Posted Jul 29 2012 - 10:17 PM
Alright guys- this was certainly an interesting epic to write. I felt the Bionicle-esque feeling from what came out of it, a great post-2010 plot. The three of you were the core storytellers- I've had about half a dozen plots running in my head this summer, and I was unsure of where everyone wanted to go. Mata Nui and Mazeka- I did have plans for them, but the last two chapters with Marendar becoming Karzahni's armor was a curveball.The choice of Matoran was interesting. Midak, Ahkmou, Galva, Velika, Balta, Dalu, Onepu, Vican. Midak, now he has been a fun character to write about. Was it ever in offical canon that he was blind?I personally picked Balta just to do that scene with the twin repellers. Why was Velika picked? And it was a little disappointing that the two teams just kind of met up- I would've thought that they would be secret for another few chapters. On your blog, dotcom, I do see what you mean for the climax simply just popping out; such is the pain of not being able to plan :PKarzahni was a shocker- I wouldve thought Takadox or someone alive. But bringing him back in that manner was a little weird, but it came out alright.I'm still up for "To Kill Salvation". V Lexaeus and Kakaru, are you in?Team Two!