joev14 Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 (edited) Alright, so some of you may have seen this MOC I did awhile back, called the Storyteller. I made changes to him based off suggestions given by you guys, and gave him more straight feet (I used Glatorian neck parts instead of the Hordika neck parts), and i made his arms the same length. I decided to add him to my story, and he will be appearing at some point in the near future in Secrets of the Star. I also decided to give him a little group of followers. The two with black hips are guardsmen, and the one with the Volitek is a female character that I'm not sure how will work in with the story. Also, you're probably wondering why I'm calling them Tohunga, instead of Matoran. It is because in my book, Tohunga are a sort of super Matoran, kind of like a Turaga, except they've never been Toa. They have the ability to use their masks and directly channel their powers in small amounts.Front: http://www.brickshel...group_front.jpgBack: http://www.brickshel..._group_back.jpg Edited October 5, 2012 by joev14 Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Titan Sparta Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 They're great! The simplicity is very nice. And the name is a nice throwback. The use of silver Masks is good. For a little flair, I'd give them different weapons. Other than that very minor thing, they're excellent. Quote SUPPORT LEGO HUNGER GAMES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phovos Posted October 6, 2012 Share Posted October 6, 2012 (edited) They're very cute! I'm not sure about the silver masks though. I think they are too shiny for them. If you had grey masks, I think they'd look nicer.Are you the only person who posts in this section? Edited October 6, 2012 by Phovos the Raptor Quote Click here to read The Bohrok-Kal's Ramblings! Yes, I know there were 7 months between the last two episodes but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joev14 Posted October 6, 2012 Author Share Posted October 6, 2012 (edited) They're very cute! I'm not sure about the silver masks though. I think they are too shiny for them. If you had grey masks, I think they'd look nicer.Unfortunatley, I don't have any gray masks, and I actually kind of like the silver since it matches the shields.Are you the only person who posts in this section?See, most MOCists have an average of about one or two MOCs per month, whereas I post usually 2-4 every week. So to answer your question, yes, I am the only person who posts in this section Edited October 6, 2012 by joev14 Quote My Revamp MOCs (flickr) (Brickshelf) My Short Stories The Last Memories | Birth of the Kal | Key of the Codrex Web of Karzahni | The Depths Below | Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onewa7 Posted October 17, 2012 Share Posted October 17, 2012 I love how they look. They're pretty simple, yet amazing, and bright-coloured. The silver masks and flame pieces are a great addition. Quote Onewa7, Encountering Protodermis! I accept PBZP requests! If you want one, PM me the details...PBZPs in the Archives: A B C C F H K L N P P S T New Forums PBZPs: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T T U V W X Y ZIf a letter is already taken, I can always do a PZBP, I'll just add another to the list. Blue= done, Red= taken and in progress, Green= coming soon.------------Also check My Bshelf My comedy: Bionicle Adventures. Part 1 in the Archives. Part 2 here. I accept guest stars requests. Chapter 12 is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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