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#41 Offline Velox

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Posted Jan 15 2013 - 03:23 AM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Theme #3:[/font]

 

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"](credit to 55555 for the image)[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Broken Mask[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Deadline: 11:59 PM PST on Monday, January 21st.[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Any interpretation of the theme is valid, but your entry must be a Bionicle story and it must adhere to the rules posted above.[/font]


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#42 Offline Karzhani the Utahraptor

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Posted Jan 18 2013 - 09:13 AM

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Theme: Broken MaskWord Count: 592 Link to Story and Title: Torn 


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Posted Jan 18 2013 - 12:32 PM

Just came up whith an awesome Idea, my story will be up soon.


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Posted Jan 18 2013 - 03:41 PM

Me too, it shall be done by today or tomorrow.

 

EDIT: Those it have to be in the story line or something that is still Bionicle related.


Edited by The Forgotten One, Jan 19 2013 - 12:15 PM.

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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:00 PM

It has to be in some way Bionicle related, though not necessarily in the storyline.


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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:11 PM

Okay, time for my custom Bionicle story.


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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:29 PM

[color=#000000;]Ok here is my story :)[/color]

 

Member Name: [color=#000080;]Pikiru[/color]

Theme: [color=#000080;]Broken Mask[/color]

Word Count: [color=#000080;]724[/color]

Link to Story and Title: Fractured Time


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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 02:35 PM

Member Name: Dual Matrix

Theme: Broken MaskWord Count: 476Link to Story and Title: Dreams of darkness


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Posted Jan 19 2013 - 07:18 PM

Member Name: The Forgotten One

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Word Count: 816

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Posted Jan 21 2013 - 05:34 PM

Second story yeey:Member Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Broken maskWord count 560Link to story and title Final Battle Reinvented
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Posted Jan 21 2013 - 09:48 PM

Member Name: Creep Of The Deep

Theme: Broken Mask

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Link to Story and Title: Friend


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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 09:28 PM

Man! Missed it. I had a good one too... Oh well. I'll just have to wait until the next one.


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What are we searching for? Are we searching for anything or just randomly surfing the internet? I did that once. I found this bionicle fan site called bzpower. Whoever made it had no decorating sense what so ever.


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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 09:45 PM

Oh, I thought I had another day. Oh well.


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#54 Offline Velox

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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 07:03 PM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Congratulations to Pikiru and his story "Fractured Time", winner of "Broken Mask"! [/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Honorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the Deep and "Torn" by Karzahni the Utahraptor.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=#000080;]Congrats, guys! And don't forget to check out the OTC contest which should be starting next Monday (apologies for taking a week off, but we're working on another project behind the scenes currently), as well as the next Bionicle contest which will take place in about three weeks. Thanks to everyone for entering![/color][/font]

 

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Edited by Velox, Jan 29 2013 - 06:49 PM.

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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 08:11 PM

What, no one told me when the contest ended. (Probably should've read the main page.) Oh well, there is next time.


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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 12:12 PM

[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Creep of the Deep[/color][/font]
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[font="'times new roman';"][color=#000080;]Honorable mention goes to "Friend" by Creep of the Deep [/color][/font]
OH.I never expected this really. Hoo boy, honorable mention. D: Sweet!Congratulations to Karzahni and Pikiru. :3

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Posted Feb 01 2013 - 03:52 PM

[color=#000080;]Oh wow I won! I can't believe it  :lol:[/color]

 

[color=#000080;]I only just found out just now (well actually 20 min ago, but still now-ish) [/color]

 

[color=#000080;]I dont know what to say, except thank you so much![/color]

 

[color=#000080;]It is truly an honour to have you guys think my story is good.[/color]

 

[color=#000080;]And congratulations to Creep (I quite liked your story, though it was sad) and Karzahni (I though you did a very good job doing Teridax and Takanuva), and everyone else that participated :happy:[/color]


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#58 Offline Velox

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Posted Feb 12 2013 - 07:33 PM

Really sorry for the delay on this, guys. I just completely forgot yesterday. But as promised, the next Bionicle FFFC is here:

 

Theme #4:

 

Posted ImageSurrender or RunDeadline: Monday, February 25th, by 11:59 PM PST.

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Posted Feb 16 2013 - 09:32 PM

Due to the forums going offline, the deadline is being extended until Monday, February 25th, by 11:59 PM PST. =]Posted Image
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Posted Feb 18 2013 - 09:35 AM

Member Name: TNTOSTheme: Surrender or RunWord count: 415Link to Story: The Final Answer-TNTOS-
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Posted Feb 18 2013 - 05:50 PM

Member Name: Dinobot Pahrak

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Posted Feb 18 2013 - 06:06 PM

Oops, forgot this bit. :P

 

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Posted Feb 18 2013 - 07:52 PM

Thank goodness for dead line extension. I'll post my short story Friday.


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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:13 PM

I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?
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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:26 PM

I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?
Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.Off topic: My minecraft modification is still running, I can't post there cause I save that spot for V1 tomorrow ::)

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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:51 PM

I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?

 

It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen.


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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 08:10 PM

I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?

Nah, you can paste your story in word or search on google:"Free word counter" and paste the story there, they'll both give you the exact amouth of words.Off topic: My minecraft modification is still running, I can't post there cause I save that spot for V1 tomorrow ::)
Thanks, that helped.

I guess I'll try this one. One question: Since I never wrote any stories on BZPower before how do I do a word count? Like, do I have to count every word?

 It depends where you write it. If you type your story into a program such as Microsoft Word, then you'll find that it'll do the word count for you automatically, which you can see down towards the bottom of the screen.
I don't use Microsoft Word a lot (I plan to write it down then typing it), but thanks for telling me.My story should be up by Saturday, by the way.

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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 09:01 PM

I still haven't written it yet, but I'll have it down before the deadline.


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Posted Feb 21 2013 - 05:11 PM

Member Name: Takua the Chronicler7

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Posted Feb 23 2013 - 03:53 PM

Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten One

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Link: Life

 

Member Name: Flaredrick: Forgotten One

Theme: Surrender or Run

Word Count: 952

Link: The Murder


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Posted Feb 24 2013 - 05:06 PM

Member Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 402Link: Let us rememberMember Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord Count: 370Link: One against a millionMember Name: Dual MatrixTheme: Surrender or RunWord count: 346Link: Suffocation

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Posted Feb 25 2013 - 06:57 PM

DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one.


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Posted Feb 25 2013 - 11:27 PM

I decided to be creative, and went with a Vahki pursuit. :P Glad to have entered!

 

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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 01:06 AM

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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 01:10 PM

DM, you are outnumbering my chances. And others as well. When is the time to turn another one.

 

 

Sorry dude, I just like writing and had three awesome ideas :)


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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 05:44 PM

I only had two, and I was just able to turn my second one in last night.


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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 10:17 PM

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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 10:22 PM

Isn't it a bit late for entries, as the deadline was yesterday?
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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 10:22 PM

Unfortunately, Baltarc, the deadline for "Surrender or Run" was yesterday, so we are no longer accepting entries. =/ Next Monday, however, a new contest should start in OTC, and two weeks after that another Bionicle one.Posted Image

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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 11:02 PM

Could I quickly edit my entry? I just realized I said Keelerahk (green Visorak) instead of Keerahk (white Vahki) *facepalm.* I thought I knew everything about Bionicle!


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