three comics detailing its birth. It was funny how Macku wasn't affected by it while the other guy was.As for the humor, I think the dramatic events and the epic plotline sort of restrict it. It's all about a matter of taste, though. More epicness than humor might work as well. If you want to add to the humor though, I suggest you develop your characters further and try basing the jokes more on their personalities and their differences. Not sure if you understand what I mean, this might be confusing to read and comprehend. :PAll in all: The graphics are fantastic, the plotline works (it's kind of fast-paced now, you might want to slow things down a bit depending on how much you want to exite the reader). There is plenty of humor based on randomness, you could try different kind of humor as well, just to flesh the comics out. Still, it's not bad now. By putting more depth into the characters and creating new and original ones (you could use someone you know as a template for a new comic character) you could make the comics even better.Besides the few things I tried to give constructive criticism about, these comics are not bad at all. Very interesting, actually. Keep up the good work and make more.

Terra Nuva · July 31, 2012

I read the comics and here's what I think:The graphics are great and solid. Clean panels and clear backgrounds are always a good thing. And although the Chimoru kit is used by many, it doesn't matter. It's a good-looking and easy-to-use kit, after all.Then there is the content. There is clearly a unified story binding all the comics together, meaning it's not just a series of random comic strips. It works well. I found Lerahk and the two main characters (Terra and the EVIL GUY) a little too similar to Dark709's characters. I didn't notice it until Lerahk came in. Also, Macku is a lot like Zacku. It's not a serious thing, really, but you might want to add some unique personal traits to the characters and create totally original ones (not that there wouldn't be any of those even now). It's good you don't have too many characters, though. Too many characters could make reading the comics hard. The amount of characters you are using seems to be sufficient enough.There's definately action and drama going on with these comics. Kind of clashes with the humor some times, but sure makes the series more interesting in a way. The mask plot was good, and I especially like the fact it was not abandoned after the three comics detailing its birth. It was funny how Macku wasn't affected by it while the other guy was.As for the humor, I think the dramatic events and the epic plotline sort of restrict it. It's all about a matter of taste, though. More epicness than humor might work as well. If you want to add to the humor though, I suggest you develop your characters further and try basing the jokes more on their personalities and their differences. Not sure if you understand what I mean, this might be confusing to read and comprehend. :PAll in all: The graphics are fantastic, the plotline works (it's kind of fast-paced now, you might want to slow things down a bit depending on how much you want to exite the reader). There is plenty of humor based on randomness, you could try different kind of humor as well, just to flesh the comics out. Still, it's not bad now. By putting more depth into the characters and creating new and original ones (you could use someone you know as a template for a new comic character) you could make the comics even better.Besides the few things I tried to give constructive criticism about, these comics are not bad at all. Very interesting, actually. Keep up the good work and make more.

Everything you mentioned is valid and I get what you are saying 100%Here,s the thing about Dark709's characters. I originally started making comics 2 years ago and I think I might have been kinda obsessed with Dark709 so I might have based some characters on his comics (originally I had like 10 more characters) so when I picked up making comics again, I took a few characters that seemed promising and used them in the comics now. (originally the comics were almost like your old comics but maybe a lot worse

). I only just realized that I and Krazon (evil one) look like Dark709's characters switched (Sir Pickles is red and Dark is infected). I don't think that was originally planned (I don't remember). Originally SeeKay was a character named Chibi Killer who hated chibi style sprites. (very shallow, as was SeeKay that's why I killed him off). I had Onepu, Vakama (who was a mentally deranged turaga obsessed with fire, and a whole host of Krazon clones. Originally this was going to be a humor series with an epic in between seasons but I decided I liked epic better and I will try to develop the characters more, which is one of my problems. I tend to develop the two main characters more than supporting main characters.The only big problem that I think I have is I have a hard time slowing down the pace. I find that I have great stories in my head but after the comic is finished It is way sped up. I need to work on that because I am planning a huge improvement in the comics soon (very soon). Thank you for the critique and I really love the constructive criticism from you and Venom because it is really helping me improve. oh, and thanks for being my inspiration LOL

