Master Inika Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 (edited) Review for What Can Be Lost. Constructive criticism only. Edited October 15, 2011 by Master Inika Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allanon Loke Posted October 15, 2011 Share Posted October 15, 2011 Oooh, a mysterious, ancient treasure hunt. Good prologue. It's nice to have the main characters at least introduced in the beginning. Nice start. Quote My New Story Topic Dynamics - my new epic. Chapter 1 up. "I am sorry for that, though I have never heard a smell called rude." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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