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#281 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jan 13 2013 - 08:56 PM

Don't worry, I always explain myself.

 

The Awakening: Epilogue

 

So, we finally journey into the realm of season 2.0. I can't wait to start and show you guys some of the improvements. I hope you enjoy, and I hope to continue to improve. What's really awesome is, this is the end of the 1.0 and also my 300th post.


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#282 Online Axilus Prime

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Posted Jan 13 2013 - 09:59 PM

Wow, an even 300 on a season finale! That really clears things up, though i can't say I agree with his methods. Especially since Macku's great at keeping secrets.

 

Something feels strange about his reason for wanting Zorax dead being a trick of his Observer, but maybe things will get more straightforward, and there could be interesting action/character stuff. 

 

Overall, a great finale. A bit cliffhanger-y, but then again that's my technique all the time, can't blame you. It has enough solidity to balance out the cliffhanger anyway. 


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#283 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jan 13 2013 - 11:21 PM

Changes are already taking effect. The new name for the series is Corruption. Along with a name, is a date for Season 2.0 Check the front page, or look here, (According to my Computer, it's just shy of the 500kb limit)

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#284 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 08:33 PM

Welcome everyone to the launch of 2.0. Some of the changes include:

 

-A simpler Font for text

-Resized panels for better reading

-A new Logo

-A new Name

-New recolored sprites

-A more connected story

-More characters 

-Regular Updates (hopefully)

-And Much more

 

Here is the first Comic

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Isolation

 

Enjoy


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#285 Offline Leraku

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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 08:39 PM

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Looking good! Speaking of looking, I'm looking forward to seeing how this comic progresses. It should be very interesting.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 08:55 PM

Almost makes me want to smash through the walls and carry you to a bunker to figure things out.
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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 09:29 PM

Great beginning to season 2. I'll address my views of the comic in sections.

 

The comic itself was great. The thing I liked most of all about this specific comic is that you don't really have to know that much from season one to understand it. The flashback helped identify that specific important part which was helpful. It also added mystery as to what Terra Nuva actually knows. I think that the comic was perfect with size and details. It gave a good, small portion of the beginning of the story, setting up future events, and included a lot of details. Great work regarding story so far.

 

The graphics were quite nice in this comic although there are some things I want to address. The background you used, whether you created it or not, was a great choice. It's simple but it makes sense. The panel size is nice, not too big not too small. I like the simpler text, it looks good. I'm not sure how you'll work with it in certain situations such as when the background is the same color as the text but I'm sure you already have something planned. The flashback looked a little off but it was still recognizable as a flashback. The only reason it did was only because there aren't two Terra Nuva's. I think maybe adding something to the flashbacks might make it more recognizable such as desaturating the panel or adding a a white glow around the edges of the inside. This isn't necessary but I recommend doing something.

The main thing I am having an issue with is the reflection, it just doesn't look right. The reasoning for this is because I don't feel like the reflection matches the texture your character is on. Terra's reflection is blurred which means that it isn't a mirror since most typical mirrors will not blur a reflection. This means that either the floor is translucent or very shiny. Most materials that fall under this category would not create a reflection as opaque as that which makes it look very odd. My suggestion is to work on reflections. The reflection looks good, its just too opaque, maybe lowering the opacity of the reflection will make it look a little better. Other than those tiny details the rest of the comic looks great. 

 

Anyway, good job on the comic and keep up the great work,

 

~Soran


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#288 Online Axilus Prime

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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 11:38 PM

Ouch. This is interesting...

 

 

I read all the interrogator's lines in the Agent Smith voice from the Matrix. XD

 

That really complicates things. 

 

Also, great work on the floor reflection. It does make the floor look a bit too shiny though.


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Posted Jan 20 2013 - 04:11 PM

As always, the graphics are excellent, and the panel format does indeed make the comic easier to read. 


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#290 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jan 21 2013 - 11:13 PM

Thank you for all the support guys. It really means alot to me and helps drive me to make more comics. Thank you Soran for the review, It helped alot. Also I will use a different shadow technique when I use a new panel. Thanks again guys.

 

Also, sorry Windrider. The size of the opening banner completely escaped my mind.

 

Without further ado,

 

The Game


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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 04:50 AM

That was epic and mysterious. Also, congratulations on not abandoning a serious comic series! I see too many get left to scrap.

 

Clearly Terra has some sort of hidden power...but I want to know exactly what and how much...

 

And the blue one...wondering who that is. And if it was a psychological game at all.

 

These are by far the most suspenseful comics I have ever read. Great work!


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#292 Offline Ptolemic

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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 02:08 PM

I like games.
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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 05:25 PM

I like games.

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Maybe so, but the game itself is in question.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Are you the one playing the game, or are you the game being played, as the game plays you?[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Even that game of your mind is relative to how you think about it.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]This is what comics can be good at implicating - if done well, they make you think. And you get more immersed into comics that make you think deeply.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#294 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jan 24 2013 - 06:32 PM

EDIT: Yeah this was complete bull, so I will post a new comic when I have time.

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Posted Mar 14 2013 - 11:43 AM

Wow, brutally murdered... Does that mean new PGSs? if so, COUNT ME IN!


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 09:48 PM

Well once again I apologize for the long leave of absence  I am getting a new computer, so it could be a little while for the next comic as well. However, thanks for sticking by me (I hope) even through my abandonment of you guys.

 

Knock Out


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 10:16 PM

Now that's cool. I definitely didn't expect Leraku to be the Agent.

 

The Director? Reminds me of Red vs Blue. Not a bad thing.

 

Lol. Need to black out.

 

You may have taken so long I'd forgotten you were still making comics, but your skill hasn't diminished a bit. Nice work.


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#298 Offline Captain Caboose

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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 10:45 PM

It looks very nice. The 2.0 is the aftermath of the Awaking which I still have not finished yet. It looks good, as far as I can tell. Can't wait to see more.


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Posted Mar 18 2013 - 05:24 AM

"Hey, this is crazy, and I just met you, but here's a kick to the face."
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Posted May 08 2013 - 10:23 PM

Dear Fans(I think you exist),

 

I am taking a temporary Hiatus(if you hadn't guessed already). I need more time to devote to my other projects, and I hate leaving loose ends here for people to wait for the next comics for months at a time. I believe I should be back up during the June-July period, so it won't be a long wait, but just long enough to keep anybody who may be wondering when the next comic comes out to understand the situation. I hate that I started the new season and then just stopped, and feel sorry for that to anybody who cares. Please accept my dearest apology, and know that when I return...you will see the best comics that I can possibly offer with my skill set. Thanks for following me. Your comments give em the strength to want to continue.

 

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#301 Offline Damaracx Caratas Xarian

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Posted May 10 2013 - 05:19 PM

"Hey, this is crazy, and I just met you, but here's a kick to the face."

[color=#ff0000;]XD.  Best parody ever.[/color]

 

[color=#a9a9a9;]I just started reading these and they're awesome.  Hopefully they'll take me a good time to read so that maybe, just maybe you'll come back before I'm finished.[/color]


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