Terra Nuva is Deadoh and here is a new comic Edited July 31, 2012 by Terra Nuva

Toatapio Nuva · July 31, 2012

I read the comics and here's what I think:The graphics are great and solid. Clean panels and clear backgrounds are always a good thing. And although the Chimoru kit is used by many, it doesn't matter. It's a good-looking and easy-to-use kit, after all.Then there is the content. There is clearly a unified story binding all the comics together, meaning it's not just a series of random comic strips. It works well. I found Lerahk and the two main characters (Terra and the EVIL GUY) a little too similar to Dark709's characters. I didn't notice it until Lerahk came in. Also, Macku is a lot like Zacku. It's not a serious thing, really, but you might want to add some unique personal traits to the characters and create totally original ones (not that there wouldn't be any of those even now). It's good you don't have too many characters, though. Too many characters could make reading the comics hard. The amount of characters you are using seems to be sufficient enough.There's definately action and drama going on with these comics. Kind of clashes with the humor some times, but sure makes the series more interesting in a way. The mask plot was good, and I especially like the fact it was not abandoned after the three comics detailing its birth. It was funny how Macku wasn't affected by it while the other guy was.As for the humor, I think the dramatic events and the epic plotline sort of restrict it. It's all about a matter of taste, though. More epicness than humor might work as well. If you want to add to the humor though, I suggest you develop your characters further and try basing the jokes more on their personalities and their differences. Not sure if you understand what I mean, this might be confusing to read and comprehend. :PAll in all: The graphics are fantastic, the plotline works (it's kind of fast-paced now, you might want to slow things down a bit depending on how much you want to exite the reader). There is plenty of humor based on randomness, you could try different kind of humor as well, just to flesh the comics out. Still, it's not bad now. By putting more depth into the characters and creating new and original ones (you could use someone you know as a template for a new comic character) you could make the comics even better.Besides the few things I tried to give constructive criticism about, these comics are not bad at all. Very interesting, actually. Keep up the good work and make more.
Everything you mentioned is valid and I get what you are saying 100%Here,s the thing about Dark709's characters. I originally started making comics 2 years ago and I think I might have been kinda obsessed with Dark709 so I might have based some characters on his comics (originally I had like 10 more characters) so when I picked up making comics again, I took a few characters that seemed promising and used them in the comics now. (originally the comics were almost like your old comics but maybe a lot worse ). I only just realized that I and Krazon (evil one) look like Dark709's characters switched (Sir Pickles is red and Dark is infected). I don't think that was originally planned (I don't remember). Originally SeeKay was a character named Chibi Killer who hated chibi style sprites. (very shallow, as was SeeKay that's why I killed him off). I had Onepu, Vakama (who was a mentally deranged turaga obsessed with fire, and a whole host of Krazon clones.Originally this was going to be a humor series with an epic in between seasons but I decided I liked epic better and I will try to develop the characters more, which is one of my problems. I tend to develop the two main characters more than supporting main characters.The only big problem that I think I have is I have a hard time slowing down the pace. I find that I have great stories in my head but after the comic is finished It is way sped up. I need to work on that because I am planning a huge improvement in the comics soon (very soon).Thank you for the critique and I really love the constructive criticism from you and Venom because it is really helping me improve. oh, and thanks for being my inspiration LOL Terra Nuva is Deadoh and here is a new comic

I understand the Dark thing, I remember being possessed by his comics as well. The movie had... too much similarities with Dark's first one. :PHaving an epic comic series with some humor in between works just as well as the other way around, so embrace it!

That way you can concentrate on the adventure and the plot a lot more. But I see you've already done that.@ the new comic: Noo, you're dead!

Axilus Prime · July 31, 2012

HOLY SLAG. I didn't see that coming. Though with the manner of your death...BRING YOU BACK WITH THE MATRIX OF LEADERSHIP--Oh wait. That'd only work on TNG.

Terra Nuva · July 31, 2012

HOLY SLAG. I didn't see that coming. Though with the manner of your death...BRING YOU BACK WITH THE MATRIX OF LEADERSHIP--Oh wait. That'd only work on TNG.

Hahah Lol.KrazonThis is part of a new series based on each character.

Axilus Prime · August 1, 2012

Wow, Krazon's a lot stronger than I thought. I wonder what Krazon will do now that his one dream and aspiration was stolen..XD

Terra Nuva · August 1, 2012

Yes, Krazon is extremely strong. He has been training for years but his plans are usually ruined so he does not try very hard.That will play into the story as the only thing that he has driving him is his wanting to destroy you ;PSeeKayThree Comics in one day....I have too much time LOL

Axilus Prime · August 1, 2012

Not much to say here, but it does provide some insight. He has such a sad life..

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