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#1 Offline Loganto

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Posted Oct 19 2012 - 06:48 PM

UNITY. DUTY, AND RAISIN BRAN

Follow the toa and there jurney to Epic as this all new series kicks off with a laugh!

(WARNING: this comic is totes random and is incredibly cute looking)

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The one word of awsome

Lewa and cheetoes

Tak & Mak look alike

Fourth wall

Fourth wall P2

Fourth wall P3

Fourth wall P4

Fourth Wall P5

New comics I do this

Sagas I do this


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#2 Offline -Absorba-

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Posted Oct 19 2012 - 08:44 PM

Aw... cute art style!I'll be checking on it, but you've set a pretty good first impression as of now.
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#3 Offline Loganto

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Posted Oct 19 2012 - 09:36 PM

Why thank you good sir! come again!
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#4 Offline Loganto

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Posted Oct 20 2012 - 03:58 PM

NEW COMIC
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Posted Oct 20 2012 - 07:02 PM

Man, Lewa really wants to really screw them up, doesn't he?Though I do wonder how panel destruction leads to vaporization.
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#6 Offline Loganto

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Posted Oct 20 2012 - 07:46 PM

Yes, but this isn't all. prepare for the next ep of fourth wall!NEW COMIC!

Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Oct 20 2012 - 07:50 PM.

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Posted Oct 21 2012 - 03:30 PM

New of the comicness!I go beyond the fourth wall! FEAR ME! MWA HA HA!

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Posted Oct 21 2012 - 09:22 PM

I really love your art style. Great Job.
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Posted Oct 22 2012 - 03:28 PM

Thank you Terra nuva. I try. ; )
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Posted Oct 27 2012 - 04:52 PM

The drawings are nice. And I can see that you're trying to go for a different comic-reading-format, which is cool it's always good to be original. It's not the best way to do it. I'm still trying to read it left to right instead of right to left at a downward angle. I don't have a suggestion for an alternative, but maybe try something else.
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#11 Offline Loganto

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Posted Oct 28 2012 - 09:11 PM

Well, Outside of the fourth wall can be tough to read sometimes! Dont worry, though. They are going to be back in place soon.I hope.
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Posted Oct 31 2012 - 05:46 PM

The first two fourth wall comics were reallt well done. I like how you drew it. Especially how it faded out a little at the end.The others were confusing to read. I know what you were going for, but it ended up more annoying than anything."I feel a *disturbance... someone broke my face plant record!" That was really funny. I laughed at that.I like your art style too. Also, check your spelling every now and then :)

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#13 Offline Loganto

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Posted Nov 02 2012 - 02:54 PM

Sorry about that! I'm thinking of removing text and typing instead. Thoughts?
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#14 Offline Loganto

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Posted Nov 08 2012 - 04:39 PM

New comic up guys! enjoy! sometimes I even go Behind the outside! wish the toa luck.
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#15 Offline Katoris

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Posted Nov 25 2012 - 02:53 AM

That Fourth wall breaking there is pretty bad.

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#16 Offline Taka Nuvia

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Posted Mar 01 2013 - 08:11 AM

(So since you said you might come back to those again someday I thought it would not harm to give you a small review of the comics so far. Hope it's okay and stuff... ^^)

 

When I first clicked on the topic to check out the comics, something I immediately enjoyed was the art style. The high level of abstraction, lack of feet and general sock-puppet style of appearance makes the characters incredibly endearing. You could also say cute. Same goes for the expressions, which too are very cartoonish and abstracted, yet likeable.

The colouring is sublte, almost a bit too sublte IMO; more vibrant colours would probably suit the comedic nature of your comics a bit better.* You use a scanner, that's good. I would suggest turning down the contrast a bit though, so that it all looks a bit less grainy. (also, *hinthinttutorialhint* =P)

As for redibility, using only capital letters usually helps a lot, and flows better with the rest of the comics than digitally adding the text. (at least it's that way for me ^^")

 

Humor's fine, it's random but not too random. :)

 

There's one last thing I'd like to comment on, and that's the layout, particularly of the latest "Fourth Wall"- comics. Normally the "rule" is that "if you have to number your panels something's wrong", but  I guess I know what you were going for. However the latest ones were just... incredibly confusing. Of course, in a way that does make sense, with the fourth wall broken and stuff. Maybe you could make the numbers stand out more? Like, in colour or something. :shrugs: It would make finding the next panel to read a bit easier ^^

 

Overall I've enjoyed these so far, and would like to read more if you ever get back to them! :3

 

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Posted Mar 01 2013 - 07:27 PM

I am currently working on an actual kit for these. that way I can get back to them faster.


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Posted Mar 01 2013 - 07:53 PM

Hey Loganto, I never knew you had these comics as well. These were quite funny, especially the Takanuva and Makuta one.
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Posted Mar 05 2013 - 11:51 PM

They really do look alike though.They really do look alike though.
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