thelonewander Posted October 15, 2012 Share Posted October 15, 2012 This is the review topic for my first epic. Comments welcome.Link to epic: Here Quote War...war never changes.We crawl, on our knees for you,under, a sky no longer blue, we sweat, all day long for you.But we sow, seeds to see us though,cause sometimes dreams just don't come true, we wait, to reap what we are due.-Rise Against, Re-Education (through Labor) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Shawn_Legend Posted October 17, 2012 Share Posted October 17, 2012 (edited) Finished reading your epic like I said and there are a few things I want to point out1) I loved the way the story was told, The Lone Wanderer's point of view.2) I also loved your other characters being in the story, and while I read their bio's, this gave me a different point of view. I got to see Blake and Lexie through someone elses eyes.3)I also very much appreciate their interaction, they feel like real people having a conversation about a group name among other things. Good job.All In all I appreciated this story greatly. ;-) It was a nice read before I go to work. Keep it up man. Have a good one! Edited October 17, 2012 by The_Shawn_Legend Quote Close enough to my Shawn is...Zelos Wilder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flex Lord Splash Posted October 17, 2012 Share Posted October 17, 2012 Seems like it has potential. Heh I think its cool that you decided to write an epic that takes place in the world of my RP. Jut gives me a cool feeling, I never thought about writing an epic in our X-Men universe, tis a cool idea. Quote BZP-RPG Profiles Marvel Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thelonewander Posted October 18, 2012 Author Share Posted October 18, 2012 Thanks for the comments guys! I'm going to try and post a chapter at the end of the week., most likely on Friday, if all goes to plan. Quote War...war never changes.We crawl, on our knees for you,under, a sky no longer blue, we sweat, all day long for you.But we sow, seeds to see us though,cause sometimes dreams just don't come true, we wait, to reap what we are due.-Rise Against, Re-Education (through Labor) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trad Posted October 18, 2012 Share Posted October 18, 2012 (edited) Oh my. What an epic epic. (That's deliberate.)I am impressed, and wondered why I didn't pick up the courage to post mine.And thanks for making me wanting to post one too. Edited October 18, 2012 by TradTheMentalist Quote "Wer Traumt?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thelonewander Posted October 20, 2012 Author Share Posted October 20, 2012 Second Chapter is now out.Link: here Quote War...war never changes.We crawl, on our knees for you,under, a sky no longer blue, we sweat, all day long for you.But we sow, seeds to see us though,cause sometimes dreams just don't come true, we wait, to reap what we are due.-Rise Against, Re-Education (through Labor) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Shawn_Legend Posted October 20, 2012 Share Posted October 20, 2012 Just finished chapter 2, nice on their lives. I like reading about what they did I can also relate to (at least trying) To Learn some Elvish lol. Quote Close enough to my Shawn is...Zelos Wilder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thelonewander Posted October 27, 2012 Author Share Posted October 27, 2012 third chapter out now. Link: Here Quote War...war never changes.We crawl, on our knees for you,under, a sky no longer blue, we sweat, all day long for you.But we sow, seeds to see us though,cause sometimes dreams just don't come true, we wait, to reap what we are due.-Rise Against, Re-Education (through Labor) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Shawn_Legend Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 Finished chapter 3 this was a good one, now we are starting to see why he is the wanderer. We got to view his young life, now to see his adventures. Quote Close enough to my Shawn is...Zelos Wilder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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